Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

[shummu]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

bahut bahut nawaazish KHURRAM jee... arey main to bahut halkaa phulkaa likhti hoon.... bhaari bharkam to aur log likhte hain..mujhe to abhi bhari bharkam likhna hi nahi aata..aap duaa kijiye to waqaii bhari bharkam likh sakungi ek na ek din hehe...thank u so very much for ur appreciation! :)

Shumaila

[hayaa_n]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Waah kiya ghazal likhi hay aap nay :masha :) ghazal ka har shair apni misaal aap hay.parh kar dil khush ho gaya.bouhat hi umda.:)

[shummu]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa hayaa sis.....:)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot umda aap ny likha hy ... aik kosishs ki hy aap ki Poetry k image deyny ki ... Expert not ... but kosish ...

FeaamnAllah

[hayaa_n]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Bheegi palkain ji nice work..umda kalaam ki umda composition achchi lagi.:)

[shummu]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

wow thanx BP..so sweet of u..image bahut sahi lagaayi hai..bas font ko zara aur bold kar do to paRhne mein aasaani hogi....overall nice work :thmbup: and thanx a billion.... :rose

[S.Athar]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Kash Ap Urdu Main Likhtin Agar 1 Ap ki Roman Gazla Parhny Bayth jaooon To Baqi Mimbars ki to Bari He na aayyy. Gazal Parhany ka jo mazha Urdu Main hay woh Roman Main Kahan. Lihaza so sory Jahan Shaire Roman Main Nazar Ati Hay Main Aggy Ki Rah Layta Hon:dance2:

[shummu]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Kash Ap Urdu Main Likhtin Agar 1 Ap ki Roman Gazla Parhny Bayth jaooon To Baqi Mimbars ki to Bari He na aayyy. Gazal Parhany ka jo mazha Urdu Main hay woh Roman Main Kahan. Lihaza so sory Jahan Shaire Roman Main Nazar Ati Hay Main Aggy Ki Rah Layta Hon:dance2:

lijiye aapki shiqayat door karte hue humne ghazal urdu mein bhi attach kar di hai....:salam:

[thefire1]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

Walaikum Assalaam Shummu jee

Bohat hi khobsurat andaaz-e-tehreer hay aap ka lajawab, aik hi ehsaas ko itnay saaray lafzoon main paish karna asaan kaam nahin tha, bohat hi khoobsuart andaaz main aap nay shab-e-hijr bayan ki aur saath saath roudad-e-ishq paish ki.... mujhay yeh shaair bohat hi acha laga aur haasil-e-ghazal bhi.

kabhii sher ban ke ,kabhii ban ke naGhmaa
miree khasta haalii naqaaboN meiN guzrii

likhti rahyeh aur hum sab say apan aala zouq share karti rahyeh, khush rahyeh.

fi amaan ALLAH

Salaam ahl-e-bazm..Aanchal ke hukm ki taameel karte hue apni ek ghazal pesh kar rahi hoon ..ummeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi :)

shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii
kisii ke khayaaloN meiN,khwaaboN meiN guzrii

kabhii manzil-e-ishq paanaa thaa aasaaN
magar justujuu tab saraaboN meiN guzrii

baDii be mazaa vasl kii raat thi jo
musalsal sawaaloN jawaaboN meiN guzrii

kahin ho na jaaye miraa ghar bhi raushan
isi khauf se zau hijaaboN meiN guzrii

kabhii sher ban ke ,kabhii ban ke naGhmaa
miree khasta haalii naqaaboN meiN guzrii

shikast-e-muhabbat ki itnii kahaanii.....
gul-e-khushk ban ke kitaaboN meiN guzrii

miree aah-o-zaarii nashaa ban ke aksar
sar-e-bazm-e-rindaaN sharaaboN meiN guzrii

woh kya jaane pur khaar rastoN ki shiddat
guzar gaah jiskii GhulaaboN meiN guzrii

naseehat hameiN kar rahaa hai woh naaSeH
sadaa umr jiskii KharaaboN meiN guzrii

agar hauslaa hai to ban ke dikhaa de
Woh LAILAA kabhi jo nisaaboN meiN guzrii!!!


Aapki aara ki muntazir,
Shumaila

[S.Athar]

Re: Shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii

:salam: Yah Bat Sahaire Ka Maza He urdu Writing main hay.Wasy Bhi PG Jaysay Foram par sahire Roman Main Likhna (jahan K Urdu Soft ware Main Kam Sikhaya Bhi Ja Raha Hay) Malab Apni Sahire Ka Holia Kharab Karna:rose
Ab Itni Lambi Gazal Urdu Mian Ba Asani Parhi Bhi Gaie Or 1,1 Misrah Apni Tamam Tar Khobsorti K saht Zahan Mian Foran Jagha Banata Giaa.VVV Nice :thmbup: