Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Mohtarma AANCHAL Sahiba, AADAB,
aap meri bhi aik farmaish puri kar dain plz, meri iss nazm kee desinging kar dejay, aap kee nawazish ho gee,

Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

gehna nazm for desingning

Mohtarma AANCHAL Sahiba, AADAB,
aap meri bhi aik farmaish puri kar dain plz, meri iss nazm kee desinging kar dejay, aap kee nawazish ho gee,

Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

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Re: gehna nazm for desingning

Mohtarma AANCHAL Sahiba, AADAB,
aap meri bhi aik farmaish puri kar dain plz, meri iss nazm kee desinging kar dejay, aap kee nawazish ho gee,

Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

ji zaror design kar daian gay ....
aap ki nazam main 2 alfaaz samjh nahi aye unhay plzz theek say bata daian ...aik 4th line main hai "jarr" .aik 6th line

[shakeeel]

Re: gehna nazm for desingning

ji zaror design kar daian gay ....
aap ki nazam main 2 alfaaz samjh nahi aye unhay plzz theek say bata daian ...aik 4th line main hai "jarr" .aik 6th line

Adaab , aanchal sis, yeh lafz "JARR" hi hai, jaisey nageeney ko angoothi mein jarrna...... aur 6th line mein aap ko jo lafz samjh nahin aaya wo KOKEY hai shayed, sirf eladha kar ke likha gaya hai, KOKA to aap janti hain na jo NAAK mein pehna jata hai?aap is ko design kijiye, kuch din mein mein bhi try karun ga. aap ka bohat shukria, ALLAH aap ko khush rakhen. AAMIN

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Mohatarma AANCHAL sahiba, aadab,
jin alfazkay baray mein aap nay pocha hai mohtram shakeel sb nay un kee bilkul sahi wazahat kar dee hai, ye alfaaz "jarr" aur "Kokay" ( nose pin) hee hain, aap kee sahoolat kay liye mein saath inpage kee file bhi attach kar raha hoon.
aap kay haloos ka bohot bohot shukriya,
Dua Goo,
Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy
03008725445

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

please aik aur famrmaish puri kar dejay

Mohtarma Aanchal sahiba, AADAAB,
aLLAH RABUL IZZAT KE REHMATAIN AUR BARKARIN AAP PER NAZIL HOTI RAHAIN, (Ameen)
aik dafa phir aik farmaish lay kar aap kee khidmat mein haazir hoon, aap please meri iss nazm kee designing kar dejay.
nazm inpage file mein aur gif file mein saath attach kar raha hoon.
aap kee bohot nawazish hoo ge.
naik taman.naoon katy saath,
Dua Goo,
Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

ok aap zara intazaar kejey ham designing kar daian gay :rose

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

aap ki inpage file shayad attach nahi hovi ha :cc:

[moomo]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

AOA khalil bhai ye 1 shair to Dising ker dain...:blush:


Praim Katha Ki Anit na Koi...
Kitni Bar Isay DOhrain ..
Piar ki Reet Anokhi Sajan ..
Kuch na mangian sab kuch Pain..
Fain on sy kia bat chupi hy..
Hum kuch keh ker kiun pachtain..
POET name...FAIZ AHMAD FAIZ

is dising ker dain :zuban:

[moomo]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

AOA khalil bhai ye 1 shair to Dising ker dain...:blush:


Praim Katha Ki Anit na Koi...
Kitni Bar Isay DOhrain ..
Piar ki Reet Anokhi Sajan ..
Kuch na mangian sab kuch Pain..
Fain on sy kia bat chupi hy..
Hum kuch keh ker kiun pachtain..
POET name...FAIZ AHMAD FAIZ

is dising ker dain :zuban:

...soryy is main 2 mistaks hain .....mian dubara likh rhi hoon

Praim Katha ki Anit na koi..
Kitni bar isay Dohrain..
Preet ki reet Anokhi sajan..
Kuch na mangain sab kuch pain..
Faiz on sy kia bat chupi hy..
Hum kuch Keh ker Kiun pachtain...

its correct:zuban:

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

in page file of "sathi ho tum to" nazm. "Aap ki farmaish"

AADAB, mOHTARMA ANCHAL SAHIBA, INPAGE FILE BHE BHEJ RAHA HOON JO PEHLAY ATTACH NAHI HO SAKI THEE.
AAP JAB FARIGH HOON TO PLEASE ISS KEE ACHI C PEHLAY KEE TARAH DESIGNING KAR DEJAY GA,
THANKS IN ADVANCE.
Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

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Re: in page file of "sathi ho tum to" nazm. "Aap ki farmaish"

AADAB, mOHTARMA ANCHAL SAHIBA, INPAGE FILE BHE BHEJ RAHA HOON JO PEHLAY ATTACH NAHI HO SAKI THEE.
AAP JAB FARIGH HOON TO PLEASE ISS KEE ACHI C PEHLAY KEE TARAH DESIGNING KAR DEJAY GA,
THANKS IN ADVANCE.
Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

ok ji ham designing kar daian gay :salam:
yeh aik hi nazam hai pori ? ya alag alag images main is ko dalna hai ?

[Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Respected AANchal jee, AADAAB,
YE AIK HEE NAZM HAI ISS KO AIK HEE IMAGE MEIN RAKHNA HAI.
aTIQ-UR-rEHMAN sAFFY

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Respected AANchal jee, AADAAB,
YE AIK HEE NAZM HAI ISS KO AIK HEE IMAGE MEIN RAKHNA HAI.
aTIQ-UR-rEHMAN sAFFY

ok sahi :salam:

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Respected AANchal jee, AADAAB,
YE AIK HEE NAZM HAI ISS KO AIK HEE IMAGE MEIN RAKHNA HAI.
aTIQ-UR-rEHMAN sAFFY

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