Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

[withlove]

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Moin sahib.. aap ki umdah nazam eik baar phir se parhi aur waisay hi taza laggi ... Bohat khoob.. share kernay ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[Aik Lamha]

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Moin sahib.. aap ki umdah nazam eik baar phir se parhi aur waisay hi taza laggi ... Bohat khoob.. share kernay ka Behad Shukria..:rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

Thanx withlove :)
aap ka buhat buhat shukriya.. :)

[ShAnI]

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Lamha bhai itz jus supebbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb!

[Aik Lamha]

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Lamha bhai itz jus supebbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb!

Thanx Shani.. meray shayer... /yhug

[ur_friend]

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bhoat khoab Moin bht acha likha ha :rose

[Aik Lamha]

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bhoat khoab Moin bht acha likha ha :rose

Thanx ur_friend.. :)

[muskaan]

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thanx Muskaaan.... Nazam pasand kernay ka shukriya..

khush raho aur mein umeed karti hoon share kartai raho gai :rose

[kanwal]

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:rose

aik aur bohat khoobsurat nazm :)

bohat acha likhtey hain aap share kartey raha karain :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Dil chahta he ke waday ke mutabik tari tareef mein zameen aasman aik ker doon :lol

Lekin hakeekat yeh he ke ager mein sirf Very Nice likh doon to teri poetry se insaaf nahi ho ga Tu mahaan shair he meri jaan murgi ke anday :clap: aakhir tuj pe mera bhi to kisi had tak asar he :khi:

P.S. yaar tu itni mushkil mushkil baatein sooch kese leta he :lol

[Aik Lamha]

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:rose

aik aur bohat khoobsurat nazm :)

bohat acha likhtey hain aap share kartey raha karain :rose

thanx Kanwal...

aap ka husn-i-nazar hay janab....
agar aap wahi HG wali kanwal hein tou hum tou aap kay FANs mein atay hein... aur aap ki taraf say ta'areef hamaray liye aik sarmaye ki haisiat rakhti hay :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Aik aur baat, yaar is section mein to sabi bohat serious ho ke jawaab dete hein..aisa kyoon :-s

[Aik Lamha]

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Dil chahta he ke waday ke mutabik tari tareef mein zameen aasman aik ker doon :lol

Lekin hakeekat yeh he ke ager mein sirf Very Nice likh doon to teri poetry se insaaf nahi ho ga Tu mahaan shair he meri jaan murgi ke anday :clap: aakhir tuj pe mera bhi to kisi had tak asar he :khi:

P.S. yaar tu itni mushkil mushkil baatein sooch kese leta he :lol

konsa wada.. kaisa wada? :lol

teri dhaki chupi ta'areef per mein tera shuker guzaar hoon... :phool:

P.S. konsi mushkil batein?

[Aik Lamha]

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Aik aur baat, yaar is section mein to sabi bohat serious ho ke jawaab dete hein..aisa kyoon :-s

section bhi tou serious hay na.... :cc:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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konsa wada.. kaisa wada? :lol

teri dhaki chupi ta'areef per mein tera shuker guzaar hoon... :phool:

P.S. konsi mushkil batein?

Abay mein ne wada kiya tha na ke chahay mujay samaj aaye ya na aaye teri tareef mein zameen aasman aik zaroor karon ga :D

Jese umeed thi waisa hi hua...samaj to nahi aai, lekin tere mushkil mushkil alfaz :eek: ko perh ker itna andaza zaroor ho gaya ke tu ne jo bhi likha he acha hi likha ho ga :D

Aik baar Quaid-e-Azam Angreezi mein takreer ker rahay thay, aur aik meri tarah ka un-perh baray enhmaak se takreer sun raha tha, kisi ne us-paindu se poocha ke tujay to angreezi nahi aati tu itnay shook se takreer kyoon sun raha he. Wo un-perh bola, ke waqei mujay samaj to nahi aa aati, lekin Wo (Quaid-e-Azam) jo bhi keh rahay hein such keh rahay hein.

Is liye tu jo bhi likhta he...bohat acha likhta he :lol

[Aik Lamha]

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Abay mein ne wada kiya tha na ke chahay mujay samaj aaye ya na aaye teri tareef mein zameen aasman aik zaroor karon ga :D

Jese umeed thi waisa hi hua...samaj to nahi aai, lekin tere mushkil mushkil alfaz :eek: ko perh ker itna andaza zaroor ho gaya ke tu ne jo bhi likha he acha hi likha ho ga :D

Aik baar Quaid-e-Azam Angreezi mein takreer ker rahay thay, aur aik meri tarah ka un-perh baray enhmaak se takreer sun raha tha, kisi ne us-paindu se poocha ke tujay to angreezi nahi aati tu itnay shook se takreer kyoon sun raha he. Wo un-perh bola, ke waqei mujay samaj to nahi aa aati, lekin Wo (Quaid-e-Azam) jo bhi keh rahay hein such keh rahay hein.

Is liye tu jo bhi likhta he...bohat acha likhta he :lol

hahahahaha..... haan theak hay... .yaad agaya...:)

mujhay ma'aloom hay tu urdu say itna bhi na balad nahin hay.... khuwa mukhuwa mein chawalein na maar.. /slap