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  • #31
    Originally posted by sumera View Post
    As salam o alaikum


    here i m with my koshish and mehnat:blush: :)
    walaikum salam!

    bravo larki :clap:
    " Obstacles are what you see when you take your eyes off your goals "

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    • #32
      Originally posted by aquari View Post
      Dear meri tehreer tu accident ki nazar hogaii ..itna kuch mind main tha sir pr chout lagney ki waja sey sub............:donno:
      chalein inshAllah next time :)

      :rose
      " Obstacles are what you see when you take your eyes off your goals "

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      • #33
        Originally posted by zmufti View Post
        Ambreen saheba
        aap ki tehreer buhat achchii lagi
        is meN jazbaat ka rang ghaalib hai aap ki tehreer ke wast meN kuch izaafi jumle tajweez karti hooN
        Likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye
        zmufti
        As salam o alaikum Zmufti sis:)
        i wana know one thing
        mien nay Ambreen ki tehreer bhi parhi aur aap nay jo jumlay tajweez kiay woh bhi
        mera khyaal hay k Ambreen ka mien idea ap k jumloon say kuchh mukhtalif hay........
        uski tehreer ki larki k zehn mien ik image tha sajan ka......ya shayad koi samaya hua tha mann mien...magar ....woh image toot gya...........woh kahin aur jaana chahti thi shayad......
        aur ap k mutabiq usay apni mann marzi ka gulshan mila magar woh bhi hawaoon mien bana hua mehel sabat hua..shayad etbaar toot gya....m i right..?

        i m confused...need ur help:embarasse

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        • #34
          tehreer pasand karnay k liay ap sab ka shukriya...m waiting for Zmufti sis:)

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          • #35
            Originally posted by sumera View Post
            As salam o alaikum Zmufti sis:)
            i wana know one thing
            mien nay Ambreen ki tehreer bhi parhi aur aap nay jo jumlay tajweez kiay woh bhi
            mera khyaal hay k Ambreen ka mien idea ap k jumloon say kuchh mukhtalif hay........
            uski tehreer ki larki k zehn mien ik image tha sajan ka......ya shayad koi samaya hua tha mann mien...magar ....woh image toot gya...........woh kahin aur jaana chahti thi shayad......
            aur ap k mutabiq usay apni mann marzi ka gulshan mila magar woh bhi hawaoon mien bana hua mehel sabat hua..shayad etbaar toot gya....m i right..?

            i m confused...need ur help:embarasse
            Sumera jee
            aadaab
            jab musanif apna khayal achchii tarah wazeh nahiN kar pata to har paRhne wala apni samajh boojh ke mutabiq is khayal ko samajhne ki koshish karta hai. Aik kaamyaab tehreer vohi ho gi jis ka markazi khayal wazeh ho
            Ambreen ki kahani meN yeh khayal wazeh nahiN thaa so maiN ne "aik mumkina" markazi khayal us "khaali jagah" meN bharne ki koshish ki
            is tarah maiN ne Ambreen ko yeh sujhaaoo diyya keh keh un ki kahani meN kahaN "lapse" ya jhol hai
            ab vo chaheN to is khaali jagah per apna khayal "fil in" kar sakti heN
            umeed hai maiN apni baat aap per wazeh kar paayii
            phir bhee agar Ambreen ya aap ke zehn meN koi khayal ho to be jhijak baat kijye. kissi bhee baat ko discuss karne se donoN fareeq hi seekh sakte heN
            take care
            zmufti

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            • #36
              Originally posted by sumera View Post
              tehreer pasand karnay k liay ap sab ka shukriya...m waiting for Zmufti sis:)
              thoRa intzaar farmaaiye

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              • #37
                Originally posted by zmufti View Post
                Sumera jee
                aadaab
                jab musanif apna khayal achchii tarah wazeh nahiN kar pata to har paRhne wala apni samajh boojh ke mutabiq is khayal ko samajhne ki koshish karta hai. Aik kaamyaab tehreer vohi ho gi jis ka markazi khayal wazeh ho
                Ambreen ki kahani meN yeh khayal wazeh nahiN thaa so maiN ne "aik mumkina" markazi khayal us "khaali jagah" meN bharne ki koshish ki
                is tarah maiN ne Ambreen ko yeh sujhaaoo diyya keh keh un ki kahani meN kahaN "lapse" ya jhol hai
                ab vo chaheN to is khaali jagah per apna khayal "fil in" kar sakti heN
                umeed hai maiN apni baat aap per wazeh kar paayii
                phir bhee agar Ambreen ya aap ke zehn meN koi khayal ho to be jhijak baat kijye. kissi bhee baat ko discuss karne se donoN fareeq hi seekh sakte heN
                take care
                zmufti
                Shukriya dear:rose

                issay point out karnay say hamara maqsad bhi seekhna hee tha.....
                kiun k hum abhi tehreer ki bareekioon say na-waqif hien.....
                khush rahiay
                and thnx again for help:)

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                • #38
                  Last edited by zmufti; 2 June 2007, 22:10.

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                  • #39
                    Originally posted by zmufti View Post
                    sumera jee
                    aadaab
                    taakheer ke liye maazrat
                    aap ki tehreer aik naye khayal per mabni hai
                    aap ka markazi khayal buhat achcha hai
                    aik pehla jumla aur kuch ikhtatami jumle izaafi mehsoos hue so un ko nikal dijye
                    baaz auqaat likhne waala apne khayal ko "emphasize" karne ke liye apni baat ko 2-3 baar dohrata hai
                    jis se paRhne waala boriat mehsoos karta hai ya tehreer per "aik lecture ya scholatic essay" ka gumaan hone lagta hai
                    so ghair zaroori repitition se guraiz kijye
                    likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye
                    zmufti

                    aik adh jagah per typing ki ghalati hai "gehra" ke aakhir meN alif hota hai
                    aap ki tehreer jo neechay post ki hai us ki aakhri line ko youN kar lijye

                    aur hamara watan bhee janat nazeer ban jaaye ga.

                    (khushaali ka aam fehm matlab "material well being" liyya jaata hai is liye is lafz ka yahaN istemaal mozoo nahiN )
                    thank u so much Zmufti sahiba
                    pasand karnay ka shukriya:)
                    mien nay tamam batien note kar lien hien..aainda khayal rakhoon gi
                    once again thank u:)

                    khush rahiay:rose

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