~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Bohot khoob...

Aap ke kalam ko zung bhula kaise lug sekta hai....

Main hunsna bhool gayi shayed.....very nice....

khush reho.....:)

awwww...thx a lot aas bhai.....

bohat khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khooob pehli baar likhaa aur iss qader dil ko chhoonien wali kavish bahooot khoob likhti rahien aur humse share kerti rahien khush rahien

arayyy rayyy....1st poem ka matlab yeh nahin ke 1st time likhi gaii..mera matlab tha yahan 1st time share kar rahi hoon to yahan ke liye 1st poem :hehe

neways..bohat shukriyaaa tareef ke liye:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

Mehroo ji ... aap ki pehli hi nazam iss qadar shandar laggi ke mazeed ka ishtiyaq paida ho gaya.. umeed hai ke jald hi eik aur umdah kawish nazar se guzri gi ... bohat si daad hazir hai .. Bohat Shukria.. :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

aray farrukh bhai..lagta hai ap bhool gaye meko

mera matlab tha is forum ke liye 1st poem:(

newys..shukriyaaa:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Buhat khoob mehrooo ,,

khush rahoo :)

bohat shukriya aftab:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

nice Sharing

shukriyaaaa:rose

khush rahiye

[kanch ki mehroo]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

main hansna bhool gayee ..

Bohat khoob... :rose

bohat shukriya zindagi:rose

khush rahiye

[:Qassim:]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Asalaam O Alaikum

Wah Mehreen ... Tum do din.ba.din behter se behter likhtii jaa rahii ho :thmbup:

Allah zor e kalaam aur mazeed baRha'ay ... Ameen! :rose

Sada khuSh raho ... Ameen :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

wah..bohat khoob likha mehroo...:rose

khush raho...:)

[withlove]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

aray farrukh bhai..lagta hai ap bhool gaye meko

mera matlab tha is forum ke liye 1st poem:(

newys..shukriyaaa:rose

khush rahiye

array gannay bachay :) aap ko hergiz hergiz nahi bhoolay.. mera matlab bhi yehi tha ke iss forum per aap ki pehli nazam.. khush rahiye.. :rose

[ShAnI]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Waaaaaaaaah lalai awsome
Hansa to mein u ko sikha doonga :hathora

Buhat khush raho :yhug

ShAnI :rose

[Aik Lamha]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Buhat zabardast Mehrun.... zabardast likha hay... .:)

[muskaan]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

bohat bohat shukriya tareef ke liye api :)

isi liye to aapi...mausam-e-hijar thehar jaye to...yehi hota hai :hehe

khush rahiye

tauba hai guriya :hathora phir shukriya :hathora baaz ajao mehroo :blush:

aur haan ye mausam nahi teharna chahiyai isai janai daina kai mausam tehar jain to zindagi ruk si jaati hai :)

khush raho :x

[kanwal]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

main hansna bhool gayi shayed :)

mehroo aapki har shayeri mujhey achi lagti hey ye nazm bhi bey hadh khoobsurat hey:rose

[WOH LARKI]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

Wah kaanch ki mehroo, boht khoobsurati k sath aap ne apnay jazbat ko qalam k hawalay kiya hey. aaindah bhi likhti rahiye ga. khush rahiye humesha.:rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: ~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

salam. likhtay huwe go ziada arsa nahin huwa...isliye bas kuch arhay tirchay alfaz hi likh pati hoon :)... as i m new here..so goin 2 share my 1st poem here :)....bardasht kijiye ga

~* main hansna bhool gaii shayad *~

sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
kiyon chup chup si, kiyon gum sum si
kiyon khoi khoi rehti hoon?
ab kiya batlaoon unko main
ke sans bina jeena ho to
phir jeena kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say kehtay rehtay hain
udaas kiyon likha karti ho?
ab unko kiya samjhaoon main
jab aankh ke sapnay tootain to
jab apne piyaray roothain to
phir dil ki bat qalam par laa kar
likhna kaisa lagta hai?
sab mujh say poocha kartay hain
Mehroo kiyon hansa bhool gaii?
ab unko kiya keh paoon main?
jab aankh say darya behtay ho
to hansna kaisa lagta hai?
main kiss ki baat ghalat keh doon
sab theek hi kehtay rehtay hain
is waqt ki behti dhara main
sapnon ki dhool gaii shayad
main hans kar kaisay dikhla doon?
main hansna bhool gaii shayad.....

apki qeemti aara ka intazar rahay ga...:rose
khush rahiye
Mehroo

Melli paali guriya...yeh tum ne likha he :eek: very much touching believe me bohat acha likha he...chuk ke rakh oye :)