Aik Ehsaas - Aik Biyaan - Aik Shi'r

[MuQadas]

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Aap ney Saraah ko KAGA kaha? woh kya kawwii hai? 372-haha

is shair ka MATBUL hai:

Kawwo, merey wajood key maas ka zara zara khaa jana, per yeh do nainaan mat khana, inhein piya milan ki aas hai :)

372-hahacute

[Masood]

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[MuQadas]

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Kat to jaati hai magar raat ki fitrat hai ajeeb
Is ko chup chaap jo kaato to sadee ban jaye

[Masood]

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Faraz ji kehtey hain...

[MuQadas]

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Hum ne uski judai mei khana peena tak chor dia Faraz

Phir khayal aya k "khaon ga nai to Bara kaise hun ga?..."

[Masood]

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Hum ne uski judai mei khana peena tak chor dia Faraz

Phir khayal aya k "khaon ga nai to Bara kaise hun ga?..."

yeh kis Faraz ka shair hai? lagta hai us waqt Faraz jhooley mein ho ga 372-haha

[MuQadas]

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me ko kia pata:donno:apnay unhay jhola jhulaya ziyda apko malom hai
bholay say bhi na kkholna apni almari ki daraz
kahin us main say nikal na aay faraz

[Masood]

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me ko kia pata:donno:apnay unhay jhola jhulaya ziyda apko malom hai
bholay say bhi na kkholna apni almari ki daraz
kahin us main say nikal na aay faraz

:mm:Muqadas mujhey is shairi per shak hai. Yeh Faraz ki shairi nahin. Aap ney kahan sey yeh ashaar liyey hain???

[MuQadas]

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:mm:Muqadas mujhey is shairi per shak hai. Yeh Faraz ki shairi nahin. Aap ney kahan sey yeh ashaar liyey hain???

:mm:ap shaq na karain sms main aay thay ajkal new shair aay hain na yeh wohi hain

[Masood]

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:mm:ap shaq na karain sms main aay thay ajkal new shair aay hain na yeh wohi hain

aaaah phir mera shak drust tha keh yeh do-takey ki shairon ka kamaal hai. Aisey ashaar post na kiya kijiyey. Sirf woh ashaar post kijiyey jo shairi ka haq ada kartey hain! :)

[MuQadas]

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aaaah phir mera shak drust tha keh yeh do-takey ki shairon ka kamaal hai. Aisey ashaar post na kiya kijiyey. Sirf woh ashaar post kijiyey jo shairi ka haq ada kartey hain! :)

ok sir par yeh achay nahi kia

[Masood]

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ok sir par yeh achay nahi kia

Yeh ashaar Mazahiya adab key section mein to chal saktey hain, magar Pegham per shairi ka aik bohat haseen meyaar hai, in section mein yeh nahin chalein gey. Afsos to yeh hai keh main inhein Ashaar bhi nahin kah sakta. Log kis tarha aik azeem shaair key naam ko yun ruswa kar detey hain

[MuQadas]

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opssssssss
Rukhsat howa to bat mare man kar gaya
jo kuch tha uskay pass sabhi kuch daan kargaya
bichra kuch is ada say k rut hi badal gai
aik shaks poray shehar ko veeran kargaya

[Masood]

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Ubaid-ullah-Aleem

[Masood]

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teddy