Inpiration from Father.

[Muhammad Khalil]

salam o alikum buht hee arsa sy dil main tha k kuch apny father k bary main likhon lakin kuch smaj nahi ata tha..pher kuch stdy kia kuch sabar kia aur kuch logon sy inspiration lee aur ab yeh aik choti see kahani ke shakal ekhtiar ker gai...aur aik baat kehna chahonga ap ko mukaml ekhiar hay es main tankeed ka aur tareef ka.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

:phool:

[ASAD]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

zabardast yaaar. really good....

but next time shyr (lion) sey milna ho to mery ghar ajana. ASAD is here for you.. ASAD mean...??? Lion...

[aabi2cool]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

khalil agar ye khalistan tumahri apni koshish hy to phir to waqe hi lajawab hy bohat khoob....

[cute_charming786]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Aap ki khudh ki creation hai to bohat hi lajawab hia lekin main ne iss tarah
ki story parhi hoi hia nawa-e-Sahar main ....................Uzair brother ne bhi
likhi hia.............................


Baharal bohat acha andaz hia aap ka bohat mukhtasar ...........magar jame
tehrir.......darsal insan k andar kuch aisi talkh yadain samoo jati hian jin ko
insan bhulana chahe bhi to nahin bhula sakta.........aur ye choti se kahani
insan ki ussi kaifiat ki akasi kar rahi hai


Well Writen 16 Million Wishes for U keep smiling.......

[jia]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

very nice khali bohat hi acha likha hay app nay
or app ka apna likha hoa hay islye or bhi best lagta hay
very very beautiful:rose :thmbup:

[Wafa]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

Baap banna itna asaan nahi......:thmbup:

bohot ache andaaz mai likha hai khalil......:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

khalil agar ye khalistan tumahri apni koshish hy to phir to waqe hi lajawab hy bohat khoob....

too sari zindgee kuch nahi karna bus aisy hee sarrty rehna:fuming:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Aap ki khudh ki creation hai to bohat hi lajawab hia lekin main ne iss tarah
ki story parhi hoi hia nawa-e-Sahar main ....................Uzair brother ne bhi
likhi hia.............................


Baharal bohat acha andaz hia aap ka bohat mukhtasar ...........magar jame
tehrir.......darsal insan k andar kuch aisi talkh yadain samoo jati hian jin ko
insan bhulana chahe bhi to nahin bhula sakta.........aur ye choti se kahani
insan ki ussi kaifiat ki akasi kar rahi hai


Well Writen 16 Million Wishes for U keep smiling.......

thanks Hina ager aap thora sa tuaraf dekh laiti to pata chal jata k k buhat sy logon aur books sy bee inspiretion hay:tauba

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

well thanks to all.

[aquari]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

:em:.........bauht positive approach..baap bana waqai aasaan nahi..laikin yeh sub parh kr main zaror kuch aisi yaadoo main khoo gaii jo meri merey father sey wabsta hain..mainey kabhi kisi cheez ki zid nahi ki pr jub kabhi kisi cheez ki khuwahish ki unhoo ney laker di..
Bauht khush qismat hotey hian woh loog jihain itnaa pyar krney wala baap mileyy or jin ko mil jata haii un ki qadr karain or jo baap bana chahtey hia woh bhi yeh baat soochain k kuch zimdariyaa un ki bhi hain:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

:em:.........bauht positive approach..baap bana waqai aasaan nahi..laikin yeh sub parh kr main zaror kuch aisi yaadoo main khoo gaii jo meri merey father sey wabsta hain..mainey kabhi kisi cheez ki zid nahi ki pr jub kabhi kisi cheez ki khuwahish ki unhoo ney laker di..
Bauht khush qismat hotey hian woh loog jihain itnaa pyar krney wala baap mileyy or jin ko mil jata haii un ki qadr karain or jo baap bana chahtey hia woh bhi yeh baat soochain k kuch zimdariyaa un ki bhi hain:)

Thanks Aquair ...:phool:
ap ny theek kaha ....

[aquari]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

Thanks Aquair ...:phool:
ap ny theek kaha ....

u r :welcome:
KOshish ki hai thek kehney ki ...:eye:

[aabi2cool]

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too sari zindgee kuch nahi karna bus aisy hee sarrty rehna:fuming:

AUR FITTAY MONH TARA K TUJHY AIK CHOTI SE BAAT SAMJH NAHEEN AAI....:fuming:

[*Rida*]

Re: Inpiration from Father.

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht hi khobsorat andaaz mein aik buht buht khobsora jazbay kay hawalay say likha hai aap nay.....bay shak ALLAH TALAA nay MaaN aur baap donooN ko ehem tareen zimme dari sonpi hai bachooN ki parwarish ki sorat mein.....jisay saray maaN baap....utni hi khobsorti say nibh nahin patay ..jis tarah nibhana chahiye........aap nay is diffrence ko bhi buht achay tareeqay say bayan kia hai.....
very well done:clap: