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  • Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

    Salam ahl-e-bazm!:salam:


    Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke paanchwe muqaable ke saath haazir hun... :rose


    misra:


    'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hain'


    behr


    2 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2 ,2 2 (1 1 2)



    mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:


    aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
    kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak




    Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko kaamyab banayenge!


    ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 3 girah laga sakte hain.ALL THE BEST :thmbup:


    Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega



    Last date for ur entries: 15th Sept.

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    Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

    bUHAT aCHI SHARING HI APP KI Shamo keep it up
    Last edited by Ali jee; 12 September 2008, 21:18.

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    • #3
      Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

      Ali jee lagta hai message worng topic mein post kar diya:)

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      • #4
        Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

        Just 4 Starting....

        Yeh Mohabbat Jo Na Mohtaaj-e-ZubaaN Hoti Hai
        'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'
        Shahsigpic

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        • #5
          Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

          Originally posted by Shahdil View Post
          Just 4 Starting....


          Yeh Mohabbat Jo Na Mohtaaj-e-ZubaaN Hoti Hai

          'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

          wah bahut khoob..!:thmbup:

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          • #6
            Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

            Originally posted by shummu View Post
            wah bahut khoob..!:thmbup:
            :thankzu:
            Shahsigpic

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            • #7
              Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

              me ne bhi koshish ki he. ap bataie k kesi he. thank you

              vo lakh chhupayen bhale kaifiate dil ko
              Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

              Fall view from inside my car
              near my work place :)

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              • #8
                Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                ws mujhe khushi hui ke aapne koshish ki magar afsos behr mein nahi hai...koshish kijiye jo bhi misra likhe usko is mashoor ghazal ki tarz pe gungunaa kar dkehiye..agar lafz sahi baithte hain to aapka misra behr mein hoga...All the best.

                aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
                kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak

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                • #9
                  Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                  Originally posted by shummu View Post
                  ws mujhe khushi hui ke aapne koshish ki magar afsos behr mein nahi hai...koshish kijiye jo bhi misra likhe usko is mashoor ghazal ki tarz pe gungunaa kar dkehiye..agar lafz sahi baithte hain to aapka misra behr mein hoga...All the best.

                  aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
                  kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak

                  adab shummu ji. mujhe baher ka koi ilm nahin is lie ghalti ho gai. ap guide karen gi to insha Allah men bhi kuch sikh lun ga. phir se koshish kiya he ap dekh lijie plz. thank you

                  ishq ko lakh chupayen, kahin chupti he bhala
                  "Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai"

                  thank you shummu ji :)

                  Fall view from inside my car
                  near my work place :)

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                  • #10
                    Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                    Originally posted by SherAli View Post
                    adab shummu ji. mujhe baher ka koi ilm nahin is lie ghalti ho gai. ap guide karen gi to insha Allah men bhi kuch sikh lun ga. phir se koshish kiya he ap dekh lijie plz. thank you

                    vo bhale lakh chupayen, kahin chupti he bhala
                    "Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai"

                    thank you shummu ji :)
                    dekha aap aapne misra behr mein keh diya..very well done :thmbup:

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                    • #11
                      Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                      'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai
                      pyar Jatna Bhi Karon wo Bad Gumyaan hoti hai

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                      • #12
                        Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                        (no 2)

                        Tum Sey Khedon or Chayoon Maloom na ho
                        'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai'
                        Last edited by Ali jee; 12 September 2008, 21:17.

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                        • #13
                          Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                          No3

                          Jo Baat Chali Tere E-sharoon Sey Chali hai
                          'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai

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                          • #14
                            Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                            Originally posted by shummu View Post
                            Ali jee lagta hai message worng topic mein post kar diya:)

                            nahi sahi kiya hi app ko he kiya tha Galthi sey Hala lagya me samjha wo mod hi sorry acha silsela hi sharing karta Rahon GA INSHA ALLAH

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                            • #15
                              Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

                              Originally posted by shummu View Post
                              dekha aap aapne misra behr mein keh diya..very well done :thmbup:

                              shummu sahiba thank you. ap ne mujhe shayari ki rah dikhai varna to men gum ho jata. ek misra hi to likh paya. na jane kabhi kuch likh bhi paun ga ya nahin :( shukria guidance ka

                              Fall view from inside my car
                              near my work place :)

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