Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!:salam:


Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke paanchwe muqaable ke saath haazir hun... :rose


misra:


'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hain'


behr


2 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 1 2 2 ,2 2 (1 1 2)



mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:


aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak



Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko kaamyab banayenge!


ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 3 girah laga sakte hain.ALL THE BEST :thmbup:


Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega



Last date for ur entries: 15th Sept.

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

bUHAT aCHI SHARING HI APP KI Shamo keep it up

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Ali jee lagta hai message worng topic mein post kar diya:)

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Just 4 Starting....

Yeh Mohabbat Jo Na Mohtaaj-e-ZubaaN Hoti Hai
'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Just 4 Starting....

Yeh Mohabbat Jo Na Mohtaaj-e-ZubaaN Hoti Hai

'Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

wah bahut khoob..!:thmbup:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

wah bahut khoob..!:thmbup:

:thankzu:

[SherAli]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

me ne bhi koshish ki he. ap bataie k kesi he. thank you

vo lakh chhupayen bhale kaifiate dil ko
Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai'

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

ws mujhe khushi hui ke aapne koshish ki magar afsos behr mein nahi hai...koshish kijiye jo bhi misra likhe usko is mashoor ghazal ki tarz pe gungunaa kar dkehiye..agar lafz sahi baithte hain to aapka misra behr mein hoga...All the best.

aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak

[SherAli]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

ws mujhe khushi hui ke aapne koshish ki magar afsos behr mein nahi hai...koshish kijiye jo bhi misra likhe usko is mashoor ghazal ki tarz pe gungunaa kar dkehiye..agar lafz sahi baithte hain to aapka misra behr mein hoga...All the best.

aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
kaun jiitaa hai terii zulf ke sar hone tak

adab shummu ji. mujhe baher ka koi ilm nahin is lie ghalti ho gai. ap guide karen gi to insha Allah men bhi kuch sikh lun ga. phir se koshish kiya he ap dekh lijie plz. thank you

ishq ko lakh chupayen, kahin chupti he bhala
"Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai"

thank you shummu ji :)

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

adab shummu ji. mujhe baher ka koi ilm nahin is lie ghalti ho gai. ap guide karen gi to insha Allah men bhi kuch sikh lun ga. phir se koshish kiya he ap dekh lijie plz. thank you

vo bhale lakh chupayen, kahin chupti he bhala
"Yeh Haqeeqat To Nigaahon Say BayaaN Hoti Hai"

thank you shummu ji :)

dekha aap aapne misra behr mein keh diya..very well done :thmbup:

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai
pyar Jatna Bhi Karon wo Bad Gumyaan hoti hai

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

(no 2)

Tum Sey Khedon or Chayoon Maloom na ho
'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai'

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

No3

Jo Baat Chali Tere E-sharoon Sey Chali hai
'Yeh haqeeqat to nigaahon say bayaaN hoti hai

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

Ali jee lagta hai message worng topic mein post kar diya:)

nahi sahi kiya hi app ko he kiya tha Galthi sey Hala lagya me samjha wo mod hi sorry acha silsela hi sharing karta Rahon GA INSHA ALLAH

[SherAli]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-5

dekha aap aapne misra behr mein keh diya..very well done :thmbup:

shummu sahiba thank you. ap ne mujhe shayari ki rah dikhai varna to men gum ho jata. ek misra hi to likh paya. na jane kabhi kuch likh bhi paun ga ya nahin :( shukria guidance ka