Musaddaq Ki Choice

[shahid_naman]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

awesome..:clap:
us shaks ko kuch bhi likh daloo ..mager shayed hi koi lafz aisa baan hoo jo sahi us ki zaat ki tashree kr sakeyy!....or yeh lafz na milna hi huamrey lya saza ban jata haii

:thmbup::thmbup::thmbup:
batoo ka jadoooooooooooo

[jia]

Re: Kabhi Yuh Bhi Aa Meri Aankh Mein

CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA

MERI AAWARGI NE MUJHKO AAWAARA BANA DAALA
BARA DILKASH BARA RANGEEN HAI YEH SHAHER KAHETE HAIN
YAHAN PAR HAIN HAZAARON GHAR GHARON MAIN LAUG RAHETE HAIN
MUJHE IS SHAHER NE GALION KA BANJAARA BANA DAALA
CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA
MAIN IS DUNIYA KO AKSAR DEKH KAR HERAAN HOTA HOON
NA MUJHSE BAN SAKA JHONKA SA HAR DIN RAAT ROTA HOON
KHUDAYEA TUNE KAISE YEH JAHAN SAARA BANA DAALA
CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA
MERE MAALIK MERA DIL KION TARAPTA HAI SULAGTA HAI
TERI MARZI TERI MARZI PE KIS KA ZOR CHALTA HAI
KISI KO GUL KISI KO TUNE ANGAARA BANA DAALA
CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA
YEH HI AAGHAAZ THA MERA YEH HI ANJAAM HONA THA
MUJHE BARBAAD HONA THA MUJHE NAKAAM HONA THA
MUJHE TAQDEER NE TAQDEER KA MAARA BANA DAALA
CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA
MERI AAWARGI NE MUJHKO AWARA BANA DAALA

CHAMAKTE CHAAND KO TOOTA HUA TAARA BANA DAALA

very nice poetry:rose
bohat acha likhty hain app
waisy batoon say nahi lgta k yeh sab app nay he likha hay:khi:

Aankhon ka rang, baat ka lehja badal gaya
woh shakhs aik shaam main kitna badal gaya
kuch din to mera aks raha ayeena naqsh
phir yoon huwa k khud mera chehra badal gaya
jab apnay apnay haal pay ham tum na reh sakay
to kiya huwaa jo ham say zamana badal gaya
kadmon talay jo ret bichi thi woh chal pari
us nay churaaya haath to sehra badal gaya
koi bhi cheez apni jageh par nahin rahi
jaatay hi aik shakhs kay kiya kiya badal gaya
ik sarkhoshi ki moj nay kaisay kiya kamal
wo be niaaz saara ka saara badal gaya
uth kar chala gaya koi wakfay kay darmiaan
parda utha to saara tamaasha badal gaya
hairat say saaray lafz usay dekhtay rahay
baaton main apni baat ko kaisay badal gaya
kehnay ko ik sehan main deewar hi bani
ghar ki fiza makaan ka naqsha hi badal gaya
shaayad wafa kay khel main uktaa gaya tha woh
manzil kay paas aakay jo rasta hi badal gaya
qayem kisi bhi haal pay dunyaa nahin rahi
tabeer kho gayee kabhi sapna badal gaya
manzar ka rang asal main saaya tha rang ka
jis nay usay jidhar say bhi dekha badal gaya
andar kay mosaamon ki khabar us ko ho gayee
us no bahaar naaz ka chehra badal gaya
aankhon main jitnay ashaq thay jugnoo say ban gaye
woh muskuraaya aur meri dunyaa badal gayee
apni gali main apna hi ghar dhoondtay hain log
amjad yeh kon shehar ka naqsha badal gaya

so nice bohat khobsoorati say app bdal gay hain:hehe:
very beautiful sharing:rose

Tujhay kya khabar
teri
yaad nay
mujhay kaisay kaisay
sata
dia

Kabhi khalwaton
mai hansa
dia
kabhi mehfilon mai
rula dia

Tere ishq mai kabhi
youn
hoa k
namaz apni qaza hoi

Teri aarzoo nay
kabhi kabhi
mujhay mere
rab say mila diya

very nice
simple
short but so beautiful
keep it up

Tumhain jana'an ijazat hay .......!

k inn tareek rahoon per
thakan si khud main paao to
andheroon say kabhi dil dool jaaay
thak si jaao to
meray jaltay lamhoon
meray kangal hathon say churakay apnay hathon ko
fiza ki naghmagi say tum na'ay geeton ko chun laina
haseen palkoon ki nokon per na'ay kuch khuwab bun laina
koi gar puch lay mera to us say zikr mat karna
meray jiwan ki jalti dupahar say baygarz hokar
tum apni chandni ratoon main jugnoo palti rehna
meri thanhayon ki wehshaton ki fiqr mat karna
tumhain ess ki ijazat hay
meray sub khat jala daina
meray tuhfoon ko darya main bahana ya dabadaina
meri her yaad ko dil say khurchna aur mitta dena
tumhain bilkul ijazat hay
mugar itni guzarish hay
agar aisa na ho jana'an

too acha hay .......

