Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

boht umdah Aik lumha, aik bar phir aap ne maidan maar liya hey, khush rahiye humesha aur humaray liye achi see,pyari see nazmein likhti rahiye.:rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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hahahahaha..... haan theak hay... .yaad agaya...:)

mujhay ma'aloom hay tu urdu say itna bhi na balad nahin hay.... khuwa mukhuwa mein chawalein na maar.. /slap

Haan yaar mein urdu se itna na balad nahi rahoon ga, teri poetry perhni shuru ker di he :D

[Yaaram]

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Pehli post aur Yaadgar post bohat achi post hay zabardast likha hay aapne AIk Lamha......Allah aap ko khush rakhe Ameen likhte raha karein acha likhte hain........:)

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Pehli post aur Yaadgar post bohat achi post hay zabardast likha hay aapne AIk Lamha......Allah aap ko khush rakhe Ameen likhte raha karein acha likhte hain........:)

Dekha Yaaram, Aik Lamha kitna intelligent, Zaheen, Shareef aur Masoom he...aakhir Mera doost he :lol

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

boht umdah Aik lumha, aik bar phir aap ne maidan maar liya hey, khush rahiye humesha aur humaray liye achi see,pyari see nazmein likhti rahiye.:rose

Thanx Muskan...
itnay achay alfaz mein ta'areef kernay per mein aap ka shuker guzaar hoon ... :rose

[Aik Lamha]

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Haan yaar mein urdu se itna na balad nahi rahoon ga, teri poetry perhni shuru ker di he :D

acha ab makhan nahin lagao ziada...

[Aik Lamha]

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Pehli post aur Yaadgar post bohat achi post hay zabardast likha hay aapne AIk Lamha......Allah aap ko khush rakhe Ameen likhte raha karein acha likhte hain........:)

Thanx Yaaram... hosla afzayee ka bay hud shukriya... :rose

[:Qassim:]

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Thanx Qasim... buhat khushi huwi ye jaan ker kay aap ko ye adna si kawish bhi pasand ayee...

buhat shukriya

Bhai agar aapkii kaaviSHaiN adna haiN to phir maiN to kisii shumaar meN hi naheiN :tauba

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

Dekha Yaaram, Aik Lamha kitna intelligent, Zaheen, Shareef aur Masoom he...aakhir Mera doost he :lol

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

Bhai agar aapkii kaaviSHaiN adna haiN to phir maiN to kisii shumaar meN hi naheiN :tauba

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Bhai... takalluf bar taraf, aap ki shayeri tou bay hud khoobsoorat hoti hay... mein kisi mubalgha arayeee say kaaam nahin lay raha.... aap ki shayeri meri shayeri say behter hay... :):phool:

[:Qassim:]

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Bhai... takalluf bar taraf, aap ki shayeri tou bay hud khoobsoorat hoti hay... mein kisi mubalgha arayeee say kaaam nahin lay raha.... aap ki shayeri meri shayeri say behter hay... :):phool:

Bhai maiN to abhii tifl e maktab hooN ... seekh raha hooN ... Mujhay yeh haq bilkul naheiN hai k maiN apni sha'iri ko kisi aur kii sha'iri se barter yah behter samjhooN :embarasse

ChalaiN aap ka dil rakhnay k liay ham donoN kii sha'iri baraber hai!

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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acha ab makhan nahin lagao ziada...

Ub ziada Bread bunene ki kooshish mut karo

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

Ub ziada Bread bunene ki kooshish mut karo

Sehat kay hisaab say bread banna sirf tujhay hi zaib deita hay

[Aik Lamha]

Re: Aye Hasrat-i-Dil

Bhai maiN to abhii tifl e maktab hooN ... seekh raha hooN ... Mujhay yeh haq bilkul naheiN hai k maiN apni sha'iri ko kisi aur kii sha'iri se barter yah behter samjhooN :embarasse

ChalaiN aap ka dil rakhnay k liay ham donoN kii sha'iri baraber hai!

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

seekhnay ka amal tou ta dum-i-murg jaari hi rehta hay... :)

chaliye ji... jaisay aap kahain... :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Sehat kay hisaab say bread banna sirf tujhay hi zaib deita hay

aur tujay RUSK bunena :lol