Khud Kalami*

[Gul]

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[Masood]

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Sab key paas aik hi talatum hai :)

bohat umdah Gul - I admire you :)

[Gul]

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Bayshak ek hee Talatum ko sab apni apni aankh say daykhtay hein na Masood jee :) anyway Thanx for ..ur sweet Comments..:) Khush rahiyay

[shahid_naman]

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roserose

kaya tahreer ha wak he bahot achi ha app ke tahrerayrose
rose:rose

[Gul]

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Thanx ....! :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot khoob Gul

[Gul]

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Thanx Janab! :)

[Mani16]

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Boht achhi wording ki hy

[Gul]

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Shukriya Mani jee

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Kabhi Kabhi insaan buhat akela ho jata hai uss k pass sub kuch hota hai lakin phir bhi najaaney kion lagta hai k mera koi nahi, main kisi ka nahi.........

or phir wo khud say hum kalaam hota hai or apni barbaadi ka hisaab maangta hai. Gul ji her dafa aapki poetry read kar k main buss chhup sa ho jata hon. kuch nahi bachata mere pass kehney ko. itna he keh sakta hon k

You Are The BEST


Main apni bhi aik poem aapsay share karna chahta hon....... plz zaroor read kijiye ga

[T@nh@ Mus@fir]

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Kal jo main ney ik sapna dekha
kuch bheer thi, khud shorr tha
kuch ankhain thi khili khili
kuch chahrey thay sajey sajey
kahin gup shup ka dour tha
kahin qahqa bhi purzor tha
Sub dekh kar yea mahajraa
Main ussi our ko chal para
Mujhe dekh kar sub khush hoye
Mere hath ko bhi choom liya
Mujhe itna sub ney piya diya
Mera wajood bhi tharthraa giya
Main khamosh tha, hiraan tha
K Aaj Khuda mujh pay maherbaan tha
Main Tanha tha, Na Akela tha
Mere charon our khushiyon ka mela tha
Phir Ajeb say ik laher uthi
Sub kho giya Sub kho giya
YEa mahjra kuch or tha
Meri Ankh khuli, Meri Neend uri
phir haqeeqat ney mujhko ghair liya
Rukh khushiyon ney mujh say phair liya
Mere ird gird koi sadaa na thi
Meri aankh main bhi nammi see thi
kisi shakhas ki un main kami see thi
Kuch dard tha mere seeney main
Baraf thi uss pay jami hoi
Main abhi tuq issi soch main hon Usman
yea khuwaab tha ya kuch or tha
SHayed yea mere he wajood ka Shoorrr tha

[Gul]

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Kal jo main ney ik sapna dekha
kuch bheer thi, khud shorr tha
kuch ankhain thi khili khili
kuch chahrey thay sajey sajey
kahin gup shup ka dour tha
kahin qahqa bhi purzor tha
Sub dekh kar yea mahajraa
Main ussi our ko chal para
Mujhe dekh kar sub khush hoye
Mere hath ko bhi choom liya
Mujhe itna sub ney piya diya
Mera wajood bhi tharthraa giya
Main khamosh tha, hiraan tha
K Aaj Khuda mujh pay maherbaan tha
Main Tanha tha, Na Akela tha
Mere charon our khushiyon ka mela tha
Phir Ajeb say ik laher uthi
Sub kho giya Sub kho giya
YEa mahjra kuch or tha
Meri Ankh khuli, Meri Neend uri
phir haqeeqat ney mujhko ghair liya
Rukh khushiyon ney mujh say phair liya
Mere ird gird koi sadaa na thi
Meri aankh main bhi nammi see thi
kisi shakhas ki un main kami see thi
Kuch dard tha mere seeney main
Baraf thi uss pay jami hoi
Main abhi tuq issi soch main hon Usman
yea khuwaab tha ya kuch or tha
SHayed yea mere he wajood ka Shoorrr tha

Buhat Umdah...
Buhat khoobsoorat !
MashaAllaH!

[-=Sc-=]

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OH.......Gr888888888888
Gul ji...xelent....

kaisy likh laiti hain int aumda.??

[*Hala*]

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zabardast Gul dearo

[hashambutt]

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excellent poem Gul sis :lpop: