Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke doosre muqaable ke saath haazir hun... muqable se pehle ye thread zaroor dekh lijiyega :)

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=38846

is baar main bahut hi asaan misra dungi jo bahut hi rawaaN dawaaN behr mein hoga.Inshallah diqqat nahi hogi aap sab ko behr mein likhne mein :D: saath ye bhi bataongi ke kis mashhoor ghazal/geet ki tarz pe hai taakeh aap use gungunaa kar khud hi rawani mein likh sakenge.1 hafte ke bajaye 15 roz ka silsila hai isliye aap ko zyaada waqt milega homework karne ka :D

misra hai:

'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

behr:

2 1 2,2 1 2, 2 1 2, 2 1 2
faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun,faa-i-lun

neeche diye gaye mashoor gaane ki tarz par diye gaye misre aur apne misre ko gungunakar likhne ki koshish kijiyega...saath taqtee bhi kar ke dekhiye ..lafzon ko break kijiye ..uske baad usna wazan dekhiye..kaun si lambi awaaz(2) hai aur kaun si choti(1)...is tarah se behr mein likhne ki koshish kijiye..ALL THE BEST....yaad rahe is baar sirf behr wali entries hi polling mein li jaayegi :thmbup:


aapke pyaar mein ham savaNrne lage
tuut ke baajuNo meN bikharne lage (film:raaz)


Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 31st July

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

:wasalam:

:tea:...Mein Bhee Koshish Karoon Gaa....

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Waisay Aik Member Ko 1 Entry Allow Hai Yaa 2??

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

sure... 2 allow hai...thanx yaad dilaane ke liye..maine post edit kar di hai... koshish kijiyega behr mein likhne ki ok...:) All the best!

[naveed iqbal]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

ok

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Koi Nazm-e-Wafa Gungunatay Huwe...
'yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!

Yeh Rahi Meri 1st Entry.....2nd Entry will be post later.....rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

wah SHAHDIL jee bahut khoob... achchi entry maari hai...mashallah...aap ki doosri entry ka intizaar rahega :rose

[*Roomi*]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

کبھی ساون کی کسی ٹھنڈی شام میں
یونہی مجھ سے ملو مسکراتے ہوئے

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

wah SHAHDIL jee bahut khoob... achchi entry maari hai...mashallah...aap ki doosri entry ka intizaar rahega :rose

Hosla Afzaai K Liye....:thankzu:rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

کبھی ساون کی کسی ٹھنڈی شام میں


یونہی مجھ سے ملو مسکراتے ہوئے

oho Roomi jee lagta hai aap ne jaldbaazi kar ki.....bilkul be behr misra hai :(

abhi to bahut waqt hi..aap koshish karein apne misre ko behr mein likhne ki... aap khud dekhein ye jo misra aapne likha hai...bilkul bhi rawaani mein nahi hai... :na:

aap aisa karein diye gaye misre('yun hi mujhse milo muskuraate huwe'!) ko kayi dafaa tehet ul lafz mein paRhein...aur jab bilkul zabaan par baiTh jaaye...aur aap use gungunaa sakein kisi dhun meiN to phir apne misre ko usi dhun pe baiThaa kar dekhiye..khud ba khud aapko rukawaT mehsoos hogi ....try karke mujhe bataiyega zaroor :) saath usi dhun par shahdil ke misre ko bhi gungunaa kar dekhiye...aap dekhenge ke ikdam sahi baiTh raha hoga ..aise hi koshish kijiye inshallah zaroor aapko kamyabi milegi behr mein misra likhne mein :rose

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Hosla Afzaai K Liye....:thankzu:rose

aap ko behr ka ilm hai ya aapne aise hi gungunaa kar likha hai??:)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

aap ko behr ka ilm hai ya aapne aise hi gungunaa kar likha hai??:)

Naa Hee Behr Kaa Ilm Hai...:)...Na Hee Gungunaa Ker Likha Hai...

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

Naa Hee Behr Kaa Ilm Hai...:)...Na Hee Gungunaa Ker Likha Hai...

accha then to aapko daad milni chahiye kyonki misra ikdam behr mein hai aur rawaaN hai :thmbup:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

accha then to aapko daad milni chahiye kyonki misra ikdam behr mein hai aur rawaaN hai :thmbup:

:thankzu:
Aap Ne Meri Saraiki Shairi Parrhee Hai???
Woh Bhee Meine Issi Tarah Hee Likhi Hai......

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye(2)-15 rozah SILSILA

:thankzu:
Aap Ne Meri Saraiki Shairi Parrhee Hai???
Woh Bhee Meine Issi Tarah Hee Likhi Hai......

nope kahan hai? :D: