~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Asalaam O Alaikum

Wah Mehreen ... Tum do din.ba.din behter se behter likhtii jaa rahii ho :thmbup:

Allah zor e kalaam aur mazeed baRha'ay ... Ameen! :rose

Sada khuSh raho ... Ameen :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

w/salam qasim bhai

bohat bohat shukriya:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

wah..bohat khoob likha mehroo...:rose

khush raho...:)

bohat shukriya abgeena

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

array gannay bachay :) aap ko hergiz hergiz nahi bhoolay.. mera matlab bhi yehi tha ke iss forum per aap ki pehli nazam.. khush rahiye.. :rose

shukar hai...warna me to asmjhi thi ke ap bhool gaye:(

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Waaaaaaaaah lalai awsome
Hansa to mein u ko sikha doonga :hathora

Buhat khush raho :yhug

ShAnI :rose

lala yeh kaam ap kabhi nahin kar payen gay:tang:

shankoooo:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Buhat zabardast Mehrun.... zabardast likha hay... .:)

shukriya lamhunnnn:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

tauba hai guriya :hathora phir shukriya :hathora baaz ajao mehroo :blush:

aur haan ye mausam nahi teharna chahiyai isai janai daina kai mausam tehar jain to zindagi ruk si jaati hai :)

khush raho :x

oh...pull gai thi api:lol

aur agar zindagi hi na rahay to.......

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

main hansna bhool gayi shayed :)

mehroo aapki har shayeri mujhey achi lagti hey ye nazm bhi bey hadh khoobsurat hey:rose

awwwww...itni hosla afzaai ke liye baihaddd shukriyaaa kanwal:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Wah kaanch ki mehroo, boht khoobsurati k sath aap ne apnay jazbat ko qalam k hawalay kiya hey. aaindah bhi likhti rahiye ga. khush rahiye humesha.:rose

bohat bohat shukriya muskan

khush rahiye

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

wow mehroo kia baat hay

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Melli paali guriya...yeh tum ne likha he :eek: very much touching believe me bohat acha likha he...chuk ke rakh oye :)

nahin aamir bhai..aapne likh kar di thi:hathora
haye thankoooo so much aamo bhai:phool:

bohat khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

wow mehroo kia baat hay

hayennn kiya bat hai khalil bhai:cc:

thankooo:rose

khush rahiye

[muskaan]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

oh...pull gai thi api:lol

aur agar zindagi hi na rahay to.......

aik to mehroo kyon tunai maar khani hai :tang:


ye kaisi ajeeb batain kar rahi ho tum :hathora

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

Very nice , u achi likhatyuho

FeamanAllah

['SamRazi']

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

Buhut pyara likha hai dear :thmbup:


share kerne ka shukriya :rose

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Mehroooooo.........bhuuuuut acha likha hai :rose