Main To Faqat Ik Shaair Hoon

[La'hasil]

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hmm acha likha hai Masood aap nay maghar yeh kesse Mohabbat hai jo Sarmad ko Be'sakhiyo'n kay shaheray khara dekh kar Hafza ki Mohabbat khatam ho gaye ? yeh Mohabbat tu na hoi na phir :) aur Mohabbat tu aaj kal kay zamaney main koi karta bhi nahin meray khayal main :)


anywayz khush rahyeah :rose

[Mehak]

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aur Mohabbat tu aaj kal kay zamaney main koi karta bhi nahin meray khayal main :)

I agree with khawahish.. muhabbat aaj kal karta koun hai?! ziyada nahin likhoon gi... phir kabhi sahi.

[WorThless]

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Ilfaz nahi hain marey pass ..!! agar ik tehreer hoti to kuch keh deyta main par ye jazbat hain aur main un sai khel nahi sakta.... dheron duaein tumahrey liye

[Masood]

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lutf a gaya janab aap ki yeh kahani parh ker........ aisee umdah , hassaas aur haqeeqat ka aeena dikhanay wali kahani likhnay per

Waqar main ney koshish ki hai keh Sarmad jaisey logon ko bhi aaina dikhaoun keh tum jaisey log kisi ko paa bhi lein to woh makhmal main taat ka paivand hotey hain, khud ko aainey mein dekho aur aisey kisi gulbahar ko apnaney ki khawahish mat karo. Magar Sarmad to sab kuchh btaa dena chata tha... Khair! Yeh kahani shayid merey khoon-e-jiggar sey likhi hui hai, merey khoon-e-jiggar ney aap ko luft diya yehi meri khushi hai :) - Jeetey rahiye

Masood bhai aap ki is tehreer se mere zihan main aik naqsha khinch gaya hai ......kisi ki cheez ka

Zehan mein jo aata hai ussey zehan hi mein dbaa lo :)

mery khayal main ager kise se sache mohabbat hote hai to usko uski khoobyon & khamiyo ky sath he accept kera jata hai..so ager hafsa ko sermad sy mohaabat hote so vo us ko her haal main accpet kertee..

Komal duniya mein aisi muhabbatein awwal to milti nahin, agar hon to rait ki deewarein sabit hoti hain - yeh aazmaish woh janta/janti hai jo isey sey guzr rahey hon - kuchh samjhi? :)


[quote=~khawahish~]Mohabbat tu aaj kal kay zamaney main koi karta bhi nahin meray khayal main

muhabbat aaj kal karta koun hai?!

Aap dono ko siraf itna kahoon ga; muhabbat ko shak ki nigahon sey mat dekho :)

Ilfaz nahi hain marey pass ..!! agar ik tehreer hoti to kuch keh deyta main par ye jazbat hain aur main un sai khel nahi sakta.... dheron duaein tumahrey liye

aap ney likha yeh jazbaat hain - poora jumla likh detey AIK SHAKISTAH DIL KEY SHAKISTAH JAZBAAT

[Yaaram]

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suna hay jo zehan main aa jaye us likh dena chhaye .......zehan main dabana to nahi chahye :)

[khwaab]

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haqiqat se bahot qareebtar dil mein utar janaywali aik khoobsurat tahreer

[muskaan]

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isliyai kehtai hain kai jab khawab hakeekat sai takratai hain to toot jatai hain...bauhat hi achi aur sachi kahani likhi hia aap nai masood janai kitnai hi loog is sai guzrai hoongai...

khush rahiyai :)

[Shaim]

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ye tehreer buhat buhat buhaat acchi orr khoobsoorat hai orrr buhaat hadd tak real bhi....
zindaagi busss kucch aisee hii hai...per mere khiyaal mai jaab hum kise ko buhat ziada pyaar kerte hain too uski khoobion n khamion samet usko accept kernaa chahiye

Really nice!!!:masha

[hayaa_n]

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Ta Ji yeh kahaani parh kar sahi maaino'n main andaaza huwa kay dil khoon kay aansu kaisay rota hay?...aap ki yeh tehreer aur logon kay tabsiron par aap k likhay jawaab bhi aik duniya ko aaina dikhanay kay mutaradif hain.Chashm-e-Beena bas chahiye.
Aap ki baihtreen taihreeron main yeh tehreer bhi shaamil hay. :)

[Z.]

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Masood bro. Allah T'ala aap ko bohot dher sara kush rakhey Ameeeeeeen:rose

[Masood]

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Ta Ji yeh kahaani parh kar sahi maaino'n main andaaza huwa kay dil khoon kay aansu kaisay rota hay?...aap ki yeh tehreer aur logon kay tabsiron par aap k likhay jawaab bhi aik duniya ko aaina dikhanay kay mutaradif hain.Chashm-e-Beena bas chahiye.
Aap ki baihtreen taihreeron main yeh tehreer bhi shaamil hay. :)

Dil to khoon key aansu rota rah jata hai magar halaat aisey pedah ho jatey hain keh yeh mitti mein mil jatey hain....

[Masood]

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Masood bro. Allah T'ala aap ko bohot dher sara kush rakhey Ameeeeeeen:rose

:)

[MuQadas]

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lajawab tehreer:clap: :clap: :clap:

[Masood]

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Bohat shukriyah Muqadas :)

[MuQadas]

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waisay aik bat hai sochnay ki