~~Bait Baazi~~

[Mind hackeR]

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Nazuk mizaaj log they hum jesey aainah
totey kuch iis terah keh sada bhi na ker sakey

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

yeh khatam-e-wassal ka lamha hai, raigaan na samajh
keh iis k baad wohi dooriyon ka sehra hai

[zainbaba]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ye Ehteraam-e-Tamanna , Ye Ehtiyaat-e-Junoon
K Teri Baat karoon Aur Tera Naam Na Looon

[Pehli``Barish]

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Neem tareekh tanhai main surkh pholon ka ban khil utha
hjir ki zard dewar pr teri tasveer kia lag gai

[Daood]

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Ye aur baat ke abb na,ashnaa sa ho jaey
Kabhi to ilum ussey bhi hamarey haal ka tha

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab vo neendon ka ujarna to nahi dekhain gay
vohe achy thy jinhain khuab dekhaye na gaye

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

nice try gull ji lakin kuch mistakes hain, mind nahi kijiyega
aap ki islaah k liye bata rahi hon, wazan sahe nahi hai
our qafiye bhi kuch theek nahi ziyadha detail main nahi jaongi
i hope aap ne mind nahi kia hoga
khush rahain our yonhe acha acha likhti rahain :ff:

Buhat shukriya sapphire ....Mein munn moji kisam ki likhnay wali hoon...Meray ehsass ka taaluk behar se shayd har giz nahi ..........jab likhna ho tu likh deyti hoon , and aap ko raaz ki baat b bata doon mein ..
Shaira samjhti hee nahi Khud ko
anyway thanx for ur sweet words ! Khush rahiyay ..! aur ...................! Posts karti rahiyay
(dont worry! K mein nay mind kia ya nahi kion k I GOT no MIND like that ..!)

[Gul]

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ab vo neendon ka ujarna to nahi dekhain gay
vohe achy thy jinhain khuab dekhaye na gaye

:)

Yeh sach kiya k khawaboun se na sjaaya aangan
Gul O Bahar, har aangan mein nahi BASA kartay
MY OWN !

[aik_lerki]

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yay aadaab bhe hamary hain tumhain kiya maloom
Hum jeet ky bhe haary hain tumhain kiya maloom
aik tum ho ky samajhty he nahe apna hum ko
aik hum hain ky bas tumhary hain tumhain kiya maloom

[Pehli``Barish]

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mou ki baatain suny her koi dill ka dard na jany houn
awazon ki bazaron main khamoshi pehchany koun

[aik_lerki]

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Na wo iqraar kerta ha na wo inkaar kerta hai
Humain phir b yay guman hai wo humse pyar kerta hai
haseen chandni raaton ko jab loog meethe neend soty hain
to ek khawab aashna chahra humain baydaar kerta hai

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh haalat dil-e-beqraar ki ru'ba'zawal hai
kabhi teri yeh kaifiyat thi jo aaj mera haal hai
na din ko sakoon, na raaton ko chain hai milta hai
is muhabbat ki wadi mein ab jeena muhaal hai

fi'badeeha

[zainbaba]

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yeh bhee achha hi hua, bichhray anaa kay moR per
werna waisay bhee mujhay tum say juda hona hee tha

[Gul]

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itni kum fursati mein na pas Aaoo tum
HadisOO phir kabhi Aazmana Mujhay

[zainbaba]

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yeh bhee kia kam hay keh dil per daagh sa reh jaye ga
werna taray ba'ad maray paas kia reh jaye ga