Musaddaq Ki Choice

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

december ki sard ratoon main
sab apne apne bister per
jab meethi neend sou rahy hoty hain
lekin main jag rahi hoti hoon
bas yunhi chaat ko takttee rehti hoon
soch ki waadi main utarte hi khyal us ka ata hai phir yaad bhi woh ate hain
yadoon k sath hi ye baat dil main ati hai
kia woh bhi jagta hoga
kia mujhy sochta hoga
kia uski meethi neend bhi
us se rothti hogi
kia mujh ko dhoondti hogi
sard raton main...

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Parakhna mat parakhnay say koi apna nahi rahta
Kisi bhi ainay main dair taq chehra nahi rahta

Baday logon say milnay main humaisha faasla rakhna
Jaha darya say sumendar mila,darya nahi rahta

Tumharay shahar ka mausam naay andaz wala hay
Humaray shahar main bhi koi hum sa nahi rahta

Muhabbat aik Mehak hay humaisha sath chalte hay
Koi insaan tanhaee main bhi tanha nahi rahta

[aquari]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Baday logon say milnay main humaisha faasla rakhna
Jaha darya say sumendar mila,darya nahi rahta

zaberdast...baat itni hi gehri hai k jitna samunder:)

[meiji]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Parakhna mat parakhnay say koi apna nahi rahta

Kisi bhi ainay main dair taq chehra nahi rahta

Very Nice:)

[me_smile]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

bohat hi dil ko chhhu lena wali poetry hai, khush rahia, mian ne sari nahi perhi abhi , kabhi kabhi perhait rahoon gi:)

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

woh jis ne diye mujh ko muhabbat ke khazane... badal ki tarah aankh se barsa bhi wohi hai..

very nice bohat achi poetry ke hay app nay:thmbup:
specially yeh wala shair bohat acha hay:lpop:
b happy:rose

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Parakhna mat parakhnay say koi apna nahi rahta

Kisi bhi ainay main dair taq chehra nahi rahta

Baday logon say milnay main humaisha faasla rakhna
Jaha darya say sumendar mila,darya nahi rahta

Tumharay shahar ka mausam naay andaz wala hay
Humaray shahar main bhi koi hum sa nahi rahta

Muhabbat aik Mehak hay humaisha sath chalte hay

Koi insaan tanhaee main bhi tanha nahi rahta

hmm very nice:em:
keep it up

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Jo khayal the naa qayaas the, wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Jo mohabaton ki asaas the wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Jinhain mantaa hi nahin yeh dil, wahi log mere hain ham safar
Mujhe har tarah say jo raas the, wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Mujhe lamhe bhar ki rafaqaton ke saraab or satayengay
Meri umar bhar ki jo pyaas the wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Yeh khayal sare hain arzee, yeh gulaab sare hain kaghzi
Gul aarzu kee jo ba-as the, wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Jinhain kar saka na qubool main, woh shareek rah-e-safar huye
Jo meri talab, meri aas the, wahi log mujh say bichar gaye
Meri dharkanon ke qareeb the, meri chah the, mera khuwaab the
Woh jo roz-o-shab mere paas the, wahi log mujh say bichar gaye

bohat he achy words use kiay hain app nay
very nice:rose

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Hogaye rukhsat ghata barish k baaad
Aik diya jalta raha barish k baaad

Meray behtay huyey Anson ko dekh ker
Roo pari thandi hawa barish k baad

Meri tanhai ka daman tham ker
Kuch udasii nay kaha Barish k baaad

Yaad teri Orh ker main so gaya
Khwab ka daar khul gaya barish k baad

Chand dekh ker badloon ki qaid main
Aik sitara roo dia barish k baaad

Apnay ghar ki her katchi dewar per
Naam tera likh dia barish k baaad

bohat achi poetry ke hay app nay:rose
kafi khobsoorat ghazal hay:phool:
i like it:thmbup:
keep it up

[jia]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Is dil ke aaine ko dikhaya naa kijiye,
Aankhon mai har kisi ko basaya naa kijiye,
Dil lagi dilon se yu hi naa kijiye,
Likh kar naam dil par mitaya naa kijiye
Yun to hum kisika peecha nahi karte,
Darde dil liya aur diya nahi karte,
Ittefaq ki baat hai ki ye dosti aap se hai,
Varna itni kimti cheez hum kisiko diya nahi karta

thank u k app nay mujh say dosti kr lee:hehe:
very nice dear
b happy:rose

[aquari]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Muhabbat aik Mehak hay humaisha sath chalte hay
Koi insaan tanhaee main bhi tanha nahi rahta

haa waqai mohabat itni hi kashish or mehak rakhti hai apney under k tanha hojaney prbhi humain tanha nahi honey detii :)

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Batao kia likhain tum ko
ke lafzoon ka chunao bhi
bara dushwaar hota hai
jo tum ko jan likhtay hain
wafain khoob rooti hain
humain aa ker ye kehti hain
ke tum apnay hi katil ko
ab ke jaan likhtay hoo?
kabhi emaan likhtay hoo
ye tum acha nahi kertay
too phir ye sochtay hain hum
tumhain ab soog likhtay hain
koi mustaqil sa roog likhtay hain
soog ko mananay main,
roog ko bhulanay main
umeer beet jati hai
roog denay waloon ko log bhool jatay hian
bhool janay waloon ka soog too nahi hota
chalo tumhhi batao ab
buut likhain tum ko ya ke Khuda likhain
ajnabi ya phir aashna likhain
apnay nakarda gunahoon ki
Koi saza likhain...
Batao tum ko kya likhain??????

[musaddaq]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

isay maiN ne he likha tha
k lahjay baraf ho jaa'eiN
tu phir pighla nahi kartey
parinday dar k urr jaa'eiN
tu phir loota nahi kartey
isay maiN ne he likha tha
yaqeeN uth jaa'ey tu sha'ed
kabhi wapis nahi aata
hawa'ooN ka koi toofaaN
kabhi baarish nahi laata
isay maiN ne he likha tha
k sheesha toot jaa'ey tu
kabhi phir jur nahi paata
jo rastey se bhatak jaa'ey
wo wapis mur nahi pata
isay kahna wo bey-maani adhura khat
usay maiN ne he likha tha
usay kahna k dewanay
mukamil khat nahi likhtey

[aquari]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

Batao kia likhain tum ko
ke lafzoon ka chunao bhi
bara dushwaar hota hai
jo tum ko jan likhtay hain
wafain khoob rooti hain
humain aa ker ye kehti hain
ke tum apnay hi katil ko
ab ke jaan likhtay hoo?
kabhi emaan likhtay hoo
ye tum acha nahi kertay
too phir ye sochtay hain hum
tumhain ab soog likhtay hain
koi mustaqil sa roog likhtay hain
soog ko mananay main,
roog ko bhulanay main
umeer beet jati hai
roog denay waloon ko log bhool jatay hian
bhool janay waloon ka soog too nahi hota
chalo tumhhi batao ab
buut likhain tum ko ya ke Khuda likhain
ajnabi ya phir aashna likhain
apnay nakarda gunahoon ki
Koi saza likhain...
Batao tum ko kya likhain??????

awesome..:clap:
us shaks ko kuch bhi likh daloo ..mager shayed hi koi lafz aisa baan hoo jo sahi us ki zaat ki tashree kr sakeyy!....or yeh lafz na milna hi huamrey lya saza ban jata haii

[shahid_naman]

Re: Musaddaq Ki Choice

isay maiN ne he likha tha
k lahjay baraf ho jaa'eiN
tu phir pighla nahi kartey
parinday dar k urr jaa'eiN
tu phir loota nahi kartey
isay maiN ne he likha tha
yaqeeN uth jaa'ey tu sha'ed
kabhi wapis nahi aata
hawa'ooN ka koi toofaaN
kabhi baarish nahi laata
isay maiN ne he likha tha
k sheesha toot jaa'ey tu
kabhi phir jur nahi paata
jo rastey se bhatak jaa'ey
wo wapis mur nahi pata
isay kahna wo bey-maani adhura khat
usay maiN ne he likha tha
usay kahna k dewanay
mukamil khat nahi likhtey

very nice musaddaq bhai:thmbup::thmbup: