Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

[hayaa_n]

Asslamaolikum :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

Bohat zabardast kalam aap ka parha bohat acha laga thanx for sharing :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

Bohat zabardast kalam aap ka parha bohat acha laga thanx for sharing :)

:jazak: :) Adnan ji..bouhat shukriya.mujhay khushi hui k aap ko pasand aaya.:)

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

walekum assalaam,


ajnabi si ek soorat aaj dekhi hai hayaa
Aankhien apni thin khuli aur aainaa tha saamnien :thmbup: :thmbup:

waaaah bahoot khooob bahoot hi umdeh ek aur zabardast kalaam share kiyaa aapnien dili daad qabool karien khush rahien

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

:jazak: :) W.salaam..khurram ji aap k replies maira dil khush kar daitay hain:) :masha bouhat dil say daad daitay hain.mujhay khush ho gi k agar mujh junior kay kalam ki ghaltiyon ki nishandahi aap loge karain is liye k khud itna sahi nahi pata chalta.zaahir hay k yeh main nay seekha to hay nahi bas jis waqt jo kuch mind main aata hay us ko usi waqt diary main note,,aur phir forum main post.is liye aap sab mujhay agar koi ghalti lagay to zaroor agaah kiya kijiye ga mujhay bouhat khushi ho gi.khush rahiye.:)

[Rabi]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

kiya baat hay app ki kiya kiya tareef karo may app ki lafz hi nahi mary pass to

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

:jazak: :) Rabi aap ki yeh howsla afzaai mujhay dil say pasand aai.bouhat khush rahiye.Aameen.:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

nice One Hiya_N

[aik_lerki]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

Umm Nice :rose

[gazal_uzma]

Re: Ishq Ki Jab Ibtida Ki

Haya!
aap k aashar parrhay khayal acha hay but main iss ko ghazal nahi keh sakti cuze ghazal k her 2nd misray ko hum qafiya hona chahiye jub k aap k pehlay 2 ashar hum qafiya hain jub k last 2 asshar pehlay 2 ashar k qafiyon say mail nahi khatay hain.
mehnat kijieye zaror kamyabi hasil ho gi insha Allah
regards
uzma khan