Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

[Gul]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Praying for your speedy recovery, ALLAH SWT aap jald hi beemari say nijaata ata farmayay AMEEN

:jazak:

[Gul]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

نگاہِ ناز یکایک یہ معذرت کیسی
جو ہم بُرے ہیں تو کس بات کا ازالہ ہے
بُہت دنوں میں یہ مجھ پر کُھلا کہ میں خود تھا
وہ کج کلاہ کہ جسے میں نے مار ڈالا ہے

[wafa_sadaatt]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

(MY OWN)

WO ANKHAIN BHI HAIN JIN MAIN BASTA KOE KHWAAB NAHIN
SEHRA MAIN JO KHIL SAKAY'' PAR AISA KOE GULAAB NAHIN
JANAA MERAY CHAMAN KE MITTI ABB BHI HAI NARM BUHAT
TERAY GHULSHAN KA SAMAA AAJ BHI SHADAAB NAHIN

by:Wafa_sadaat

[thefire1]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Bohat khoob Gul and Wafa,

AaNkhon main bas k dil main sama kar chalay gaye
Khuwaabida zindagi thee jaga kar chalay gaye
Ayay thay dil ki piyaas bhujhaanay k vaastay
Ek AAG si woh aur laga kar chalay gaye

[wafa_sadaatt]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Assalam-o-alikum!
shukriya meri poetry ko sarahnay k liey.. main new user hun iss forum pay even mujhy tou thread bhi banana nahin aata,,, meray paas apna likha hua buhat saa muaad hai jo main sub k saath share karna chahti hoon,,, kya aap mujhy bata saktay hain k mujhay sari malumat kahan say mil saktee hain ..ta k mujhay thread bananay aur kisi thread ka hissa bannay ka farq pata chal sakay.
mujhay profile bananay ke bhi samjh nahin aarahi...

[thefire1]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Walaikum Assalaam Wafa

Aaap ki shayeri ka mayar bohat aala hay aur waqayi qabil-e-tareef hay.... aap apni shayeri Naye shoura section main post kar sakti hain, khush rahyeh

[wafa_sadaatt]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

reply karnay k liey shukriya

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Zindagi

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Tere

Mujhay chand tere talab nahi
tere roshni bari duur hai
mujhay jis chiragh se pyaar tha
mera ghar ussi ne jala diya

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Word ' tere ' to mai ne apne shair me use nahi kiya hai :hhh:

[Gul]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)



Iss mein teri hai na ??
ossi ko mehvish nay likha :)

[Gul]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Tere

Mujhay chand tere talab nahi
tere roshni bari duur hai
mujhay jis chiragh se pyaar tha
mera ghar ussi ne jala diya

Ghar

[BANJARAH]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Wah g wah

[Gul]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

sar_faroshi ki tamanna ab hamaray dil mein hai
dekhnaa hai zor kitna bazoo-e-qatil mein hai
rah-rav-e-raah-e-muhabat rah na jaana raah mein
lazat-e-sahara_navardi duri-e-manzil mein hai


:guitar:

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Shairoun ki Barsaat :)

Muhabbat

Wisal Men An Kahy khadshay,judaai Zakhm deti hay
Sahi kehty hen Ahal,e dil Muhubbat dard huti hay ..!

my own