Eshaa Ka Intikhaab

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ebadat c lagay hai"

Assaalam-0-Alaikom:rose

yeh kalam acha sa lagay hai..:)

to dil aapko shkriya sa kahay hai:phool:

[RulzZ]

Re: Ebadat c lagay hai"

har simt latafat he latafat si lagaiy hai... nice, waisay shayer ki khoshqismati hai yeh kay onhain har taraf latafat he nazar aai ;) jo hum ko aik talkh haqiqat si lagay hai :D

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Ek nazm ~~~~

Adaab!!!:salam:
Kishwar naaheed ki ek nazm pesh-e-khidmat hai:rose

mujhey parhnay ko baythay ho to aankhein haath pay rakh lo
kaho, hansta huaa tumnay kabhi badal ko dekha hai?

kabhi bijli k daman se mehak phooti hai aangan mein
samundar doob janay ko kabhi daman mein utra hai?

mujhey perhnay agar baythho
to parchhaeeyon ko mat dekho

na dekho bujhtay angaron ki bhobhal ko
k in haathon se sholon ki tamazat
harf banti hai
meray honton se murda manzaron ko
lafz miltay hain
meri aahat ko sun k
baadbaan khahish-e-safar pehnay
magar main kaun hoon?

Aankhein ..!! k Sehra, baad bay ronaq
badan pe aabroo ki kehnagi ka rang thehra hai

qadam shoreedgi ki daldalon mein
zakhm khandaan hain
mujhey parhtay huey
haathon pe rakhi aankh beh niklay
To hans dena...!!!:rose

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ek nazm ~~~~

paRhaa huii thii...koi naii cheez pesh karo...apne zamaane kii na sunaao hameN :lol :lol :lol

to phir msg kernay ki taklif bhi na kertay ...wessay bhi bhejay mei to koi baat aatee nahin aap k:khi: :lol

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ebadat c lagay hai"

innii chhoTii sii Ghazal aur phir uskaa paRhnaa! ek Himaaqat C lage hai :lol :lol :lol :lol :lol

Ghazal paRh kar yaaraa tashnagii C rah gaii...lagtaa hai yaa to aapne mukammil Ghazal hii post nahiiN kii yaa marHoom kii 4 ash'aar ke ba'd GAS FINISH ho gaii thii :tauba :lol :lol :lol :lol

vaise, jitne bhii ash'aar is Ghazal meN haiN Gahzab ke haiN. shukria share karne ke liye :rose

ye jo Allah nay 2 motay motay Bhainsay jessay bantay[bilor(Ankhein)] dieey hain :lol na in ka bhi istemaal kar liya karo saewab milay ga k nemat ko istemaal kiya hai:lol ...
mainey lmention kiya tha k......Jaan nisar Akhtar ki ghazal k kuch sh'r to is ka yehee matlab hai k complete nahin hai ye....:khi:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Shikwa~~~~~~

Adaab.

merei fav: ek chhoti c nazm :rose ummeed hai pasand aaey gee

Mainey tum se
tumhein maanga
to tum muskura dieey
lekin..!!!
tum ye bhi to keh saktay thay
Meri jaan..!!!
Apni cheezein bhi bhala maangi jaati hain ..??
:rose :rose :rose

[D@y W@lk3r]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

wao ji sahi kaha app nay. nice

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

wao ji sahi kaha app nay. nice

Shukriya Ji:salam:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

hmmm...kia yeh kisi ne kaha TUM se? zaraa address to denaa uskaa ... maiN na ja akar usko:hathora :hathora :hathora :hathora :hathora :hathora

jal k kabab na ho ....Kawway:a stick:

[*Rida*]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

yeh mairi bhi fav hai thanks :)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

yeh mairi bhi fav hai thanks :)

WaAlaikum Assalam
ur welcome Rida ji:rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Shikwa~~~~~~

aslaam_u_Alikam

bohat khub

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

~Kamal rakhtay hain..!!~~

Adaab!!:salam:

Hamesha tum se tallluq bahal rakhtay hain
Tum se ziada tumhara khial rakhtay hain

Koi na dekh lay tasweer teri, aankhon mein
Sada nigahon pe palkon ki dhaal rakhtay hain

Hamein to milta nahin waqt chahaton k lieey
Adawatein bhi magar log paal rakhtay hain

Paray gee in ki zarurat firaq raaton mein
Tumhari yaad k jugnoo sambhaal rakhtay hain

Tumharee zaat mein in k jawab pinhaan hain
Kitab-e-zeest mein jitnay sawal rakhay hain

Hamein bhi aatay hain dil jeetnay k hunar saray
Faqat itna sa to hum bhi kamal rakhtay hain

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~Kamal rakhtay hain..!!~~

waah bhai waah...yeh Ghazal achchhi hai bahot aur is is Ghazal kii zameen HAZAL ke liye bahot mauzooN hai...maslan:

rookhii sookhii roTii khaanaa kitnaa kaar-e-mohaal hai
isii liye to, ham chaTnii ke saath DAAL rakhte haiN

:lol :lol :lol

Shukriya pasand kernay ka.....
aur ye section chit chat k lieey nahin hai:a stick: ...us k lieey gup shup use kjieey..Aur kisi shayar k kalam ko bigaarnay se bhi parhez kijieey.......

[ASAD]

Re: ~Kamal rakhtay hain..!!~~

very nice je.......................................