*Gham*

[Mani16]

:alhamd::dua

[Yaaram]

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marvelous !!

[ahsaas]

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didn't like Poetry but frame work too good ...and color combination awesum :phool:

[Mani16]

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@yaaram, Thanks bro, i think 2nd try kaamyaab ho gai:p

@Ahsas, poetry pasand na ana bhi samajh ata hy, thanks alot 2nd try ki tareef k liye

[Yaaram]

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Imran bhai aap bura na manaye ga, zara apni poetry ka yoN standard kaim kejye k aap ka banaya hoye ko char chand lag jain :)

[thefire1]

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Assalaam-O-alaikum

Kia baat hay Mani sahab, kia professionalism aagaya hay aap kay kaam main, khoobsurat design, background, bohat hi haseen border aur bohat hi khoobsurat intikhaab font ka.

Shayeri ka jahan tak sawaal hay tou mujhay tou yeh bohat acha laga, shararti saa andaz bilkul Qateel shafayii ki likhi hoyee nazm ka:

Suna Hai Log Us Ko Ankh Bher Ker Dekhtay Hain
So Uskey Shehar Main Kuch Din Thehr Ker dekhtay Hain

Suna Hai Is Ko Bhi Hai Shair-o-Shaire Se Shaghaf

So Hum Bhi Moajzey Apney Huner K Dekhtay Hain



Suna Hai Boley To Batoon se Phool Jhertey Hain

Yeh Baat Hai To Chalo Baat Kar K Dekhtey Hain

Suna Hai Raat Usey Chand Takta Rehta Hai

Sitarey Bam-o-Falak Se Uter Ker Dekhtay Hain



Suna Hai Din Ko Titliyan Usey Satati Hain

Suna Hai Raat Ko Jugnu Thehr K Dekhtey Hain

Suna Hai Is K Labon Se Gulaab Jaltey Hain

Mousam-e-Bahar Per Ilzam Dher K Dekhtey Hain


Suna Hai Is K Badan Ki Tarash Aesi Hai

K Phool Apni Qabaen Kutter Ker Dekhtey Hain

Rukey To Gardishen Is Ka Tawaf Karti Hain

Chaley To Is ko Zamaney Thehr K Dekhtey Hain


Kahaniyan Hi Sahih Sab Mubalghey Hi Sahih

Ager Woh Khaab Hai To Tabeer Kar K Dekhtey Hain

Ab Is Sheher Main Thehren K Kooch Ker Jain

Faraz Aao Sitarey Safer K Dekhtey Hain


Khush rahyeh aur apnay khoobsurat kaam say humain nawaztay rahyeh, shukriya :)

[Yaaram]

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Qateel Shifayi ya Ahmad Fraz hain writer is ghazal ke?

[Mani16]

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JO the fire ne likhi hy wo tu faraz ki hy, or woh bhi 1 4m ma fav's, or yaram bhai poetry ka standerd to mera hamesha high raha hy, lekin ye tu parhne wale ki choice pe depend karta hy k wo usay kis angle se leta hy,

[Mani16]

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Thanks Thefire itni detailed reply k liye:)

[*Hala*]

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buht hai umdhaa...