ab to smajh main bhi nahi aa rha k kia likhti jaoon.:khi:
really app ke poetry itni achi hay k mera dil to kr rha hay k hr aik poem ,ghazal,qitta or jo kuch bhi hr aik pr comments doon lakin smajh main he nahi aa rha k likhon kia:tauba
so nice poetry

Kabhi Yuh Bhi Aa Meri Aankh Mein,

Ke Meri Nazar Ko Khabar Na Ho,

Mujhe Ek Raat Nawaz De,
Magar Us Ke Baad Saher Na Ho,
Who Bada Nahi Who Karim Hai,
Mujhe Yeh Shifat Bhi Ata Kare,
Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Dua Karo,
To Dua Mein Meri Asar Na Ho,
Kabhi Din Dhoop Mein Zhum Ke,
Kabhi Shab Ke Phool Ko Chum Ke,
Yuh Hi Saath Saath Chale Sada,
Kabhi Khatm Aapna Safar Na Ho,
Mere Paas Mere Habib Aa,
Jara Aur Dil Ke Karib Aa,
Tujhe Dhadhkano Me Basa Lu Mein,
Ke Bichadne Ka Kabhi Daar Na Ho

this is 2 good:eye:

keep it up:thmbup:
b happy:rose

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Kash hum bezubaan hote,
Naa phir gham yun bayaan hote !!

Kash naa hoti zindagi ki samajh,
Naa phir yun afsaane jawaan hote !!

Kash naa khwahish hoti kuch paane ki,
Naa phir kuch khone k gham yahan hote !!

Gar tod jaata koi ashiyaaN humara,
Fir bhi khoobsurat saare samaan hote !!

Lut Jaati gar Roshni-e-zindagi,
phir bhi andhere naa yahan hote !!

Toot-te hue bhi be-shubhaah hote !
Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
Kash hum bezubaan hote !!

[musaddaq]

Re: Kabhi Yuh Bhi Aa Meri Aankh Mein

very nice poetry:rose
bohat acha likhty hain app
waisy batoon say nahi lgta k yeh sab app nay he likha hay:khi:

so nice bohat khobsoorati say app bdal gay hain:hehe:
very beautiful sharing:rose


very nice
simple
short but so beautiful
keep it up

ab to smajh main bhi nahi aa rha k kia likhti jaoon.:khi:
really app ke poetry itni achi hay k mera dil to kr rha hay k hr aik poem ,ghazal,qitta or jo kuch bhi hr aik pr comments doon lakin smajh main he nahi aa rha k likhon kia:tauba
so nice poetry

this is 2 good:eye:

keep it up:thmbup:

b happy:rose

:salam:

[aquari]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

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Kash hum bezubaan hote,

Naa phir gham yun bayaan hote !!

ghamoo ko zuban bayan na bhi karey mager ankhain tu ankhain apney under hi sub kuch bayan krdeti hainn...

Kash naa hoti zindagi ki samajh,

Naa phir yun afsaane jawaan hote !!

sahi kaha zindagi ko na hi samjhoo tu behter haii kunk is ko samjh leney k bad jo dukh milta hai us sey behter tu hum anjan hi thek hain

Kash naa khwahish hoti kuch paane ki,

Naa phir kuch khone k gham yahan hote !!

khuwaboo k dkehtey waqt waqai ahsas nahi rehtaa k in k tootney pr in ki kirchiyan chubhain gii....kash k bus main hoo k paney ki arzoo hi dil sey khatum hojayeee...

Lut Jaati gar Roshni-e-zindagi,

phir bhi andhere naa yahan hote !!

roshini k khatum honey pr andhera tu phr muntazir hi khara hota haii naa!

Toot-te hue bhi be-shubhaah hote !

Kash hum bezubaan hote !!

Kash hum bezubaan hote !!

be-zubaan hum na hoteyhowey bhi kabhi kabhi zindagi main be zubaan hi ban jatey haii naa..!

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Jab Meraa Dil Toda Hoga
Usne Kuch To Socha Hoga
Meri Yaad To Aati Hogi
Mera Naam To Leta Hogi
Jis Ki Khaatir Hum Rote hein
Wo Bhi Mujhko Roti Hogi
Kyon Us Ka Dil maine Torda?
Apne Dil Se Kehti Hogi
Taktii Hogi meri Raahein
Chaukhat Pe Wo Baithi Hogi
Sote-Sote Raaton Ko Wo
Har Aahat Pe Chaunki Hogi
Na Main Ho Na Mere Khat Hai
Dil Ko Apnay Jalati Hogi

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Jab Meraa Dil Toda Hoga

Usne Kuch To Socha Hoga
Meri Yaad To Aati Hogi
Mera Naam To Leta Hogi
Jis Ki Khaatir Hum Rote hein
Wo Bhi Mujhko Roti Hogi
Kyon Us Ka Dil maine Torda?
Apne Dil Se Kehti Hogi
Taktii Hogi meri Raahein
Chaukhat Pe Wo Baithi Hogi
Sote-Sote Raaton Ko Wo
Har Aahat Pe Chaunki Hogi
Na Main Ho Na Mere Khat Hai

