Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

samjhi nahi main?? aap chahte hain main ek aur girah lagaon?

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

kar dungi... :)

Jaisay Qous-e-Qaza'h Aasmaa'n Rang De
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

Teergi-e-a-hijar ko mitatay huwe
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

To yeh Lein...Ab Edit Ker Dein :thankzu:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

samjhi nahi main?? aap chahte hain main ek aur girah lagaon?

Mera Matlab Hai, K Aap Kee Girah Meri Girah Se Achhi Hai..

Originally Posted by shummu
u know what..on second thought I do like ur misra... shahdil ke baad aap ka misra sab se behtareen hai ab tak.... :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Jaisay Qous-e-Qaza'h Aasmaa'n Rang De
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

Teergi-e-a-hijar ko mitatay huwe

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

To yeh Lein...Ab Edit Ker Dein :thankzu:

wah aap ka dono sher achcha hai aur pehli girah bilkul behr mein hai magar mujhe zaati taur pe doosra sher ka khayal zyaada pasand aaya hai magar doosri girah be behr ho gayi hai aur woh bhi lafz HIJR ki wajah se...sahi talaffuz hai HIJ-R(2-1) naakeh HI-JAR(1-2) ok... chaliye phir is doosre misre ko durust karke phir se girha lagaiye :thmbup: (homework :khi:)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

wah aap ka dono sher achcha hai aur pehli girah bilkul behr mein hai magar mujhe zaati taur pe doosra sher ka khayal zyaada pasand aaya hai magar doosri girah be behr ho gayi hai aur woh bhi lafz HIJR ki wajah se...sahi talaffuz hai HIJ-R(2-1) naakeh HI-JAR(1-2) ok... chaliye phir is doosre misre ko durust karke phir se girha lagaiye :thmbup: (homework :khi:)

OK...:thankzu:......For Cooperation

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Yaar sub ki etreis dekh k tention ho rehi hy
k ye compitition kb End hoga or agla shuroo hoga

Takkay main b paticipate ker sakoon

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Both are apriciateable:salam:
But the second one iz 2 nice

Jaisay Qous-e-Qaza'h Aasmaa'n Rang
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!


Teergi-e-a-hijar ko mitatay huwe

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Mera Matlab Hai, K Aap Kee Girah Meri Girah Se Achhi Hai..


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zarra nawaaiz ka shukriya... so u think I should include my girah also in poll :khi:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

OK...:thankzu:......For Cooperation

welcome magar waiting for ur second entry ok.... koshish kijiye usi khayal ko likhne ki behr mein :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Yaar sub ki etreis dekh k tention ho rehi hy
k ye compitition kb End hoga or agla shuroo hoga

Takkay main b paticipate ker sakoon

arey to is waale mein kyon nahi kar rahe hain aap participate??:donno:

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Isliye k Dunya gol hy

Kher ap nhi samjhen gi
Leave it
W8 4 nExt Compitition

arey to is waale mein kyon nahi kar rahe hain aap participate??:donno:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

bahut khoob...!:thmbup:

ye batain k behr mein hai ya nahi?

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Isliye k Dunya gol hy

Kher ap nhi samjhen gi
Leave it
W8 4 nExt Compitition

waqaii nahi samajh aaya :mm:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

ye batain k behr mein hai ya nahi?

arey bilkul behr mein hai..:thmbup: kya aapne khud likha hai??agar han to waqaii bahut daad pesh hai aapko...waise kaise likha??gungunaa kar ya taqtee karke...?:)

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Kisne keha tha khmakhah ki tention lene ko ???

waqaii nahi samajh aaya :mm: