Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

[blossom420]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

coolllllllllllllllllllllllllll

[ray_of_hope]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

NIce bohat khoob thanx for sharing

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

shummu ji bohot ache nazam likhe hai....mughe pasand aae....lekhte rahea :rose

thanx wafaa jee :rose warna to kuch logon ko to is nazm pe aiteraaz tha ke female hone ki wajah se mujhe aisa likhna shobha nahi deta ..lagta hai un logon ne parween shakir ko nahi parha jo ke ek mustanid shaaira thin aur aise kayi jazbon ko badi khoobsurati se kalaamband kiya tha :)

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

ws aur bahut shukriya yahan tashreef laane ka aur hamare kalaam ko parhne aur saraahne ka....hum aap ko is bazm mein khushaamadeed kehte hain :rose

aate rahiyega..!

shumaila

[shummu]

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v nice shummu ji

thank u so much Muqadas jee... btw very nice nick :)

[shummu]

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coolllllllllllllllllllllllllll

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

NIce bohat khoob thanx for sharing

shukriyaa ise parhne aur saraahne ka :)

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Salam ahl-e-bazm!
abhi baiThe baiThe maazi ki yaadon meiN kho si gayi thi ,aankheiN nam ho gayiN aur yak lakht ek nazm ho gayi..pata nahi kisi laayaq hai bhi ke nahi kyonki amooman main ghazlien likhti hoon nazmien nahi...nazm behad mukhtasir hai....aur agar aap ise feel kar sake to aap ko ye nazm kuch na bolte hue bhi bahut kuch bolti hui nazar aayegi ...guzaarish hai ki is ke mehz lafzon pe na jaayein balki is ke andar pinhaan jazbon ko samajhne ki koshish karein.

*KISS*
na aawaaz de kar
na jhinjhoR kar..
jagaataa tha mujh ko
hameshaa hi woh...
miree band aankhoN
ko bas choom kar

BEHOODAH COMMENTS ARE NOT ALLOWED! - Masood!

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

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['SamRazi']

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Salam ahl-e-bazm!
abhi baiThe baiThe maazi ki yaadon meiN kho si gayi thi ,aankheiN nam ho gayiN aur yak lakht ek nazm ho gayi..pata nahi kisi laayaq hai bhi ke nahi kyonki amooman main ghazlien likhti hoon nazmien nahi...nazm behad mukhtasir hai....aur agar aap ise feel kar sake to aap ko ye nazm kuch na bolte hue bhi bahut kuch bolti hui nazar aayegi ...guzaarish hai ki is ke mehz lafzon pe na jaayein balki is ke andar pinhaan jazbon ko samajhne ki koshish karein.

*KISS*
na aawaaz de kar
na jhinjhoR kar..
jagaataa tha mujh ko
hameshaa hi woh...
miree band aankhoN
ko bas choom kar

so sweeeeeeeet ............. :phool:

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

so sweeeeeeeet ............. :phool:

thank u....

[justqamar1]

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very nive

[Masood]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Bohat ghatiya nazam he...bulke bohat se bhi ziada ghatiya he...bulke us se bhi ziada ghatiya he...bulke jitna mein soochta hoon us se bhi ziada ghatiya he.

aur mein kia kahon :donno:

Aamir,
Insaani soch key ghatiya honey ki aur bohat sari elamaat hain, kuchh samney hoti hain aur kuchh posheedah! Kuchh log apney jazbaat ka izhaar sar-e-aam kartey hain aur kuchh ghut ghut ker martey hain aur maar detey hain!!

Shummu ney jis baat ka izhaar kiya hai, woh aik aurat ki nafsiyaati aarzu hai apney mehboob apney shohar apney us mard key liye jis sey woh wabasta hoti hai - mera dawa hai keh Maii Hawa sey ley ker - yes, aap ki apni khawateen tak - har aurat ki aarzu hai keh uska shohar ussey is andaaz mein chahey jiska izhaar Shummu ney kiya hai - mera yeh dawa bhi hai keh HAR mard chhup chhup ker auraton sey aisi batein suneney ki khawahish rakhtey hain, agar aurat sar-e-aam iska izhaar kar dey to kya buraii hai???

Shummu ney jiskey liye likha hai, main us ko aap sey bohat behtar janta hoon aur shummu ko bhi main aap sey bohat behtar janta hoon - lehaza jis baat ki aap ko samajh nahin us per tabsraa na kiya kijiye!

[La'hasil]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Aik Mukhtasir Maghar Khoobsurat Nazm Khoobsurat Ehssasat Liye howay :)

[MeemSheenAlif]

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nice