Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

[Gul]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke doosre muqaable ke saath haazir hun... muqable se pehle ye thread zaroor dekh lijiyega :)

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=38846

is baar main bahut hi asaan misra dungi jo bahut hi rawaaN dawaaN behr mein hoga.Inshallah diqqat nahi hogi aap sab ko behr mein likhne mein :D: saath ye bhi bataongi ke kis mashhoor ghazal/geet ki tarz pe hai taakeh aap use gungunaa kar khud hi rawani mein likh sakenge.1 hafte ke bajaye 15 roz ka silsila hai isliye aap ko zyaada waqt milega homework karne ka :D

misra hai:

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

behr:

2 1 2,2 1 2, 2 1 2, 2 1 2
faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun

neeche diye gaye mashoor gaane ki tarz par diye gaye misre aur apne misre ko gungunakar likhne ki koshish kijiyega...saath taqtee bhi kar ke dekhiye ..lafzon ko break kijiye ..uske baad usna wazan dekhiye..kaun si lambi awaaz(2) hai aur kaun si choti(1)...is tarah se behr mein likhne ki koshish kijiye..ALL THE BEST....yaad rahe is baar sirf behr wali entries hi polling mein li jaayegi :thmbup:


aapke pyaar mein ham savaNrne lage
tuut ke baajuNo meN bikharne lage (film:raaz)


Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 31st July

Walekum salam ...Shammu dear!
Be-hadd achay tareeqay se aap nay batay hai
K ...Agar hum apnay likhay howay sher k rhythm
Ko gun-gunaa k check karein .. Tu Sahi andaza lagay ja sakta hai !

Sarwar Aalam Raaz sahib ka aik article hai ..
Meray pass tha agar mila tu wo share karooN gee
Oss mein Onhoun nay yehi aasaan tarqqa bataya hai ...


Zarqa Mufti Sahiba agar yehan kuch share karein tu wo B
kafi behtar ostaad hai MashaAlalH sher O adab K medaan mein

aur aap b mashaAllah Buahat hee Mahiraan tareeqay se bata rahi
Hain ....:jazak::salam:

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

سلام،
میری گرہ حاضرہے

چاہےاُلفت نہ ہورسمِ دُنیا تو ہے
یونہی مجھ سےملومُسکراتےہوۓ

Chahe ulfat na ho rasm-e-unya tu he
Yunhi mujh se milo muskarate huwe

[naveed iqbal]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

pyar ka koi geet gungunatr hoe
yuhi mujh semilo muskurate hoe

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Walekum salam ...Shammu dear!
Be-hadd achay tareeqay se aap nay batay hai
K ...Agar hum apnay likhay howay sher k rhythm
Ko gun-gunaa k check karein .. Tu Sahi andaza lagay ja sakta hai !

Sarwar Aalam Raaz sahib ka aik article hai ..
Meray pass tha agar mila tu wo share karooN gee
Oss mein Onhoun nay yehi aasaan tarqqa bataya hai ...


Zarqa Mufti Sahiba agar yehan kuch share karein tu wo B
kafi behtar ostaad hai MashaAlalH sher O adab K medaan mein

aur aap b mashaAllah Buahat hee Mahiraan tareeqay se bata rahi
Hain ....:jazak::salam:

:jazak:GUL hamari koshishon ko saraahne ke liye!Agar ek bhi banda/bandi is bahaane behr seekh lega yahan to mujhe bahut khushi hogi...mera jitna ilm hai inshallah yahan baaNTti rahungi..zarqa sis bhi aati rahengi apne ilm se hum sab ko mustafeed karne :rose


Gul aapki entry ka intizaar hai :phool:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

سلام،
میری گرہ حاضرہے

چاہےاُلفت نہ ہورسمِ دُنیا تو ہے
یونہی مجھ سےملومُسکراتےہوۓ

Chahe ulfat na ho rasm-e-unya tu he
Yunhi mujh se milo muskarate huwe

hmm not bad misra bilkul behr mein hai magar aap se mazeed acchi girah ki ummeed hai...All the best :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

pyar ka koi geet gungunatr hoe
yuhi mujh semilo muskurate hoe

hmm misra zara sa behr mein nahi hai...dubara koshish kijiye :)


pyaar ka koi geet gungunaate hue


misre mein t ka wazan gayab hai....

