Shairiana Muqabla

[Masood]

Ji to dosto Assalamo Allaikum

Hamein is baat par bohat khushi hai keh hamarey is pyarey Pegham.net par bohat sey achhey achhey zoq rakhney waley shuraa bhi mojood hain, jin key liye ham bohat si duaein kartey hain.

Jahan itney achhey achhey shaair mojud hon to kyun na wahan par aik game aisa bhi shuru kiya jaey jahan shairana andaaz mein baat cheet ho? Isi baat ko soch kar ham yeh thread shuru kartey hain jis mein SAWAAL aur JAWAAB shair mein diya jaey ga aur shair APNA ZAATI KHALIS PURE APNA hona chahiye :) :lol

Lijiye to aaghaz main karta hoon:


Merey honto ki muskaan bahaal ho gaee hai
meri to thi hi unki jaib bhi kangaal ho gaee hai :lol

ji to jawab???

[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

Ji to dosto Assalamo Allaikum

Hamein is baat par bohat khushi hai keh hamarey is pyarey Pegham.net par bohat sey achhey achhey zoq rakhney waley shuraa bhi mojood hain, jin key liye ham bohat si duaein kartey hain.

Jahan itney achhey achhey shaair mojud hon to kyun na wahan par aik game aisa bhi shuru kiya jaey jahan shairana andaaz mein baat cheet ho? Isi baat ko soch kar ham yeh thread shuru kartey hain jis mein SAWAAL aur JAWAAB shair mein diya jaey ga aur shair APNA ZAATI KHALIS PURE APNA hona chahiye :) :lol

Lijiye to aaghaz main karta hoon:


Merey honto ki muskaan bahaal ho gaee hai
meri to thi hi unki jaib bhi kangaal ho gaee hai :lol

ji to jawab???

sun ke arz-e-mud,da,aa wo muskura kar reh gaey
mere armaaN dil hi dil meiN tilmila kar reh gaey
najma

[Masood]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

sun ke arz-e-mud,da,aa wo muskura kar reh gaey
mere armaaN dil hi dil meiN tilmila kar reh gaey
najma

yehi hai arz-e-haal yehi hai mudaa in aankhoon ka
khamosh hont kah dein haal meri dharkanoon ka

[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

wo kahani, jo dil pe lik,khii ho
aansuoN se bayaan hotii hay
najma

[Masood]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

wo kahani, jo dil pe lik,khii ho
aansuoN se bayaan hotii hay
najma

:rose :rose

tumhara gham hai mujh ko milla huwa
yehi phool hai dil mein khila huwa
masood

[Sagheer]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

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[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

jate huey, kisii ne kahaatha, ye yaad hay
NAJMA! mileNgay phir kabhi, jo zindagii rahii
najma ansar najma

[aik_lerki]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

tu nay lout kay aany ka vaada kiya thaa aik din
tere intazar mai ab tak dervaza khula rakha hai
aik lerki

[Masood]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

main aaoun ga yeh mera wadah hai sanam
bas tor na dena kabhi umeed ka bharam
masood

[aik_lerki]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

kaisay touty ga umeed ka bharam aay yaar
humko hai tum per hud say bhe zada aaitabaar
aik lerki

[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

yaqeen karne ko karloon maiN uski batoN par
magar wo roz naee baat suna deta hay
najma

[.]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

baat vohi jo dil paay asar kar jaye
raat vohi jo guzartay sehar kaar jaye





apni taraf say shair thonka hai :emb:

[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

[QUOTE=Aanchal]baat vohi jo dil paay asar kar jaye
raat vohi jo guzartay sehar kaar jaye







apni taraf say shair thonka hai






:lol :lol
koee baat naheeN aanchal!
aainda khayal rakhna.zara sher ko mazbootiii se ThoNkne ke liye keel bhii mazboot ho aur hathoRa bhi khoob bhaarii.:wink
:lol :lol :lol

aasmanoN pe tkhayyul ka guzar rakhtii hooN
dil ki baatoN ko jo samjhe, wo nazar rakhtii hooN
najma ansar najma
:)

[جنیداختر]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

yeh baat hi tu dil per asar nahi karti
lagta hai woh kisi aur ki bato ke zar-e-asar hai

[najma]

Re: Shairiana Muqabla

is tarah sheesha-e-dil TooT ke bikhra hay mira
maiN ne chaahaa keh uThaa loN, to uThaa bhi na sakii
najma ansar najma