Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

[Masood]

Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey
Aur Maut Hai Keh Chalney Ko Tayyar Maangey

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Sath lay jaanay ko tujhay waqt ki raftaar maangay:)


kuch afsurda lekin boht khoob , boht umdah:rose


kaafi arsay baad kuch naya perhnay ko mila aapki taraf se n its too good :rose

[*Hala*]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

buht khubsurat lekha hai .. khush rahien

[milestone]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey
Aur Maut Hai Keh Chalney Ko Tayyar Maangey

Assalamualikum ,

Sare kalam ki jaan akhiri shair hai :thmbup:.

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Yep bohat muddat baad dimagh ka keerra apni jaggah sey hilla tha :D

thanks

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Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Assalamualikum ,

Tab hi toh is mein Itna wazan hai ......:)

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Assalamualikum ,

Tab hi toh is mein Itna wazan hai ......:)

Wa salaam

Wazan kuchh ziyada hi tha, jabhi paoun mein mauch aa gaii hai 372-haha

[milestone]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Acha ! is keere ne Dimagh se paon tak pahunch mein itni takleef pahunchai aap ko ?:)

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Acha ! is keere ne Dimagh se paon tak pahunch mein itni takleef pahunchai aap ko ?:)

Haey aap ney kya baat chherr di - na-chherr-sakhi-sargum wali baat hai kuchh

[milestone]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

kah bhi dijiye na is mein haihaat hai kuchh:D:

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

kah bhi dijiye na is mein haihaat hai kuchh:D:

Kehney mein to koi harj nahin per yeh to btaein keh yeh HAIHAAT kya hota hai? Zara merey zakheera-e-alfaaz mein bhi izafa farmaein :p

[milestone]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

haihaath >>> Afsoos ..... is lafz ko shayeh aap altaaf hussain hali ke ashar mein paiengey .

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

haihaath >>> Afsoos ..... is lafz ko shayeh aap altaaf hussain hali ke ashar mein paiengey .

Haali Nama to main ney parhi hai - ab ghar jaa ker check karta hoon keh Haali ko kya hogeya tha jo itney mushkil alfaaz likh marey :p

Waisey achha lagta hai mujhey agar ko aisey alfaaz istimaal karey jis sey zauq-e-Urdu mein husn pedah ho - nawazish aapki :)

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Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

ji agar aap ko na mile toh bataiye ga phir mein apne paas check kar ti hoon .... shaire kuch aisa hai mujhe ab theek se yaad nahi araha hai phir bhi ..... haali ne kaha >>>> GHalib mar ga ya Haihaat Haihaat.....

hmm aap ki nazar ....abhi mein ne jora hai ...

ham faqeeraon ki shaan hai puraani qaba mein
Zaher mein , posheeda apni zaat hai kuchh:)

tarmeem kigai hai

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

ji agar aap ko na mile toh bataiye ga phir mein apne paas check kar ti hoon .... shaire kuch aisa hai mujhe ab theek se yaad nahi araha hai phir bhi ..... haali ne kaha >>>> GHalib mar ga ya Haihaat Haihaat.....

hmm aap ki nazar ....abhi mein ne jora hai ...

ham faqeeraon ki shaan hai puraani qaba mein
posheeda apni zaat mein hain sifaath kuchh:)

Kahin aap lafz Sad'haif ka mughalta to nahin khaa rahin? Sad'haif ka matlab afsos hai.

Aur aap ki mehrbani ka kya kehney, muqrar kehta agar mehfil ru'baru hoti...

chalein kuchh aap ki nazar :)

alfaaz key pairaaey mein chhupey hain mehrbaan kya kya
hamari mehfil mein aaey hain qadar'daan kya kya
woh chup bhi rahein to mehfil khushboo sey mehak uthey
yun bhi tum ney sajaey hain gulistaan kya kya