Main To Faqat Ik Shaair Hoon

[Masood]

Afsana: Written by Masood on 16. June 2005

[Masood]

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[shy]

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bohat acha likha he aap ne masood :) welldone :thmbup:

['SamRazi']

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Wah...... Mashallah buhut zabardast likha aap ne

[SiyaH BakhT]

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Wah Sahib kafi arsey baat itni haqeeqat ameez kahani parh raha hoon.... warna tu logo mein ab suger coded stories hi reh gayi hein....

anyways Masha Allah Bohat Khoob likha hey

[Mehak]

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bohat achha afsana likha hai aap ney Masood..

na khwab tu tarash ke khwab haqeeqat nahi hote
beet jaein jo pal, nahin un key liye rotey

and nice shairi :thmbup:

['SamRazi']

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Wese ek baat to batain, is lerki Hafsa ne Sarmad ko chor ker sahi kiya yaan galat ??:cc:

[Masood]

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bohat acha likha he aap ne masood welldone

Shy bohat bohat shukriyah pasand karney ka, yeh "aik dil ki kahani hai aur shayid haqeeqat peh mabni"

Wah...... Mashallah buhut zabardast likha aap ne

Bohat shukriyah Saima, aap ko pasand aai mujhey bohat achha laga :)

Wah Sahib kafi arsey baat itni haqeeqat ameez kahani parh raha hoon.... warna tu logo mein ab suger coded stories hi reh gayi hein....

anyways Masha Allah Bohat Khoob likha hey

Bakht bhai, ham mein jo thora bohat likhna jantey hain woh hamesha afsanvi duniya mein rehtey hain, yeh haal hamari filmo dramon ka bhi hai, haqeeqat peh likhna chahiye aur haqeeqat suger coded nahin hoti :)

bohat achha afsana likha hai aap ney Masood..
and nice shairi

Bohat bohat shukriyah Mehak aap ney is afsaney ko pasand kiya hai - meri baat ki aap ko samajh hai na :)

Wese ek baat to batain, is lerki Hafsa ne Sarmad ko chor ker sahi kiya yaan galat ??

Hafsa ney jo kuchh kiya hai woh us soch ki ghammazi karta hai jo afsanvi duniya mein rehney waley kartey hain. Is mein koi shak nahin keh haqeeqi zindagi mein aisey bohat sey log hain jo zaahir ki bjaey batin ko dekhtey hain, magar inki taadad kam hai. Haqeeqat talkh hai!

['SamRazi']

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Hafsa ney jo kuchh kiya hai woh us soch ki ghammazi karta hai jo afsanvi duniya mein rehney waley kartey hain. Is mein koi shak nahin keh haqeeqi zindagi mein aisey bohat sey log hain jo zaahir ki bjaey batin ko dekhtey hain, magar inki taadad kam hai. Haqeeqat talkh hai!

Haqeeqat talkh sahi humarey samney to hai, talkh hi sahi. Magar afsaney to bas hawa k jhonkey ki tara hai , aatey hain, aap ko mehsoos hotey hain aur chaley jatey hain, bas pal do pal ke liyeh.

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buhat acha likha hai aap nay masood :thmbup:



waisay sarmad ko sab kuch pehlay hi say sahi sahi bata deena chaye tha na .. or youn us larki hafsa ko aik dam saay dhacka na lagta..... hmmm net hai us main such bolta koon hai :)

aap likhtay rehaye mazedd thereroun ka intazaar rehaye ga :rose

[Masood]

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waisay sarmad ko sab kuch pehlay hi say sahi sahi bata deena chaye tha na .. or youn us larki hafsa ko aik dam saay dhacka na lagta..... hmmm net hai us main such bolta koon hai

Mera khiyal hai keh Sarmad ney Hafsa ko bar bar btaney ki koshish ki thi, magar Hafsa khiyalon ki duniya mein khoi rehti aur uski baat na sunti thi. Jab bhi woh ussey kuchh kehney lagta woh khawabon ka mahal khara kar deti.... haan yeh saheeh kaha keh net ki duniya mein andhera hi andhera hai

[Z.]

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..... hmmm net hai us main such bolta koon hai :)

.... haan yeh saheeh kaha keh net ki duniya mein andhera hi andhera hai

[waqar_masood]

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Baradaram Masood ,

lutf a gaya janab aap ki yeh kahani parh ker .Aap nay jis tareeqay say insan ki fitrat ka zikar kia hay keh baaz auqat insan bina sochay samjhay , apnay say kahin door bethay kisi shakhs kay baray mein sirf us ki tehareer, andaz e guftagoo, us kay lehjay, us ki batoon aur lafzi jazboon say mar^oob ho jata hay ...aur haqeeqat mein agar zara sa bhi nuqas nazar ayee to foran girgat ki terah rang badal leta hay..woh qayem o dayem rehnay walay jazbay , hamesha rehnay wali mohabbat , woh insaan ko her roop mein qubool kernay wala sahar , sab ka sab khatm ho jata hay .

shayed mein ghalat tabsara na ker bethoon lekin mein nay perfect aap ki kahani k osamnay rakh ker usi per 4 lafz kehna chahay hein.

kahani ki khubsoorti sab say akhri ghazal per mabni hay ...agar is ghazal ko nikal deya jayee to kahani adhoori adhoori si lagnay lagtee hay .

daad to mein day nahi sakta keh daad denay kay leye aap kay ham asr hona paray ga , mubarak zuroor doon ga keh aisee umdah , hassaas aur haqeeqat ka aeena dikhanay wali kahani likhnay per buhut mubarak ho.

waqar masood

[Yaaram]

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Masood bhai aap ki is tehreer se mere zihan main aik naqsha khinch gaya hai ......kisi ki cheez ka.anwys...........acha likha hai .......Haqeeqat likhi hai apane thnx :)

[aik_lerki]

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Umm bohaat he acha likha hai aap nay Masood:rose

mery khayal main ager kise se sache mohabbat hote hai to usko uski khoobyon & khamiyo ky sath he accept kera jata hai..so ager hafsa ko sermad sy mohaabat hote so vo us ko her haal main accpet kertee..:)