~~Bait Baazi~~

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Noon:

na tujh say hai, na gila aasman say hoga,
teri judai ka jhagRa jahaan say hoga,
judai tay the magar yeh kabhi na socha tha,
kay to juda bhi judagana shaan say hoga.

انکی محبت میں اک عمر گزر نا کچھ بھی نہیں
میں مر گیا ، انکی چاہ میں لیکن ہوا کچھ بھی نہیں

[i see u]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab shahr mein iska badal hi nahi koi wesa jaan-e-ghazal hi nahi
aiwan-e-ghazal mein lafzun k guldaan sajaun kis k liay

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Noon:

na janay kab meri dunia maiN muskuraiy ga,
woh aik shaks kay khuwaboN maiN bhi khafa sa lagay.

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab shahr mein iska badal hi nahi koi wesa jaan-e-ghazal hi nahi
aiwan-e-ghazal mein lafzun k guldaan sajaun kis k liay

yay

yeh kia kay aik tour say guzray tamam umer,
jee chahta hai ab koi tery siva bhi ho..

next wow :khi:

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yay

yeh kia kay aik tour say guzray tamam umer,
jee chahta hai ab koi tery siva bhi ho..

next wow :khi:

Wo aa Ke Poonchh Den Aansu Hamari Aankhon Se
Itna bhi Hamare Haq Mein Naseeb Hamara Nahin

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ap bhi poetry ka shoq rakhty hein ..??

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Wo aa Ke Poonchh Den Aansu Hamari Aankhon Se
Itna bhi Hamare Haq Mein Naseeb Hamara Nahin

noon:

neyat-e-shooq bhar na jaiy kaheeN,
to bhi dil say utar na jaiy kaheeN,
aaj dekha hai tujh ko dair kay baad,
aaj ka din guzar na jaiy kaheeN,

noon again

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ap bhi poetry ka shoq rakhty hein ..??

pehlay bohot shoq tha par ab kam kam he aata hoon, balkay kafi dinoN baad aaya hoon

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

noon:

neyat-e-shooq bhar na jaiy kaheeN,
to bhi dil say utar na jaiy kaheeN,
aaj dekha hai tujh ko dair kay baad,
aaj ka din guzar na jaiy kaheeN,

noon again

Naa siyoo hoont na Khawaboon main sada doo hum kooo
Maslehat ka yea taqaza hai key bhoola doo hum koo

pehlay bohot shoq tha par ab kam kam he aata hoon, balkay kafi dinoN baad aaya hoon

hmmm ..ab kion kam ker diya ....shoq tou qayam hai na:)

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Naa siyoo hoont na Khawaboon main sada doo hum kooo
Maslehat ka yea taqaza hai key bhoola doo hum koo

woh dil maiN tabas'sum ki kiran ghoolnay wala,
roThay to rutooN ko bhi sanwarnay nahee deta

hmmm ..ab kion kam ker diya ....shoq tou qayam hai na:)

bas ab share karnay ka shoq nahee raha, paRhnay ka hai :lpop:

[i see u]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

wo tou khushboo hai hawaoun mein bikhar jay ga
masla phool ka hai phool kidher jay ga

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

wo tou khushboo hai hawaoun mein bikhar jay ga
masla phool ka hai phool kidher jay ga

next to Alif thaa :blush:

Alif:

Ab tak meri yadooN say miTaiy nahee miT'ta,,
bheegi hoi ek shaam ka manzar, teri aankhaiN.

next noon

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

next to Alif thaa :blush:

Alif:

Ab tak meri yadooN say miTaiy nahee miT'ta,,
bheegi hoi ek shaam ka manzar, teri aankhaiN.

next noon

Na sawal ban kay mila karoo, na jawab ban kay mila karo
Meri zindagi meray khuwab hain,Mujhay khuwab ban kay mila karo


shoq mara nahin karte.....:)

[RulzZ]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Na sawal ban kay mila karoo, na jawab ban kay mila karo
Meri zindagi meray khuwab hain,Mujhay khuwab ban kay mila karo


shoq mara nahin karte.....:)

Wow:

woh aaj bhi sadioN ki musafat pay khaRa hai,,
dhonDa tha jisay waqt ki dewar gira kar...

yap :thmbup:

next ray

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Wow:

woh aaj bhi sadioN ki musafat pay khaRa hai,,
dhonDa tha jisay waqt ki dewar gira kar...

yap :thmbup:

next ray

:)

Raston Pe mat betho hawa tang karegi,
Guzzre huye logon ki sada tang karegi,
Mat toot kar chaho use aghaze safar main,
Bichrega tu IK IK ada tang karegi