Dil Ko Apnay Jalati Hogi

very nice:em:
bohat acha likha hay app nay:clap:
keep it up
b happy:rose

[aquari]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Jab Meraa Dil Toda Hoga

Usne Kuch To Socha Hoga
Meri Yaad To Aati Hogi
Mera Naam To Leta Hogi
Jis Ki Khaatir Hum Rote hein
Wo Bhi Mujhko Roti Hogi
Kyon Us Ka Dil maine Torda?
Apne Dil Se Kehti Hogi
Taktii Hogi meri Raahein
Chaukhat Pe Wo Baithi Hogi
Sote-Sote Raaton Ko Wo
Har Aahat Pe Chaunki Hogi
Na Main Ho Na Mere Khat Hai

Dil Ko Apnay Jalati Hogi

Dil ko apney jalati hogi.....:clap:
no words to say anything about this line....

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Kabi Khud bhi Mere paas aa,
Meri Baat sun Mera Saath de

Jo Khalish hai Dil se Nikal ker,
Mujhe Uljhano se Nijaat de

Tujhe Sochna Mera Mashghala,
Tujhe Dekhna Meri Aarzoo

Mujhe Dil de apne Khayal ka,
Mujhe Qurb ki ek Raat de

Meri Zindagi Mere saath chal,
Mere Haath mai apna Haath de

Mujhe Ghum bhi Khushi se Qabool hain,
Jo Tu agar Mera Saath de

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Kabi Khud bhi Mere paas aa,
Meri Baat sun Mera Saath de

Jo Khalish hai Dil se Nikal ker,
Mujhe Uljhano se Nijaat de

Tujhe Sochna Mera Mashghala,
Tujhe Dekhna Meri Aarzoo

Mujhe Dil de apne Khayal ka,
Mujhe Qurb ki ek Raat de

Meri Zindagi Mere saath chal,
Mere Haath mai apna Haath de

Mujhe Ghum bhi Khushi se Qabool hain,
Jo Tu agar Mera Saath de

mmmusaddaq bhai blush:

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Jab Meraa Dil Toda Hoga

Usne Kuch To Socha Hoga
Meri Yaad To Aati Hogi
Mera Naam To Leta Hogi
Jis Ki Khaatir Hum Rote hein
Wo Bhi Mujhko Roti Hogi
Kyon Us Ka Dil maine Torda?
Apne Dil Se Kehti Hogi
Taktii Hogi meri Raahein
Chaukhat Pe Wo Baithi Hogi
Sote-Sote Raaton Ko Wo
Har Aahat Pe Chaunki Hogi
Na Main Ho Na Mere Khat Hai

Dil Ko Apnay Jalati Hogi

nice :salam:

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Apas main kahin apne,sitare nahi milte,
jaise kisi dariya ke,kinare nahi milte.

nafrat ke tarazu main,na tolo unhe logo,
yeh pyar ke rishte hai,udhare nahi milte.

majbur kismat hai,ke unhi se hai talluk,
wo jinse meri soch ke,dhaare nahi milte.

manzil ki tamanna hai,to kar koshish musalsal,
kherat main to,chand _ sitare nahi milte

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Gham-e-Zindegi Ka Ya Rab Na Mila Koi Kinaara
Meri Fiqr-e-Beqaraan Ne Do Jaahaan Ko Chhan Maara

Meri Aarzoo Ko Bakhshi Teri Harr Nazar Ne Rafat
Usse Beqaraan Karegaa Mere Shauq Ka Sharaara

Main Kabhi Rawaan Dawaan Tha Kisi Dasht-e-Bekhudi Mein
Kisi Dour Ki Sadaa Ne Mujhe Pyaar Se Poukaara

Mera Zarf Ye Ki Lekar Gham-e-Beqaraan Main Choup Houn
Na Soukhan Se Raaz Paida Na Jabeen Se Aashqaara

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Guftugo Ke Lamhon Main
Dekh He Nahi Paatay
Ham Tumharay Chehray Ko
Tum Hamari Aankhon Ko
Aaj Aisa Kartay Hain
Chasm-o-lab Ko Parhtay Hain
Baat Chor Datay Hain

Jaane Kiya Lamha Hoga
Jab Ye Hath Hathon Say
Gar Kabhi Juda Hoga
Aaj Aisa Kartay Hain
Zabt-e-Jaan Parakhtay Hain
Hath Chor Datay Hain

Kash Koi Samjha Day
Loag Kis Tarah Dil Ki
Manzilain Alag Kar Kay
Saath Chor Datay Hain
Aaj Aisa Kartay Hain
Bey-sabab Bikhartay Hain
Zaat Taur Datay Hain...

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

so nice sharing musaddaq bhai :salam: