Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

[hayaa_n]

Asslamoalikum :rose

[Rabi]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

wah wah kiya kiya cheezy hain:P

[Yaaram]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Bohat lambi lekan bohat pukhta nazm.........bohat zabardast :)

[Masood]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Another classical Haya piece Bohat umdah, aur khoobsurat. Aisi shairi aisi besakhtgi, aisa biyaan siraf Haya ka hi hai.

Hmmmm tum ney qiston mein kab sey likhna shuru kar diya hai :hammer

[hayaa_n]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Another classical Haya piece Bohat umdah, aur khoobsurat. Aisi shairi aisi besakhtgi, aisa biyaan siraf Haya ka hi hai.

Hmmmm tum ney qiston mein kab sey likhna shuru kar diya hai :hammer

Ta ji taweel thi shayed is liye send ki jagha delete hui ja rahi thi is liye 2 qiston main ho gai hay:lol :lol kiya aap is ko aik page par kar saktay hain ok Yaaram ji say bhi kaihti hu'n woh bhi mairi bouhat:masha help kartay hain...:)Ta ji is qadar umda lafzon main aap nay tareef ki hay k main bouhat khush ho gai.:jazak: :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

wah wah kiya kiya cheezy hain:P

:jazak: Rabi ji bouhat bouhat shukriya.Khush rahiye sada.Aameen:)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

second wali bohat acchi hay (Y):)

:lol Rabi ji aik hi nazm 2 hisson main post kar paai hu'n delete hui jarahi thi.abhi Yaaram ji ya Ta ji say help ka kaihti hu'n kay plz is ko aik page par hi kar dain.
Bouhat shukriya Raabi ji kay aap ko maira likha pasand aaya.:jazak: :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Bohat lambi lekan bohat pukhta nazm.........bohat zabardast :)

Yaaram ji bouhat bouhat shukriya kay taweel honay kay ba'wajood aap nay read kiya aur pasand bhi aai.:jazak: :)

Sir bhi pakra hoga kay is taweel nazm ko bhi urdu main compose karna hay.:lol

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob hayaa aapki kavish hameshaa se hi mujhe pasand rahi hai hamesha ki tareh yeh kavish bhi daad ke qabil hai isliye dili daad qabool karien aur aayinda bhi humaare pegham ko apni in anmol aur zabardast tehreeroon ki khushboo bikherti rahien khush rahien

[hayaa_n]

Re: Alwida Aiy Chaand Mairay Alwida

Assalaam o alekum,


waaah bahooot khoob hayaa aapki kavish hameshaa se hi mujhe pasand rahi hai hamesha ki tareh yeh kavish bhi daad ke qabil hai isliye dili daad qabool karien aur aayinda bhi humaare pegham ko apni in anmol aur zabardast tehreeroon ki khushboo bikherti rahien khush rahien

W.salaam
:jazak: :) Khurram ji aap nay hamaisha ki tarha itnay umda lafzon main mairi howsla afzaai ki jis ko read kar k mujhay:masha bouhat khushi hui hay.:insha: Pegham main bhi likhti rahun gi.itnay umda reply ka bouhat shukriya qubool kijiye.hamaisha khush rahiye.Aameen:)