Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

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jishurkriya ... mein ne oper tarmeem ki hai shaire mein ....

ji nahi maghalita nahi hai ye . sad ;haif yeh lafz apni jagha sahi hai ke is ke mane atey hai 100 bar afsoos .....
likin haihaath alag lafz hai ji manew bhi afsoos ke hain aur is ko mein ne haali ke ilawa kaheen nasar mein bhi padha hai likin yeh ziyada use nahi hota ... is lafz ko kaheen qawaed mein bataor-e-misaal paish kia gaya hai .

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Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

na kia kuch toh hamne kia kia
insaan se pocho insaan kia kia
zameen toh zameen aasmaan bhi
bataye ke naseeb-e-duman kia kia
kaisa hai ?

[Masood]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

daad qabool kijiyey...

zauq-e-takkallum haseen, Allah Allah
hui mehfil rangeen, Allah Allah
zulfon key badal chhattey mahtab nikla
hui raat surm'geen, Allah Allah

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Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

shurkiya janaab!

Sohbath ka asar hai kaheen na kaheen Allah Allah ...
Abhi jana hai , Jatey hain phir ayeingey yaheen Allah Allah :)

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Zindagi Sey Kuchh Lamhey Udhaar Maangey

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB...

Bohat umdah...bohat khoobsorat..
khush rahain

[S.Athar]

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v.VV Nice

[Nadia khan]

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bahut hi umda shering:phool:

[Ehsaas786]

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Aapki Shairi ki Tareef krna .. guyaa Soraj ko charaagh dikhana hugaa ..
Buhut ,omda,alfaz-o-khayalaat ka majmoa .. buhut Saari daad qubool kijye