Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

wah lagta hai behr mein likhna aapka baayein haath ka khel hai

Kaha'n G...Mein To Apnay Khialat Ko Saraiki Shayri Kee Sirf Aik Qism Mein Tarteeb De Sakta Hoo'n..

...bahut khoob...well done :clap:

Aap Kee Hosla Afzai Kaa Boht Boht Shukria :thankzu:

jee main out of station thi plus viral ka shikaar....

ab theek hun

:alhamd:

magar kamzori jaate jaate jaayegi inshallah...:)

:insha:
ALLAH TA'AAlA Aap Ko Mukammal Sehat Attaa Farmaye..(Aameen)

[kashish]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

woh sitam bhi Dhaaye aur chaahe bhi keh
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate hue'



oops sis misra bebehr ho gaya hai :) recheck .....:thmbup:

Boht boht shukriay
Agr ghalti ki nishandhi kr dein to mehrbani ho gi.

[Insaaan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Jaisy khuda khush huwa insan ko dekh ker
yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe










sorry moaf ker daina main shair to nahi hun lakin achanik mery dil main yeh agia to likh dia umeed hay k aap acha nahi many gy

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Boht boht shukriay

Agr ghalti ki nishandhi kr dein to mehrbani ho gi.

'dhaaye... ' ke baad se bebehr ho gaya hai misra....

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Jaisy khuda khush huwa insan ko dekh ker
yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe




sorry moaf ker daina main shair to nahi hun lakin achanik mery dil main yeh agia to likh dia umeed hay k aap acha nahi many gy

chaliye aapne koshish ki ye dekh kar hi achcha laga go ke aapka misra door door tak behr mein nahi hai... :D magar aate rahiyega aayenda hone waale muqaablon mein bhi to inshallah ek na ek din to aap seekh hi jaayenge :)