~~Bait Baazi~~

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ye alag baat hai logon se ghabrata hoga
dil to kisi sham uska b bhar ata hoga

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Uth'ti nahe nigaah kise aur ki taraf
paband ker gae hai kise ki nazar mujy

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yunhi tanhai mei hum khud ko saza dete hain
naam tera likhte hain aur likh k mita dete hain

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nahe bhool pa'ay hum jin k sath guzra ek bhe pal
Aaaj vohi samajhty hain humain apna guzra hoa kal

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Log toot jate hein ik ghur banane mein
Tumhein tarus nahein aatta bustian jalane mein
Hur dharakte pathur ko log dil samujh laite hein
Umer beet jati hai dil ko dil banane mein

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na chaho itna humain chahaton say der lagta hai
na aao itna qareeb ky judaae say der lagta hai
Tumhari wafa'on py bharoosa ha hum dum
mager apny naseeb say der lagta hai

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Itna socha hai kuch sawalon per
barf si girne lagi hai balon per
rone wale tu hans nahi sakte
log hanste hain rone walon per

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Rodad-e-mohabbat kia keheiay kuch yaad rahi kuch bhool gaey
Do din ki musarut kia kaheiay kuch yaad rahi kuch bhool gaey

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

above person jo shair likhta hai uske last word se apko likhna hai

R se likhna tha apko....

@Yun to kaya chez zindagi mein nahi
jese soche the apney jee mein nahi
ik sahks hai zindagi jesa
or woh shaks mere zindagi mein nahi

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yaad aayi hai teri aur bvhi shidut se humein
Bhool jane ka tujhe jub bhi iraada chaha

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yaad aayi hai teri aur bvhi shidut se humein
Bhool jane ka tujhe jub bhi iraada chaha

plzzzzzzz game k rules follow karein.....
i se end kia hai meine shair.....usse apko likhna tha..

aja k abe zabat ka mousam nahi guzra
aja k abe paharo per berf jami hai
khushbo k jazero se sitaro ke hado tak
sab kuch hai is sher mein bas tere kami hai


ab I ???

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Shair alif pe nahi ye pur khatum ho raha hai



Yaad se aankh num krte huwey
Umer kut jaey gi ghum krte huwey

[*khushi*]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

apke shair ka last word A tha....

khr...

ye kis maqaam pe pahunchaa diyaa zamaane ne
ki ab hayaat pe teraa bhii iKhtiyaar nahiin

[Daood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na pooch kitne mohabbat ke zakhum khaey hein
Ke jin ko soch ke dil sogwaar aaj bhi hai

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yahan kisi ko koi hasb e aarzo na milla
kisi ko ham na milay aur ham ko too na milla