Tarahi mushaira

[Sagheer]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

:embarasse

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Mujahid saheb, Muzafar Mohsin saheb & sagheer saheb
mushaire MeN aap ki shirkat ke liye mamnoon hooN
aap sab ki ghazloN par tabsara 20 sep ke baad karoN gi

bloo saheba
yeh thread dekhiye

http://www.pegham.com/forumdisplay.php?f=233

aur jo baatieN samajh nahiN aayiiN phir se pooch lijye

Almas saheba aap ki ghazal ka bhee intzaar rahe ga

regards
zmufti

[Z.]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

bloo saheba
yeh thread dekhiye

http://www.pegham.com/forumdisplay.php?f=233

aur jo baatieN samajh nahiN aayiiN phir se pooch lijye



regards
zmufti

jee zaroor sis :salam:

[F@TIM@]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

waaaoooo

[zapk]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

لیجے جناب ہماری کاوش بھی حاضر خدمت ہے:rose

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Almas jee
mushaire meN aap ki shirkat ke liye mamnoon huuN
khush rahiye
zmufti

[zapk]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Almas jee
mushaire meN aap ki shirkat ke liye mamnoon huuN
khush rahiye
zmufti

Zarra nawazi hai:rose wagarna mamnoon to mujhay hona chahiyay ke is mushairay se mujhay tahreek mili.:phool:

[A.h.khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

[quote=muzafarmohsin;504093]Merri Ghzal Haazir ha...

Kab Woh Sunttaa Ha Kahanni Merri..?
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nice bahot khob
rose:rose

[A.h.khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

:embarasse

bahot hia ache janab bahot khob isi trha agar jugali karte rahe to bahot nam kamaye gain janab

magar waqe main abahot acha likha hae

[A.h.khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

bahot khob uon lab kusha howaye ke gulshan khila diye

[A.h.khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

wha wha mujhaid sahab bahot khob

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Mujahid saheb
Mushaire meN sab se pehli ghazal aap ki hai so issi se shuru karti huuN
aap ne ghazal ko aaj hi edit kiyya hai shayad kissi se islaah karwaaii hai
ab aap ke tamaam ashaar bahar meN heN
Mushaire meN ghazal pesh karne ki aakhri taareekh 20 sep thii jis ke guzar jaane ke baad aap ko ghazal edit nahiN karna chahiye thii

regards
zmufti

[A.h.khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Who Teri Ketab Main Rakhi Nisahni Meri,,,,
Kab Tak Rakhe Gi Who Nishani Porani Meri,,,,

Tere Hijer Ke Sabhi Pahlo Main Guzri Jawani Meri,,,,
To Na Samjhe Ye Alag Bat Hae Mohabat Meri,,,,

Tere Koche Ke Dar O Bam Sunate Honge Khani Meri,,,
Zindagi Bar Bar Poche Hae Khna Guzari Hae Jawani Meri,,,

Kese Khe Don Ke Raahe Mohabat Main Us Ko Talab Na Thi Meri,,,,
Warna Pahron Dariche Par Khari Na Takti Sorat Meri,,,,

Ab Us Ko Jarorat Nahi Hae Meri,,,
Magar Rahe Gi Du Us Ke Sath HAMESA Meri,,,,,,,,,


Main Koi Sahir Nahi Hon Magar Kuch Ulta Sidha Likhne Ki Koshis Ki Hae Agar Koi Galti Ho To Nishandahi Karwa Dijye Ga...ap Logo N Ki Dua Ka Talbgar





A.h.khan

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Merri Ghzal Haazir ha...

Kab Woh Sunttaa Ha Kahanni Merri..?
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Kaash Bhaa Jatti Usey Haaey Nishaanni Merri..!
Kar Gai Ruswaa Mujhey Haaey Heeranni Merri..!

Is Bhurhappe Men Terri Yaad Ha,Aur Wo Lamhaat.
Jab Terra Saath Aur GUL RANG Jawaanni Merri..!

Is Qaddar Dard Thaa Yaa Teeraa Hawallaa Shaaid..!
Logg Suntte Hi Rahhe RAAT KAHAANNI Merri...!

Men Ne Chup Chaap Sahhe Zulm Gilaa Tak Na Kiaa..
Merri Ruswaai Kaa Baais Thi Naadaanni Merri...

Men Wo MOHSIN Hun Jisse Gairron Ne Bhi Dhutkaarra.
Apnnoo Nee Bhi Naa Sunni Baat Naa Maanni Merri..

---===Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin===---

Muzzafar saheb
aap ne achche mazameen baandhe heN
daad qabool kijye
taham mushaire meN jo Tarah ka misra diyya gaya thaa
us ke afaeel the

faailatun..failun...felun

aap ka sher hai

Kaash Bhaa Ja/tti Usey Haa/ey Nishaanni /Merri..!
Kar Gai Rus/waa Mujhey Haa/ey Heeranni Merri..!

faailatun/faailatun/faailatun/felun

aap ke matle meN aik rukan ziyada hai

neez hairaani aur naadaani yahaN istemaal nahiN ho sakte

issi tarah baaqi ashaar heN

aik aur baat
تری =tirri
تیری=teri



mujhe lagta hai aap ilm-ul-urooz se waaqif heN shayad jaldi meN aap ne ghazal post kar di

umeed hai agle mushaire meN aap ki ziyada behtar ghazal paRhne ko mile gii
regards
zmufti

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

:embarasse

sagheer saheb aap ke ashaar behar meN kar rahi huuN
pehlay sher ko dekhiye

faailatun/failatun/felun
kab vo sunta/ hai kahani/ meri
behra hai jai/se keh naani/ meri

baat sunta hai raqeeboN ki tu
sun bhee le kuch hi zabani meri

daal gal na saki ab tak meri
gal gayyi haaye jawani meri

khaa ke thappaR tirra ehsaas hua
keh tu ne qadr na jaani meri

jab gali meN tirri taange pe gaya
tooti har baar kamani meri

regards
zmufti