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

All iZ Nice

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Mani aap bhi koshish karein...

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Is baar nhi Next time insha ALLAH
apni qoowat-e-bazoo zaroor aazmayoonga Ha Ha ha372-haha

Thanks 4 ivitation:salam:

Mani aap bhi koshish karein...

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke doosre muqaable ke saath haazir hun... muqable se pehle ye thread zaroor dekh lijiyega :)

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=38846

is baar main bahut hi asaan misra dungi jo bahut hi rawaaN dawaaN behr mein hoga.Inshallah diqqat nahi hogi aap sab ko behr mein likhne mein :D: saath ye bhi bataongi ke kis mashhoor ghazal/geet ki tarz pe hai taakeh aap use gungunaa kar khud hi rawani mein likh sakenge.1 hafte ke bajaye 15 roz ka silsila hai isliye aap ko zyaada waqt milega homework karne ka :D

misra hai:

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

behr:

2 1 2,2 1 2, 2 1 2, 2 1 2
faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun

neeche diye gaye mashoor gaane ki tarz par diye gaye misre aur apne misre ko gungunakar likhne ki koshish kijiyega...saath taqtee bhi kar ke dekhiye ..lafzon ko break kijiye ..uske baad usna wazan dekhiye..kaun si lambi awaaz(2) hai aur kaun si choti(1)...is tarah se behr mein likhne ki koshish kijiye..ALL THE BEST....yaad rahe is baar sirf behr wali entries hi polling mein li jaayegi :thmbup:


aapke pyaar mein ham savaNrne lage
tuut ke baajuNo meN bikharne lage (film:raaz)


Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 31st July

mooN khulaa daaNth baahir hoN jaisay terey
yuN hi mujse milo muskuraate huwe

[ummid]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

ahan... aap ne misrah bara pyara diya hai shummu ji girah lagane ke liye... i wish kuch new or acche se shair aaye is per... good luck to all... :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

شوخ سے ان لبوں پر تبسم رہے
یوں ہی مجھ سے مِلو مسکراتے ہوئے


shokh se in labooN per tabassum rahe
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke doosre muqaable ke saath haazir hun... muqable se pehle ye thread zaroor dekh lijiyega :)

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=38846

is baar main bahut hi asaan misra dungi jo bahut hi rawaaN dawaaN behr mein hoga.Inshallah diqqat nahi hogi aap sab ko behr mein likhne mein :D: saath ye bhi bataongi ke kis mashhoor ghazal/geet ki tarz pe hai taakeh aap use gungunaa kar khud hi rawani mein likh sakenge.1 hafte ke bajaye 15 roz ka silsila hai isliye aap ko zyaada waqt milega homework karne ka :D

misra hai:

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

behr:

2 1 2,2 1 2, 2 1 2, 2 1 2
faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun

neeche diye gaye mashoor gaane ki tarz par diye gaye misre aur apne misre ko gungunakar likhne ki koshish kijiyega...saath taqtee bhi kar ke dekhiye ..lafzon ko break kijiye ..uske baad usna wazan dekhiye..kaun si lambi awaaz(2) hai aur kaun si choti(1)...is tarah se behr mein likhne ki koshish kijiye..ALL THE BEST....yaad rahe is baar sirf behr wali entries hi polling mein li jaayegi :thmbup:


aapke pyaar mein ham savaNrne lage
tuut ke baajuNo meN bikharne lage (film:raaz)


Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 31st July

2nd entry
qadr dil may meri gar bardhani hai yaar
yuN hi mujhse milo muskuraate hue

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Gulon pe bhanwaray mandalatay hue,
Yun hi mujh sey milo muskuratay hue,

[.]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

yeh jo misra hai is ki poori ghazal kia hai ?:mm: