Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[sheem]

Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

zaberdast work bhai

thanx for sharing :phool:

[Wafa]

Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

:clap: aap ne to bohot ache composing ki hai
thanks for sharing shakeel ji :)

[shakeeel]

Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

zaberdast work bhai

thanx for sharing :phool:

aap ke pasand karne ka shukria jee

[shakeeel]

Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

zaberdast work bhai

thanx for sharing :phool:

aap ke pasand karne ka shukria jee

[shakeeel]

Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

:clap: aap ne to bohot ache composing ki hai
thanks for sharing shakeel ji :)

aap ka bahat shukria "wafa" jee

[Aania]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah
meraa vajuud hai jalate hue makaa.N kii tarah

bharii bahaar kaa siinaa hai zaKhm zaKhm magar
sabaa ne gaaye hai.n lorii shafiiq man kii tarah

vo kaun thaa jo barahanaa badan chaTTaano.n se
lipaT gayaa thaa kabhii bahr-e-bekaraa.N kii tarah

sakuut-e-dil to jaziiraa hai barf kaa lekin
teraa Khuluus hai suuraj ke saayebaa.N kii tarah

mai.n ik Khvaab sahii aap kii amaanat huu.N
mujhe sambhaal ke rakhiyegaa jism-o-jaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to soch ke vo shaKhs kis qadar thaa bula.nd
jo bichh gayaa tere qadmo.n me.n aasmaa.N kii tarah

bulaa rahaa hai mujhe phir kisii badan kaa basa.nt
guzar na jaaye ye rut bhii kahii.n Khizaa.N kii tarah

lahuu hai nisf sadii kaa jis ke aabagiine me.n
na dekh "Prem" use chashm-e-arGavaa.N kii tarah


me ko ye ghazal bana ke do plz... :cc:

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

SIRF AIK SHAIR

NUSRAT FATEH ALI KHAN KI GHAZAL KA....

JADON DA TOON RUSS GEYON SAADAY NAAL DHOLNA
BHUL GEYA KAAWAAN NOON BANERAY UTTAY BOLNA

:rose

http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=10023

http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php?t=10489

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jiya demand

:rose

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Withoutsoul demand

:rose

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Re: Withoutsoul demand

:rose :rose

[*Rida*]

Re: jiya demand

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Yaaram]

Re: jiya demand

Bohat khooB :)

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Re: withoutsoul Ki Farmaesh

great :salam:

aap aap ki farimish walye thread main is ka link day dia karain takay pata chalye kay is banday ki farmish poori hoo gai hain :rose main samajh rahi the abhi tak in ki demand kisi nay design nahi ki :D: or kal main nay bhi aik try maar li the :khi: abhi is thread pay nazar pari hai

[shakeeel]

Re: Withoutsoul demand

dono hi bohat zabar dast banai hain aap ne,
(mein ne composing ke baad withoutsoul ko link PM kar diya tha)

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Re: Withoutsoul demand

dono hi bohat zabar dast banai hain aap ne,
(mein ne composing ke baad withoutsoul ko link PM kar diya tha)

jahan members demand kartay hain vohan bhi is ka link day dia karain takay pata chal jaye is member ki demand poori hoo chuki hai pher ham next member ki demand pay kaam shuru kar dia karain gay :salam: