~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

Is thread mein ham apney zaati likhey huwey ashaar (ya qitaat) sey silsaley ko aagey bharhaein gey. Pehla shair mera:

Zakhm huwey hain taaza keh ibtidaa bahar ki hai
aey dil zabt karna! yeh saza bahar ki hai

next shair: Yey sey

[Enigmatic]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

:rose Yae dil nay kissko yaad kiya mossam.e.barsaat main
Chashm-e-Haya ka aks hay meri chashm-e-Naz main:rose

Noon

[hayaa_n]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

:rose Nigaho'n main hain posheeda teri nazro'n kay afsaney
Mujhay jo jaan'na chahay meri nazro'n ko pehchaney

Yeh

[Enigmatic]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Yae wassl.e.assl mairay mowla ki ataa
main razi ba razaa, marzee-e-khuda:rose


Alif

[Masood]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Is qadar tanhaee hai hamarey nawah mein keh ham
khud hi sey poochhtey hain, hangama kyun barpa nahin

Noon

[shummu]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

naseehat hameiN kar rahaa hai woh naaSeH
sadaa umr jiskii KharaaboN meiN guzrii

Ye

[Enigmatic]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Yae dard kabhi raaz.e.nihaan reh nahi sakta
go zabt bhee karta rahay beemar.e.muhabbat

[Enigmatic]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

next

Tay say

[Masood]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Teri yaad ney kiya hai dil ko beqrar bohat
tujhey bhool jana bhi hai issey dushwar bohat

Tey again

[shummu]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

taras khaayaa hai tanhaaii pe merii aaj ye kis ne
ye merii raah meN aaNkheN bichhaye kaun baiThaa hai

Ye se

[Masood]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Yaad jo aaya ik waqeya to zakhmo key munh khul gaey
itna baha khoon-e-jiggar, ilzaam sab dhul gaey
bhatkein phirein ham din bhar, sakoon milta to kyun ker
raat hui andheri, mai'kadon key dar khul gaey

Ye

[shummu]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

wah masood sahab..wah...!


Yaas meiN daaman-e-ummeed na chooTega kabhii
raat bhar karte hai’N hum noor-e-sahar kee baateiN

[Masood]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

wah masood sahab..wah...!


Yaas meiN daaman-e-ummeed na chooTega kabhii
raat bhar karte hai’N hum noor-e-sahar kee baateiN

Nawazish shummu ji ... noor-e-sehar ki batein bohat achha karti hain aap :p

Nam hain teri aankhein, afsurdah hai mera dil kyun
na'umeedi kufr hai, ho gi rehmat ki baraan tu bhi dekh
agar koi tum sey poochhey to ussey kah dena Masood
aai na raas mujh ko yeh chiraghaan tu bhi dekh

Hey (do aankhon wali :p)

[najma]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

har har qadam pe jis ne diye haiN hazar gham
us fitna0gar ko bhool na jaaooN, to kya karooN
majma ansar najma
=====noon========

[Masood]

Re: ~ Shairana Bait Bazi ~

Noon sey...

Navishta-e-taqdeer hai yeh issey hans ker qabool kar lo
aaj jo khaee hai tum ney jo yaad woh thokar rakho

Wao