~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

[kanch ki mehroo]

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

[ur_friend]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

ahan zaber10 nehrooo :x

[La'hasil]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Buhat khoob Mehroo :rose



Main Hasna Bhool gaye :)


buhat acha likha hai :)


khush raho hamesha :rose

[Yaaram]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Wah Mehroo kya kamal ki nazm likhi hay aapne ......dil ki baat keh dali :)

[muskaan]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

mehroo :)

bauhat hi khubsurat nazam likhi hai tum nai bauhat pyari :) bacha sirf itna kahoongi kai udasi ko kabhi dairai dalnai mat daina aik baar is ka mausam tehar jai to bauhat mushkil sai jaata hai /yhug

khush raho bauhat :)

[aas]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Bohot khoob...

Aap ke kalam ko zung bhula kaise lug sekta hai....

Main hunsna bhool gayi shayed.....very nice....

khush reho.....:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khooob pehli baar likhaa aur iss qader dil ko chhoonien wali kavish bahooot khoob likhti rahien aur humse share kerti rahien khush rahien

[withlove]

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main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

Mehroo ji ... aap ki pehli hi nazam iss qadar shandar laggi ke mazeed ka ishtiyaq paida ho gaya.. umeed hai ke jald hi eik aur umdah kawish nazar se guzri gi ... bohat si daad hazir hai .. Bohat Shukria.. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Buhat khoob mehrooo ,,

khush rahoo :)

[~*~khawab-e-gul~*~]

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nice Sharing

[Zindagi]

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main hansna bhool gayee ..

Bohat khoob... :rose

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

ahan zaber10 nehrooo :x

thxxx zeee..

khush raho

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Buhat khoob Mehroo :rose



Main Hasna Bhool gaye :)


buhat acha likha hai :)


khush raho hamesha :rose

bohat shukriya khawahish.....

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Wah Mehroo kya kamal ki nazm likhi hay aapne ......dil ki baat keh dali :)

thxx a lot :)

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

mehroo :)

bauhat hi khubsurat nazam likhi hai tum nai bauhat pyari :) bacha sirf itna kahoongi kai udasi ko kabhi dairai dalnai mat daina aik baar is ka mausam tehar jai to bauhat mushkil sai jaata hai /yhug

khush raho bauhat :)

bohat bohat shukriya tareef ke liye api :)

isi liye to aapi...mausam-e-hijar thehar jaye to...yehi hota hai :hehe

khush rahiye