~~Bait Baazi~~

[Salauddien Mengal]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Humay Apno ne Loota ghairon se kya gila
meri kashti jahan dobi wahan pani kaam tha,

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Humay Apno ne Loota ghairon se kya gila
meri kashti jahan dobi wahan pani kaam tha,

aap ka shair bait bazi key taqazey ko poora nahin karta - pichhla shair ALIF per khatam huwa tha aap apna shair ALIF sey likhein - aap ney HEY sey likha hai :)

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ok


A dil Rona nehi hai
kase samjhaoo k rona nehi hai

Rona wale ko yeh duniya
Aur rolati hai
A dil-e-masoom tu na ro
bohat ro liya hai
Ab tu na roo kyon kai yeh duniya
Rona wale per hasti hai
ab to samajh ja A dil-e-masoom
jo chala gaya hai wo lot kar ata nehi hai
har taraf tanhai hai
har taraf andahra hai
du'a main bus maine us ko maanga hai
wo bhi majhey na mila hai
phir bhi tum majh se kahte ho rona nehi hai
es waqt puri duniya majh per has rahe hai

dil rona ko chah raha hai
aur tum kahte ho rona nehi hai
joutha khwab dhekatee rahe tum
majhey ab kio khwab nehi dhekna hai
yeh duniya dhoka se bhari hai
majhey es duniya mein ab nehi rahna hai
har kio jate jate lambi umar ki dua dai jata hai
du'a dai kar majhey apna fiyda ka liye estamal kar ka chala jata hai
majhey zindagi se kio shikyaat nehi hai
majhey to es zindagi nai sab kuch deya hai
shikyaat to bus apna naseeb se hai
kyon ka sab kuch mil kar bhi koh gaya hai
apni takqeer hi karab hai
jo use hasil kar kai bhi kise aur ko dai deya hai
hum nai to khod apna hatho se
Apni khud kabar bana li hai
hum nai to apna dil ka hatho majboor ho kar
apna paoo per khud kolhari mari hai
A dil tuna ab rona nehi hai
A RAJA bus ab rona nehi hai

Sorry sir!

Bait Bazi means ashaar ki bait bazi aur ashaar mein ziyada sey ziyada aik qita hota hai us sey ziyada nahin. Main aap ki yeh post nazam section mein move kar raha hoon - sorry I am a bit harsh but that's necessary :)

[amber]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Apnoon ki tarha chahta hai wo kai logoon ko
Hum ko kabhi un mein shumaar kyun nahi kerta

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

apni zulfon key saaey mein mujh ko
aik shab ki sitara jahi dey

yey

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yaado kay haashyay bhe aham hai bohat
deemak lage kitaab ko aahista khoolyay


yay

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yeh butaan-e-asar-e-hazir keh baney hain madresey mein
nah adaey kafirana, nah tarash-e-aazaranah
Hey (hathi wali :p)

[*Rida*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

yeh aur baat tujhay perhnay ki fursat na milay
hum tiray sheher main akhbaar banay phirtay hain

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Rida bachi ab aap ko kya kahoon :zuban:

na aetbar-e-muhabbat na ikhtiyar-e-wafa
junoon ki tez rawi kah rahi hai, sab achha

alif

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aaasan to nahe apni husti say guzar jana
utra jo samander main derya to bohat roya
jo shakhs na roya tha tapti raahon main
deevar ky sa'ay main baitha to bohat roya

alif

[Khushi]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ik naam kyaa likhaa tera sahil ki Rait per
Phir umer bher hawa se mere Dushmani rahi

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yun hi gar rota raha Ghalib to aey ahl-e-jahan
dekhna in bastiyon ko tum keh weeran ho gaein

Noon

[Khushi]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

na-janey kon sa asaib dil mein rehta hai
k jo bhi aaya,aakhir makaan chorre gaya


Alif

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Utar kar nao sey bhi kab safar tumam huwa
zameen peh paoun dhara to zameen chalney lagi

yey

[Khushi]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh jo main tum se anjan bana phirta hun
sari baat esi anjaney-pan mein hai!!!!


Yey