Tarahi mushaira

[zmufti]

:rose

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

assalamualaikum motamim mushaaira,agar qaabil samjha jaae tho mujeh bhi mushaairey may aik shaair ki haisiat say shirkat ki ijazat di jae, aap ki bardi nawazish hogi:thmbup:.waisey ghazal waghaira isi thread may he kar dain ya doosra thread khulega iss k liyee aur kub say add kar saktey hain?

[ahsaas]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Wa Alikum Aslam ...
Hum bhi pori koshish karein gy agercha hum kuch kachy hein abhi mager hum bhi hissa lena chahein gy..:)

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

assalamualaikum motamim mushaaira,agar qaabil samjha jaae tho mujeh bhi mushaairey may aik shaair ki haisiat say shirkat ki ijazat di jae, aap ki bardi nawazish hogi:thmbup:.waisey ghazal waghaira isi thread may he kar dain ya doosra thread khulega iss k liyee aur kub say add kar saktey hain?

Mujahid saheb
is ke liye aap ko ijazat ki qatan zaroorat nahiN
yeh pegham ke sab members ke liye open contest hai
regards
zmufti

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Wa Alikum Aslam ...
Hum bhi pori koshish karein gy agercha hum kuch kachy hein abhi mager hum bhi hissa lena chahein gy..:)

Ahsaas saheba/saheb
tarahi mushaire nau mashq shoara ke liye hi hote heN keh vo mukhtalif behroN ki pabandi meN apne dil ki baat kehna seekhieN
aap sab ke kalaam ka intzaar rahe ga
regards
zmufti

[ahsaas]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

okay thanks ..kia kalaam isi thread mien post kerna hai??

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

okay thanks ..kia kalaam isi thread mien post kerna hai??

jee haaN issi thread meN post kijye

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

[Z.]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

ahan... good start zmufti sis

af'eel kya hota hai?

@mujahid bro.

bravo :thmbup:

[zapk]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Zarqa ji main aapki taraf se tarhi mushairay ki shiddat se muntazir thi.Bohat acha qadam hai.PG ke members main shairi ka shouq is tarah ke muqabilay se mazeed barhay ga.:rose

[zmufti]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

ahan... good start zmufti sis

af'eel kya hota hai?

@mujahid bro.

bravo :thmbup:

shukria bloo saheba
afaeel se muraad vo arkaan heN jin ke wazn per yeh misra hai
ghazal kehne ke liye aap ko is ke meter, wazn ya bahr ka khayal rakhna hota hai

Micaal ke tor pay

misra hai

kab vo sunta/ hai kahani/ meri

faailaatun/failatun/felun

ab youN dekhiye

kab vo sunta= faailatun
kab=faa
vo=i
sun=la
ta=tun

hai kahani = failatun
hai=fa
ka=i
ha=la
ni=tun

meri = felun
me= fe
ri= lun

ghazal ke baaqi misre bhee issi meter ya wazn meN hone chahiyeN
maiN jald hi aap ke liye kuch mazameen post karoN gi jin ko paRh kar aap kuch technicallities seekh sakti heN
regards
zmufti

[muzafarmohsin]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

Merri Ghzal Haazir ha...

Kab Woh Sunttaa Ha Kahanni Merri..?
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Kaash Bhaa Jatti Usey Haaey Nishaanni Merri..!
Kar Gai Ruswaa Mujhey Haaey Heeranni Merri..!

Is Bhurhappe Men Terri Yaad Ha,Aur Wo Lamhaat.
Jab Terra Saath Aur GUL RANG Jawaanni Merri..!

Is Qaddar Dard Thaa Yaa Teeraa Hawallaa Shaaid..!
Logg Suntte Hi Rahhe RAAT KAHAANNI Merri...!

Men Ne Chup Chaap Sahhe Zulm Gilaa Tak Na Kiaa..
Merri Ruswaai Kaa Baais Thi Naadaanni Merri...

Men Wo MOHSIN Hun Jisse Gairron Ne Bhi Dhutkaarra.
Apnnoo Nee Bhi Naa Sunni Baat Naa Maanni Merri..

---===Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin===---

[zapk]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

shukria bloo saheba
afaeel se muraad vo arkaan heN jin ke wazn per yeh misra hai
ghazal kehne ke liye aap ko is ke meter, wazn ya bahr ka khayal rakhna hota hai

Micaal ke tor pay

misra hai

kab vo sunta/ hai kahani/ meri

faailaatun/failatun/felun

ab youN dekhiye

kab vo sunta= faailatun
kab=faa
vo=i
sun=la
ta=tun

hai kahani = failatun
hai=fa
ka=i
ha=la
ni=tun

meri = felun
me= fe
ri= lun

ghazal ke baaqi misre bhee issi meter ya wazn meN hone chahiyeN
maiN jald hi aap ke liye kuch mazameen post karoN gi jin ko paRh kar aap kuch technicallities seekh sakti heN
regards
zmufti

Zarqa ji! Agar aap yeh afa'eel mmebers ko sikhain to yeh aik bohat achi activity hogi.Kiya khiyal hai?:rose

[phototech81]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

jnab bot acha selsala shoro keya hai
main bi zaroor koshesh karon ga
iss mukabely main hesa leny ki
baoht boaht shukreya

[Z.]

Re: Tarahi mushaira

shukria bloo saheba
afaeel se muraad vo arkaan heN jin ke wazn per yeh misra hai
ghazal kehne ke liye aap ko is ke meter, wazn ya bahr ka khayal rakhna hota hai

Micaal ke tor pay

misra hai

kab vo sunta/ hai kahani/ meri

faailaatun/failatun/felun

ab youN dekhiye

kab vo sunta= faailatun
kab=faa
vo=i
sun=la
ta=tun

hai kahani = failatun
hai=fa
ka=i
ha=la
ni=tun

meri = felun
me= fe
ri= lun

ghazal ke baaqi misre bhee issi meter ya wazn meN hone chahiyeN
maiN jald hi aap ke liye kuch mazameen post karoN gi jin ko paRh kar aap kuch technicallities seekh sakti heN
regards
zmufti

bohot shukrya sis ......kuch kuch baateiN uper sey guzar gai hain :D
mey apney taur per koshish zaroor karun gi inshAllah

:rose