~~Bait Baazi~~

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ibtida-e-ishq hai rota hai kya
aagey aagey dekhiyey hota hai kya

[La'hasil]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Ek Thaka Hara Ansoo
Chahat Ka Khamosh Sila Tha

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab tak dil-e-khush feham ko hain tujh sey umeedein
yeh aakhri shamein bhi bujhaney key liye aa

[ahsaas]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aansu nahi thamte hain aankhon main abhi tak
Jaate hue rota woh mujhe chorr gaya tha

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Aarzu hai keh tu yahan aaey
aur umer bhar na jaey kahin

[La'hasil]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nahin Dukh Main Us ko Rakha Karo , Kabhi Sukh Bhi Us ko Diya Karo
Yeh Udaas Hai Kahye Roz Say , Meray Dil Main Aa Kar Raha Karo

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Wahi aawaz ki kosen wahi tanoo k khatoot
chand nagme thay jo mill kar teri tasweer huay

[La'hasil]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Yeh Nahin Kay Ghuftagu Ka Dhab Nahin
Bolta Tha Main Bhi Lekin Ab Nahin

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

neend aajye to kia mehflain barpa dekhon
aakhain khul jain to tanhai ka sehra dekhon

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Naraz agar woh hain...

[naveed iqbal]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

atna behis tha keh pighalta hi na tha baton say
aadmi tha keh terasha hoa pether dekha
dukh hi kuchh aesa tha keh roya tera mohsin werna
gham chhupa ker ausay hanstay hue akser dekha

[Masood]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

ab key bars bhi woh nahin aaya bahar mein
guzar geya aur ik bars intizaar mein

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

neend to Khuab hai our hijr ki shab khub kahan
is amavas ki ghani raat main mahtaab kahan

[Gul]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nigah-e Naaz mein kuch unn kahay lamhay rakhna
K aanssoO aaein gay, ohein sambhalay rakhna
Meri moojoodgi mein tum ho odass iss pal mein
Loat jaooOn tu yeh maala-e haseen Sambhalay rakhna
My own!:rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~~Bait Baazi~~

Nigah-e Naaz mein kuch unn kahay lamhay rakhna

K aanssoO aaein gay, ohein sambhalay rakhna
Meri moojoodgi mein tum ho odass iss pal mein
Loat jaooOn tu yeh maala-e haseen Sambhalay rakhna

My own!:rose

nice try gull ji lakin kuch mistakes hain, mind nahi kijiyega
aap ki islaah k liye bata rahi hon, wazan sahe nahi hai
our qafiye bhi kuch theek nahi ziyadha detail main nahi jaongi
i hope aap ne mind nahi kia hoga
khush rahain our yonhe acha acha likhti rahain :ff:

abhi say mery rafogar k hath thakny lagy
abhi to chak mery zakham k sily bhi nahi