~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

[muskaan]

salaam :)

aaj aap sab kai sath apni pehli nazam share karnai ja rahi hoon umeed hai pasand ai gi :)

~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

Woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain

Jo kahbi narmi sai dekhain to

Gumaan hota hai phooloon ka

Shabnam kai katroon ka

Yun lagta hai jaisai mein

Khushboo mein bikhri hoon



Jo kabhi shokhi sai dekhain to

Gumaan hota hai rimjhim ka

Dhanak kai rang chehrai par

Haya ban kar chalaktai hain

Yun lagta hai jaisa mein

Baharoon mein jeeti hoon



Jo kabhi mohabbat sai dekhain to

Yakeen hota hai jeevan ka

Kabhi khawaishoon ko panai ka

Kabhi sapnai sanjonai ka

Yun lagta hai jaisai mein

Jazboon mein dhali hoon





Woh ankhain aisi ankhain hain

Jo bas ek baar dekhain to

Meri hasti ko paa lain gi

Mujh khud sai juda kar k

FAQAT Apna bana lain gi

Yun lagta hai KEY jaisai mein

Khud HI ko haar bethi hoon



Jo in mein dard simtai to

Jahan sai khafa lagti hain

Kuch sochti kuch khamosh si

Mujhee ko khojhti lagti hain

Yun lagta hai k jaisai mein

Sard hawaoon ki zad mein hoon



Jo mujhse khafa ho jain to

Pal bhar mein andheri raat si

Har soo jaisai chai ho

Lamhon mein yun lagta hai

Sadiyaan si simat ai hoon

Yun lagta hia kai jaisai mein

Tanhai ki agosh mein hoon



Who ankhain aisi ankhain hain

Kabhi narmi sai kabhi shokhi sai

Kabhi mohabbat kai rangoon sai

Kabhi dard kai sai liyai

Kabhi khafa bhi ho jati hain

Mujh ko hidekhti rehti hain

Mujh ko hi mangti rehti hain

Apni apni si lagti hain

Yun lagta hai kai jaisai mein

Duaoon hi kai hisaar mein hoon:rose

[khurram_shaikh]

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W salaam,


Muskan ji bahoot khoob ek umdeh aur dilkash kavish humse share ki aapnien achchaa likhti hain aap, dili daad qabool karien khush rahien sada


Jo mujhse khafa ho jain to

Pal bhar mein andheri raat si

Har soo jaisai chai ho

Lamhon mein yun lagta hai

Sadiyaan si simat ai hoon

Yun lagta hia kai jaisai mein

Tanhai ki agosh mein hoon

Bahoooot khooob kyaa kehnien

[Masood]

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:masha
Khoobsurat aur umdah alfaz sey apni feelings ko biyaan kar bohat hi mushkil kaam hota hai, magar aap ney apni is haseen tar nazam mein bohat hi nafasat sey yeh kaam kiya hai. Agar yeh aap ki pehli nazam hai to yaqinan hamein Urdu shairi key ufaq par aik neya sitara ubharta huwa nazar aa raha. Muskaan ji, meri Allah Tala sey duaa hai keh aap key qalam mein mazeed zor pedah karein aur aap ka achha achha kalam parhney ka moqa milley. :rose :rose :rose

Khush rahiye aur hamarey saath apna kalaam banti rahiye...

[WorThless]

Re: ~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

Awsome thanks a lot for sharing with us be blessed :rose

[muskaan]

Re: ~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

W salaam,


Muskan ji bahoot khoob ek umdeh aur dilkash kavish humse share ki aapnien achchaa likhti hain aap, dili daad qabool karien khush rahien sada


Jo mujhse khafa ho jain to

Pal bhar mein andheri raat si

Har soo jaisai chai ho

Lamhon mein yun lagta hai

Sadiyaan si simat ai hoon

Yun lagta hia kai jaisai mein

Tanhai ki agosh mein hoon

Bahoooot khooob kyaa kehnien

tareef ka bauhat shukriya khurram :rose

aap bhi khush rahiyai sada :D

[muskaan]

Re: ~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

:masha
Khoobsurat aur umdah alfaz sey apni feelings ko biyaan kar bohat hi mushkil kaam hota hai, magar aap ney apni is haseen tar nazam mein bohat hi nafasat sey yeh kaam kiya hai. Agar yeh aap ki pehli nazam hai to yaqinan hamein Urdu shairi key ufaq par aik neya sitara ubharta huwa nazar aa raha. Muskaan ji, meri Allah Tala sey duaa hai keh aap key qalam mein mazeed zor pedah karein aur aap ka achha achha kalam parhney ka moqa milley. :rose :rose :rose

Khush rahiye aur hamarey saath apna kalaam banti rahiye...

tareef ka bauhat shukriya masood :rose aur aap ki duaoon ka bhi :rose g nahi ye meri pehli nazam nahi hai shairi sai mujhe lagao hai likhti rehti hoon aur insha Allah yahan ab share bhi karti rahoongi aap ki hausla afzai ka bauhat shukriya :)

[muskaan]

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Awsome thanks a lot for sharing with us be blessed :rose

khushi hui aap ko nazam pasand ai :rose aur dua par ameen sum ameen :)

[handsome]

Re: ~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

bohat zaberdast

[muskaan]

Re: ~*~ woh ankhain kaisi ankhain hain ~*~

bohat zaberdast

tareef ka bauhat shukriya:rose

be happy :)

[WOH LARKI]

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Muskan waqaee boht hi umdah kawish hey,yeh sub:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose aap k liye, aik lumhay ko to mujhey laga k PARVEEN SHAKIR ki koi nazm parh rahi hoon. Aap ne bilkul unhi jaisee mithas aur jazbon ki sachaii ko anokhay andaz mein qalam k spurd kiya hey. Allah aap ko PArveen jaisee hi shohrat aur izzat ata farmaye. Ameen :)

[La'hasil]

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buhat khoobsurat lafzo'n to khelna to koi aap say seekhay :)


buhat acha likha hai :rose


khush rahyeah buhat sara :)

[muskaan]

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Muskan waqaee boht hi umdah kawish hey,yeh sub:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose aap k liye, aik lumhay ko to mujhey laga k PARVEEN SHAKIR ki koi nazm parh rahi hoon. Aap ne bilkul unhi jaisee mithas aur jazbon ki sachaii ko anokhay andaz mein qalam k spurd kiya hey. Allah aap ko PArveen jaisee hi shohrat aur izzat ata farmaye. Ameen :)

muskan is khuloos bhari tareef ka bauhat shukriya :rose parveen shakir meri pasandeeda shaira hain aur aap nai to mujhe un sai compare kardiya yakeen manain itna acha nahi likhti mein bas koshish karti hoon :rose umeed karti hoon aap ainda bhi yunhi mera hausla barhati rahain gi :)

khush rahiyai :rose

[muskaan]

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buhat khoobsurat lafzo'n to khelna to koi aap say seekhay :)

buhat acha likha hai :rose


khush rahyeah buhat sara :)

mein lafzoon sai nahi khailti dil ki baatain kehti hoon :rose khushi hui aap ko nazam pasand ai khush rahiyai :)