Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Dil Kee Hamraaz Bhala Raaz KahaaN Hoti Hai
'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

shummu sahiba thank you. ap ne mujhe shayari ki rah dikhai varna to men gum ho jata. ek misra hi to likh paya. na jane kabhi kuch likh bhi paun ga ya nahin :( shukria guidance ka

Yar Main Bhee Tumharay Jaisa Hoo'n
Try To Kee Jaa Saktee Hai Naa....:)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Yeh Mohabbat Nahi'n Hai Khaab Soyee Aankho'n Kaa
'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Is Mohabat Pe Koi Rakhay Kaha'n Tak Pardaa
'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[SherAli]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Yar Main Bhee Tumharay Jaisa Hoo'n
Try To Kee Jaa Saktee Hai Naa....:)

hosla afzai ka shukria Shahdil bhai. ab ham ap mil ke likhen ge :) insha Allah :)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

hosla afzai ka shukria Shahdil bhai. ab ham ap mil ke likhen ge :) insha Allah :)

:insha:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai


pyar Jatna Bhi Karon wo Bad Gumyaan hoti hai

aapne to kayi girah lagayi hai..ek ek karke dekhti hun sab..waise ye misra behr se khaarij ho gaya hai :(

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

(no 2)

Tum Sey Khedon or Chayoon Maloom na ho

'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai'

sorry ye misra to ikdam samajh hi nahi aaya...agar urdu script mein likh dein to shayad arhne mein aasaani ho..thanx :)

[shummu]

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No3

Jo Baat Chali Tere E-sharoon Sey Chali hai

'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai

again misra behr mein nahi hai..Ali aap jaldbaazi na karein..aap pehle dekhein behr kya hai..wazan kya hai..maine upar darj kiya hai phir us pe koshish karein misre ke alfaaz ko break karke baithaane ki...1- choti aawaaz,2=badi aawaaz...uske baad use gungunaa ke bhi dekhein usi tarz pe ya diye gaye mashoor ghazla ke tarz pe..aap ko khud ehsaas hoga kahan aapki zubaan aTak rahi hai..All the best...:thmbup: waise is misre ko aap aisa kar dein to behr mein aa jaayega..

jab kabhi baat chali,tere ishaaron se chali

phir bhi msre mein dam nahi hai... aur behtar girah ki tawaqqo hai :)

yahan behr ke mutaaliq kayi articles maujood hain..aap zaroor usko parhein..inshallah madad milegi behr samajhne mein .

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

shummu sahiba thank you. ap ne mujhe shayari ki rah dikhai varna to men gum ho jata. ek misra hi to likh paya. na jane kabhi kuch likh bhi paun ga ya nahin :( shukria guidance ka

jee jee koshish karti rahiye inshallah aap poora kalaam behr mein likhna seekh jaayenge..hum ne bhi ek ek misre se behr seekhi. aap yahan maujood behr ke articles ko bhi zaroor parhein..madad milegi ..aur is silsile mein aayenda bhi aate rahiyega...:thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Dil Kee Hamraaz Bhala Raaz KahaaN Hoti Hai


'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

misra behr mein hai magar kuch khaas nahi hai :)

koshish kariye shahdil ke itni zyaada giraah lagane ke bajaaye ek ya 2 giraah lagaiye magar damdaar....:thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Yeh Mohabbat Nahi'n Hai Khaab Soyee Aankho'n Kaa

'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

masdhallah aap ne ye misra bhi behr mein kaha hai...aap wazan naap ke likhte hain ya gungunaa ke?? :D:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Is Mohabat Pe Koi Rakhay Kaha'n Tak Pardaa


'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

wah ye bhi behr mein hai aur achchi girah hai.:rose

main aapki saari girahein include nahi karungi poll mein..bas best karungi ok

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Boht Boht :thankzu:...For Appreciating....:)

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

aapne to kayi girah lagayi hai..ek ek karke dekhti hun sab..waise ye misra behr se khaarij ho gaya hai :(

salaam
app kiss indaz sey masrai ko dekh rahi ?
gunguna kar he wazan nahi hota as k elawa bhi wazan k dekhnai k buhat sey tarikai hi
app nai kiss indaz par masrai ko parkha hi aye app jante hi
so ager app ko sahi nahi lagraha ko in ko shamil na kare
koy masla nahi hi apna buhat khyal rakhey
Allha hafiz