Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

[shummu]

*KISS*
na aawaaz de kar
na jhinjhoR kar..
jagaataa tha mujh ko
hameshaa hi woh...
miree band aankhoN
ko bas choom kar

[Masood]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

:rose
Kabhi kabhi alfaaz woh kuchh biyaan nahin kar saktey jo dil kehna chahta hai. Aisey hi kuchh taa'sar ab hain keh is mukhtasir sey pyari si nazam mein jo biyaan hai uska ehsaas wohi mehsoos kar saktey hain jo is ehsaas sey aashna ho. Kuchh logon key paas ehsaas to bohat sey hain magar woh inhein qalam'band nahin kar saktey, shummu qudrat ney aap ko woh khoobi di hai keh chand alfaaz mein bohat kuchh kah jati hai :) Khush rahiye aur hamesha isi tarha likhti rahiye :)

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

hummm ....... nice izhar e muhbbat......
but "sub" ko yeh "chance" nahin miltaa hahahahahah
any ways achi koshis hai..

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

:rose
Kabhi kabhi alfaaz woh kuchh biyaan nahin kar saktey jo dil kehna chahta hai. Aisey hi kuchh taa'sar ab hain keh is mukhtasir sey pyari si nazam mein jo biyaan hai uska ehsaas wohi mehsoos kar saktey hain jo is ehsaas sey aashna ho. Kuchh logon key paas ehsaas to bohat sey hain magar woh inhein qalam'band nahin kar saktey, shummu qudrat ney aap ko woh khoobi di hai keh chand alfaaz mein bohat kuchh kah jati hai :) Khush rahiye aur hamesha isi tarha likhti rahiye :)

Adaab masood jee..hamesha ki tarah ek baar bhi khule dil se hausla afzaayi farmaane ka dili shukriya qubool farmaayeiN...pehli baar nazm likhi thi....mujhe khushi hui aapko achchi lagi..thanx :rose

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

hummm ....... nice izhar e muhbbat......
but "sub" ko yeh "chance" nahin miltaa hahahahahah
any ways achi koshis hai..

thanx :)

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

bahot Khoob shummu...achchhaa Khayaal thaa aur Dhang se adaa kiyaa. bahot shukria share karne ke liye :rose

bahut shukriya Jhumroo .jee....aap ko hamari adna si koshish pasand aayi :salam:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Salam ahl-e-bazm!
abhi baiThe baiThe maazi ki yaadon meiN kho si gayi thi ,aankheiN nam ho gayiN aur yak lakht ek nazm ho gayi..pata nahi kisi laayaq hai bhi ke nahi kyonki amooman main ghazlien likhti hoon nazmien nahi...nazm behad mukhtasir hai....aur agar aap ise feel kar sake to aap ko ye nazm kuch na bolte hue bhi bahut kuch bolti hui nazar aayegi ...

*KISS*
na aawaaz de kar
na jhinjhoR kar..
jagaataa tha mujh ko
hameshaa hi woh...
miree band aankhoN
ko bas choom kar

ahan kuch bhi na kaha aur keh bhi gaey....shayad aisay hee mokon k liey kaha gaya hay:) ....chund mukhtasir se alfaaz mein mann k ehsas ko bht khobsurti se byan kia hay aap nay Shumaila ji:rose :rose

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

ahan kuch bhi na kaha aur keh bhi gaey....shayad aisay hee mokon k liey kaha gaya hay:) ....chund mukhtasir se alfaaz mein mann k ehsas ko bht khobsurti se byan kia hay aap nay Shumaila ji:rose :rose

THANK U SO MUCH ESHAA JEE :rose :)

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Sallam
janab bohat hi piyrei nazam hai .......................waqe agar meshsooos kia jauye to ye bohat hi geri baaaaaaat hai ..........aap k dil ne jo baaaaaaaaat mehsoos ki yaqennan ham ne bhi wo mehsooos ki great............keep it up

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

Sallam
janab bohat hi piyrei nazam hai .......................waqe agar meshsooos kia jauye to ye bohat hi geri baaaaaaat hai ..........aap k dil ne jo baaaaaaaaat mehsoos ki yaqennan ham ne bhi wo mehsooos ki great............keep it up

shukriya ise parhne aur mehsoos karne ka :)

[vajiha]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

very nice !!!

[Wafa]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

shummu ji bohot ache nazam likhe hai....mughe pasand aae....lekhte rahea :rose

[MUTFANIN]

[shummu]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

very nice !!!

Thank u very much..!

[MuQadas]

Re: Ek behad mukhtasir nazm ..

v nice shummu ji