~~Bait Baazi~~

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aaeenay k sau tukray hum nay kar k dekhain hain

ek main bhi tanha thay aur 100 main bhi akelay hain

Rosy shair to bohat zabardast hai, aur yeh ghazal Munni Begum ney jo gaii hai mujhey bohat pasand hai - magar shair mein aap ney kuchh alfaaz ka izafa kar diya hai, asal shair yun hai:

aainey key so tukrey kar key ham ney dekhey hain
aik mein bhi tanha they, so mein bhi akeley hain
bheerr hai qayamat ki phir bhi ham akeley hain
zindagi ki rahon mein ranj-o-gham key mailey hain

Noon sey:

Nasir ham ko mila tha, tanha aur udaas
wohi purani batein uski, wohi purana roag

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Galiyon mein wahi larkay haathoon mein wahi pathar
kiya log mohabbat ko her daor mein maaren gay?

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh Raaz onhein maloom na thaa , yeh baat onhein maloom tu thee
Kuch loag Muhabbat kartay hein , kuch loag Muhabbat jeetay hein
My own

[Rosy]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Noon sey:

Nasir ham ko mila tha, tanha aur udaas
wohi purani batein uski, wohi purana roag

Ji shukriya galti ki nashaandahi ka.
bahut din hogay thay sunkar acchi tarha yaad nahi hai.

[Rosy]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na khuda raha na sanam rahay, na raqeeb dairoo haram rahay
na rahi kaheen asad-e-elahi, na kaheen abu lahbi rahi
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[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ya rab meray naseeb ka koi faisla tu ho
mein yunhi doob jaoon ga k sahil b aa-ay gaa

[Rosy]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aejaaz hai kisi ka ya gardish-e-zamaana
tu ta huwa hai asia main saher-e-farangiyaana
***

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aejaaz hai kisi ka ya gardish-e-zamaana
tu ta huwa hai asia main saher-e-farangiyaana

***

A ishq tu ne ANJUM ko ye kiya bana diya
ik shareer larka tha shayer bana diya
(My own)

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aey merey hamnasheen chal, kahin aur chal
is chaman mein koi apna thikana nahin
baat hoti gulon tak to sah letey ham
ab to kanton peh bhi haq hamara nahin

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aey merey hamnasheen chal, kahin aur chal

is chaman mein koi apna thikana nahin
baat hoti gulon tak to sah letey ham

ab to kanton peh bhi haq hamara nahin

نہ جانے دیکھہ کہ کیوں ان کو یہ ہوا احساس
کہ میرے دل پہ انہیں اختیار آج بھی ہے

[Rosy]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh na thi hamaari kismat k visaal-e-yaar hota
agar aur jeetay rahtay yahi intezaar hota
***

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aa k ab tasleem kar lein tu nahi tu mein sahi
Koan manay ga k hum mein be-wafa koi nahi

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na poochh kaisey guzarti hai zindagi Nasir
bas aik jabar hai yeh ikhtiyar agar hai bhi

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh Faisloun k tasadam, Yeh Saneha-e Visaal
hamein khabar na thee ROOH Ka azab hotay hein

My OWN

[Hashim Raza]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

naraaz hain mujh say teri shamain teri raatain
main chandni ourhay huey barson say khara hon