Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[shakeeel]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Assalamo allaikum


Mujhey is geet per aik composing chahiye :)

Tu jo nahin hai to kuchh bhi nahin hai
yeh mana keh mehfil jawan hai haseen hai

nigahon mein tu hai, yeh dil jhoomta hai
na'janey muhabbat ki rahon mein kya hai
jo tu hamsafar hai to kuchh gham nahin hai

woh aaein na aaein jami hain nigahein
sitaron ney dekhi hain, jhuk jhuk key rahein
yeh dil bad'guman hai nazar ko yaqin hai

Salam. yeh ek geet hai jis ko S.B.John ne gaya tha, film ka nam tha "apna paraya"
well i will try to compose it.

[shakeeel]

Masood's demand

Salam masood bhai, mein ne ek koshish ki hai, ek do aur bhi kar raha hun , aap ko jo pasand aa jaye?
( yeh song complete nahin hai, is ka ek aur sher bhi hai:
" wa'de bhula den qasam tor den wo
halat pe apni hamen chor den wo"

lekan is ka aakhri hissa mein bhool gaya hun, agar kisi ko pata ho to yahan bata de. complete ho kar aur bhi acha lage ga.

[Aania]

Re: Masood's demand

tu jo nahin hai tu kuch bhi nahin hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai , haseen hai ....

nigahon main tu hai , yeh dil dhoont ta hai
nigahon main tu hai.........
na janey mohabbat ki rahon main kia hai
na janey mohabat ki rahon main kia hai.......
rahon main kia hai.............

yeh dil bad guman hai , nazar ko yaqeen hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai , haseen hai
tu jo nahin hai ................................

woh ayen na ayen , jami hain nigahen
woh ayen na ayen , jami hain nigahen .....
sitaron ne dekhi hain jhuk jhuk ke rahen ....
sitaron ne dekhi hai jhuk jhuk ke rahen ......

jo tu hamsafar hai tu kuch ghum nahin hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai hasen hai ....

tu jo nahin hai tu kuch bhi nahin hai .....
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai haseen hai ....

[Masood]

Re: Masood's demand

shakeel bohat khoobsurat image bnaya hai - thanks. AUr haan aik chhoti si ghalti ho gaee thi jo aania ney drust kar di hai :) thanx

[shakeeel]

Re: Masood's demand

tu jo nahin hai tu kuch bhi nahin hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai , haseen hai ....

nigahon main tu hai , yeh dil dhoont ta hai
nigahon main tu hai.........
na janey mohabbat ki rahon main kia hai
na janey mohabat ki rahon main kia hai.......
rahon main kia hai.............

yeh dil bad guman hai , nazar ko yaqeen hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai , haseen hai
tu jo nahin hai ................................

woh ayen na ayen , jami hain nigahen
woh ayen na ayen , jami hain nigahen .....
sitaron ne dekhi hain jhuk jhuk ke rahen ....
sitaron ne dekhi hai jhuk jhuk ke rahen ......

jo tu hamsafar hai tu kuch ghum nahin hai
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai hasen hai ....

tu jo nahin hai tu kuch bhi nahin hai .....
yeh mana ke mehfil jawan hai haseen hai ....

Thanx for corection aania, agar aap ke pas yeh song hai to last wala shehr bhi likh den na.....:cc:

[Aania]

Re: Masood's demand

Thanx for corection aania, agar aap ke pas yeh song hai to last wala shehr bhi likh den na.....:cc:

dhoondney wala kaam :cc:
check kerti hoon :lpop:

[Aania]

Re: Masood's demand

Salam masood bhai, mein ne ek koshish ki hai, ek do aur bhi kar raha hun , aap ko jo pasand aa jaye?
( yeh song complete nahin hai, is ka ek aur sher bhi hai:
" wa'de bhula den qasam tor den wo
halat pe apni hamen chor den wo"

lekan is ka aakhri hissa mein bhool gaya hun, agar kisi ko pata ho to yahan bata de. complete ho kar aur bhi acha lage ga.

hmmm ye song... S.B John ne 1959 mein jese gaya aap ne wesey hi likha in shape of ghazal... :cc:
aur itney hi sha'r gaaye hein unhon ne... :cc:
ye song main ne gallery mein upload kia hai aur showbiz main us ka link mil jaaye gaa aap ko originally sung by S B JOHN (1959)
1960 or 1958 main ye song Lata n Rafi ne bhi gaya hai movie (Savera) ke liye , aayaa us mein is ghazal ke kitney ashar hain... i cudnt find yet... :( lekin koshish ker rahi hooon ke mil jaaye ne-ways...
jitna hai .. kaafi hai isi se guzara kartey hein... :lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Masood's demand

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot zabaradst Shakeel

FeaamnAllah

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Masood's demand

wah wah wah........ kiya hi baat hai.......as song ke aur app ke desigen' ke

[jiya ali]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

salam anchel plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz is poem ko desing kerwana hai plzzzz kerdein
bohut hi cutes sa back ground ho aur font urdu ho

and in the end a gift 4 zeeshan likha ho

[shakeeel]

Jia Ali ki demand

Salam, nazam bohat lambi hai,is liye image bhi lamba banana para,
aur text ko chota rakhna mjboori hai.
agar pasand na aaye to bata den, mazeed try ki ja sakti hai.
Kush rahiye.

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Re: Jia Ali ki demand

kafi lambi poetry the , lekan aap nay buhat achay tareekay say design ki hai :thmbup: :rose

[shakeeel]

Re: Jia Ali ki demand

Ek Aur Try Ki Hai

[Muhammad Khalil]

meri demand plz compose it Shakeel bro

Pyaar Ke Deep Jalane wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai
Apni Jaan Se Jane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.


Hijar K Gehri Zakham Mile To Mujh Ko Kuch Ehsaas Hua
Pagal Ko Samjhane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai


Jaan Se Pyare Logon Se Bhi Kuch Kuch Perda Lazim Hai
Sari Baat Batane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.

Khwabon Mein Bi Anmol Milan K Sapne Dekhte Rehte Hai
Neendon Mein Muskane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.


Iss Johti Nagri Mein Hum Ne Yehi Hamesha Dekha Hai
Sachi Baat Batane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.


Pyar Jinhein Ho Jaye Un Ko Chain Bhala Keb Mill Pata Hai
Shab Ber Ashk Bahane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.


Apni Zaat Ke Ujrey Gulshan Se Wo Pyaar Kahan Kerte Hai
Auroon Ko Mehkane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.


Us Ke ISHQ Mein Bheeg Ke Ham Ko Yeh Ehsaas Hua
Dil Ki Baat Mein Aane Wale Kuch Kuch Pagal Hote Hai.

[jazmin]

Re: meri demand plz compose it Shakeel bro

subhanALLAH*

pure TRUTH*