Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[moomo]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

...soryy is main 2 mistaks hain .....mian dubara likh rhi hoon

Praim Katha ki Anit na koi..
Kitni bar isay Dohrain..
Preet ki reet Anokhi sajan..
Kuch na mangain sab kuch pain..
Faiz on sy kia bat chupi hy..
Hum kuch Keh ker Kiun pachtain...

its correct:zuban:

Dear Anchal

ap ny abhi tak dising nahi kia :na: i m still waiting

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Dear Anchal

ap ny abhi tak dising nahi kia :na: i m still waiting

is leye kay aap nay KHALIL ko kaha tha :wk

[moomo]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

is leye kay aap nay KHALIL ko kaha tha :wk

ohhhhhh dearrrrrrrrr
sorry
ghalti sy ho agay hoo ga
but ab to ap ko hi keh rhi hoon:zuban:

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

ohhhhhh dearrrrrrrrr
sorry
ghalti sy ho agay hoo ga
but ab to ap ko hi keh rhi hoon:zuban:

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...947#post371947

[moomo]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...947#post371947

:salam: ...Anchal g thanx alott

bohot achi disining ki hy all cute

[Z.]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

thora sa homework meyri taraf sey bhi..its long one....agar possible hai aur agar nahi to koi masla nahi :D

Shehar ki raat aur main nashad-o-nakaara phiroonN
Jagmagati jaagti sarkooN peh aawara phriooN
Ghair ki basti hai kab tak dar badar maraa phirooN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Jhilmilate qumqumon ki raah mein zanjeer si
Raat ke hathon mein din ki mohani tasveer si
Mere seene par magar chalti hui shamsheer si
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Yeh roopehli chhaon yeh aakash par taaroN ka jaal
Jaise sufi ka tasavvur jaise aashiq ka khayaal
Aah lekin kon jaane kon samjhe jee ka haal
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Phir woh toota ik sitara phir woh chhooThi puljhaRi
Jane kis ki goad meiN aai yeh moti ki laRi
Hook si seenay meiN uThi choat si dil per paRi
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Raat hans hans kar yeh kehti hei ke maikhane meiN chal
Phir kisi shahnaz-e-lalarukh ke kaashane meiN chal
Yeh nahiN mumkin to phir ay dost veerane meiN chal
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Har taraf hei bikhri hui, rangeeniyaaN, r'aanaiyaaN
Har qadam par ishrateiN leti hui angRaiyaaN
BaRh rahi hei gaud phailai hoi ruswaaiyaaN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ai wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Raaste mein ruk ke dam le loon meri aadat nahiN
Laut kar vaapas chala jaaooN, meri fitrat nahiN
Aur koi hamnawa mil jaaye yeh qismat nahiN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Muntazir hei eik tofaan-e-bala mere liay
Ab bhi jane kitne dervazay heiN waa mere liay
Per museebat hei mera ahd-e-wafa mere liay
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Jee meiN aata hei ab ahd-e-wafa bi toR dooN
Un ko paa sakta hooN yeh aasra bi chhoR dooN
HaaN munasib hei yeh zanjeer-e-hava bi toR dooN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Ik mahal ki aarh se nikala woh peela mahtaab
Jaise mulla ka amama jaise baniye ki kitab
Jaise muflis ki jawani jaise beva ka shabaab
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Dil meiN ik shola bhaRak uTha hei aakhir kiya karooN
Mera paemaana chhalak uTha hei aakhir kiya karooN
Zakham seenay ka mehak uTha hei aakhir kiya karooN *
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Jee meiN aata hei murda chaand taray noch looN
Iss kinare noch looN us kinare noch looN
Aik du ka zikar kiya saaray ke saaray nauch looN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Muflisi aur yeh mazahir haiN nazar ke samane
SekRoN Changez-o-naadir haiN nazar ke samane
Sekron Sultan-o-Jabir hain nazar ke samne
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

Le ke eik eik changez ke hathooN se khanjar toR dooN
Taj per us ke damakta hei jo pathar toR dooN
Koi toRe ya na toRe meiN hi baRh ke toR dooN
Ay gham-e-dil kya karooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

BaRh ke is indar'sabha ka saz-o-samaan phoonk dooN
Iss ka gulshan phoonk dooN us ka shabistan phoonk dooN
Takhat-e-sultan kya main sara qasr-e-sultan phoonk dooN
Ay gham-e-dil kya kaooN, ay wahshat-e-dil kya karooN

[sawera]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

*HARJAI*
wo jis ki chandni sarey jahaan pey chai hai
kiya yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai??

yeh chandni hi teri ruswai hai
han yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai...

wo mery pass b hai or uski yad b aye hai
kiya yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai??

wo tery pass hai tu kion uski yad aye hai
han yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai...

uski yadein hain sath mery phir b tanhai hai
kiya yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai??

bhool ja usko or yeh jo tanhai hai
haan yeh sach hai k wo harjai hai....

kesy bhool jaoon usey ,kesy keh doon k wo harjai hai
k ! mery dil pey tu 'sawera' usi ki parchai hai
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aslam o laikum,
kesy hain app sab ... mainey kuch poetry likhi thi ,agher app sab ko achi lagey tu pleez meri poetry design ker deyn ,
agher achi na lagey tu koi baat nai it,s oky

[crying eyes]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Munir Niazi ki ye nazam bahut hi laajwaab hai main chahti hoon k aap main se koi iss ko design ker saktaa hai plz dil se iss nazam ko compose kare especially(w hanif , hala .aania aur gul )aap k design kiye huwe poetry maine dekhi hain ......


DUAA


Meri duaien bohat pechida hain!!
Shaam ka waqt hai
Duaon ki maanzoori ka waqt hai
Main kaisi duaon ko yaad karoon
Meri duaien pechida bohat hain!!
Mere DIL main bohat be-asar duaien hain
Bohat duaon k bajaaye mere dil main
Ek DUA hoti tu kinta acha tha.
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MUNIR NIAZI

[shakeeel]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Munir Niazi ki ye nazam bahut hi laajwaab hai main chahti hoon k aap main se koi iss ko design ker saktaa hai plz dil se iss nazam ko compose kare especially(w hanif , hala .aania aur gul )aap k design kiye huwe poetry maine dekhi hain ......

aap ki list mein mera naam nahin hai..........:cc:
mein design karney wala tha k list dekh li....
aap wait karen k in mein se koi is ko design karey

[crying eyes]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Shakeel bhai Plz: zaroor aap is ko design kar sakte hain
bus bahut hee khoobsoorat andaz main (DIL SE)
mere pass aik image bhi hai (is duaa k liye) woh main
pegham main kaise upload karoon

ye duaa mujhe pasand hai
Munir Niazi ne kiya likha

i'm waiting 4 rep

[shakeeel]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Shakeel bhai Plz: zaroor aap is ko design kar sakte hain
bus bahut hee khoobsoorat andaz main (DIL SE)
mere pass aik image bhi hai (is duaa k liye) woh main
pegham main kaise upload karoon

ye duaa mujhe pasand hai
Munir Niazi ne kiya likha

i'm waiting 4 rep

aap image ko yahan par hi reply mein upload kar den, mein design kar dun ga

[crying eyes]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

thanx shakeel bhai

[crying eyes]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

thanx shakeel bhai

[crying eyes]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Shakeel bhai ye hai wo image verna aap khud hee design kar lien aapn pasad ke mutabaq

[shakeeel]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Shakeel bhai ye hai wo image verna aap khud hee design kar lien aapn pasad ke mutabaq

image is very small, anyway i will try..........just give me one more day