Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

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Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

hmm not bad misra bilkul behr mein hai magar aap se mazeed acchi girah ki ummeed hai...All the best :thmbup:

g,koshish karon g.Par jab tak wo girah hazir he jo ap ne kabhi lagai thi,umeed he ap bhi ab ke koshish karein gein............bas yihii iltijaa hai ki jab bhii milo'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

سلام،
میری گرہ حاضرہے

چاہےاُلفت نہ ہورسمِ دُنیا تو ہے
یونہی مجھ سےملومُسکراتےہوۓ

Chahe ulfat na ho rasm-e-unya tu he
Yunhi mujh se milo muskarate huwe

:Shandar::Umdaa:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

jee shahdil ye meri girah hai jo maine kabhi lagayi thi aur poori ghazal likhi thi... chunki misra khaasa asaan tha isliye maine yahan diya tabaa azmayai ke liye... jab maine ghazla kahi thi tab bhi ye misra kahin diya gaya tha ...

MY GIRAAH:

bas yihii iltijaa hai ki jab bhii milo
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

g,koshish karon g.Par jab tak wo girah hazir he jo ap ne kabhi lagai thi,umeed he ap bhi ab ke koshish karein gein............bas yihii iltijaa hai ki jab bhii milo'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

wah bhai ye achchi rahi...imtehaan aap logon ka hai..mera nahi...:D

waise meri girah to aapne yahan pesh kar hi di hai ...ab mujhe dkehna hai baaqi log kya girah lagate hain :thmbup:


waise aap ki girah accepted hai ...aur bhi likh sakein to zaroor pesh kijiyega 2 girah per person allowed hai :phool:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

ahan... aap ne misrah bara pyara diya hai shummu ji girah lagane ke liye... i wish kuch new or acche se shair aaye is per... good luck to all... :rose

aur aap kab koshish karengi?

waise meri girah dekhi?

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

شوخ سے ان لبوں پر تبسم رہے

یوں ہی مجھ سے مِلو مسکراتے ہوئے

shokh se in labooN per tabassum rahe

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

bahut khoob...!:thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

1st entry

mooN khulaa daaNth baahir hoN jaisay terey
yuN hi mujse milo muskuraate huwe

2nd entry
qadr dil may meri gar bardhani hai yaar
yuN hi mujhse milo muskuraate hue

khoob..!aap ki entry bhi achchi hai....:rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Gulon pe bhanwaray mandalatay hue,

Yun hi mujh sey milo muskuratay hue,

nice try!magar afsos be behr ho gaya misra.... try again :thmbup:


waise achcha laga ke aap ne is baar participate kiya :rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

yeh jo misra hai is ki poori ghazal kia hai ?:mm:

poori ghazal ka pata nahi..zamaane pehle kisi forum pe sarwar sahab ne ye misra bataur tarahi diya tha uspe maine ghazla kahi thi..chunki misra sehel tha isliye socha yahan doon taakeh logon ko aasaani ko likhne mein ...why don't u also try?:)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

سلام،
میری گرہ حاضرہے

چاہےاُلفت نہ ہورسمِ دُنیا تو ہے
یونہی مجھ سےملومُسکراتےہوۓ

Chahe ulfat na ho rasm-e-unya tu he
Yunhi mujh se milo muskarate huwe

u know what..on second thought I do like ur misra... shahdil ke baad aap ka misra sab se behtareen hai ab tak.... :thmbup:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

jee shahdil ye meri girah hai jo maine kabhi lagayi thi aur poori ghazal likhi thi... chunki misra khaasa asaan tha isliye maine yahan diya tabaa azmayai ke liye... jab maine ghazla kahi thi tab bhi ye misra kahin diya gaya tha ...

MY GIRAAH:

bas yihii iltijaa hai ki jab bhii milo
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

Sorry...........Boht Hee Achhee Girah Hai...

:Umdaa::Shandar:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Miss Shumaila,:)

Agar Mein Yahan 2nd entry ... mein 2 entries doo'n...aur aap se kahoo'n k post edit ker k koi 1 rehnay dein......aur 2ri hazaf ker lein... to???

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

shukriya shahdil :salam:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Miss Shumaila,:)

Agar Mein Yahan 2nd entry ... mein 2 entries doo'n...aur aap se kahoo'n k post edit ker k koi 1 rehnay dein......aur 2ri hazaf ker lein... to???

kar dungi... :)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

u know what..on second thought I do like ur misra... shahdil ke baad aap ka misra sab se behtareen hai ab tak.... :thmbup:

:thankzu: Lekin Shahdil kee Girah Se Pehly Apni Girah Count Kerein........