Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[ADNAN.S]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

eik aur try..

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[ADNAN.S]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

salaam aania g......yeh ashar compose ker k pesh ker raha hooon umeed hai aap ko pasand aaein gay...

[Aania]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

thnx u so much sabhi achey hain .. aik bohat horror bana diya hai ... :cc:
wo hand ke ooper se eyes :cry
baaqi sabhi bohat zabar10 hain ..
khush rahye .. :)

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Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

salaam.....

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[*Rida*]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar


Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

Alone aaap nay saray hi images buht zabardast banaye hain

[jugnoo217]

Re: Mahek demand

thanx everybody...................

[shakeeel]

Re: Aania's demand

very nice
(aur hamara kaam to hai ji ghalti dekhna aur mere khayal mein "barhanna" alif se nahin hota? kaya khayal hai?)

[shakeeel]

Re: Mahek demand

welldone Nadeem ...bohat umda

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Mahek demand

nice sharing

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

10 out of 10

[jugnoo217]

Re: Aania ki demand ...ashaar

bahut achhay images hain, nice composing

[jiya ali]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

FASLEY:-
Meri zuban sey lafz tak key fasley
Meri rooh sey jism tak key fasley
Samander sey kinarey tak key fasley
Ankhon sey ansoo tak key fasley
Sansoon sey dherkan tak key fasley
Zehan sey sooch tak key fasley
Piyar sey izhar tak key fasley
Muhabat sey janoon tak key fasley
Wafa sey be wafai tak key fasley
Pani sey yaks tak key fasley
Khawab sey tabeer tak key fasley
Qadmoon sey manzil fasley
Raat sey sehar tak key fasley
Chand sey merey angan tak key fasley
Mita sucko tu!
*AAo *(by jiya)
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz anchal dear background acha hona chahye aur urdu main

[jiya ali]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

zindagi sey ziada jis ko piyar kertey hain
hum tu bas ussika intezar kertey hain

jab ye sochtey hain wo be-qarar hongey
na chain ata hai hum khud bhi be-qarar rehtey hain

had sey bher jati hai jab deewangi tu jana
hum har chand ko unka chahra kehtey hain

dukhon ki iss be-reham duniya main
hum her dukh ko unka tuhfa samjh ker sehtey hain

iss sey bher kiya muhabat hogi jiya
merey ghum unki ankhon sey behtey hain
jiya
aur ye bhi anchal

[mahek]

Re: Mahek demand

bahotttttttttt khoob surat banai hai aap ne
thanx a lotz:salam:

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: Mahek demand

bohth khoob kaha hai Aap ne ... thanks for shairing..