Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

[shakeeel]

Re: Withoutsoul demand

jahan members demand kartay hain vohan bhi is ka link day dia karain takay pata chal jaye is member ki demand poori hoo chuki hai pher ham next member ki demand pay kaam shuru kar dia karain gay :salam:

jee zaroor , next time aisa hi ho ga:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Withoutsoul demand

Buhat hee Khobsurat

[Aania]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah
meraa vajuud hai jalate hue makaa.N kii tarah

bharii bahaar kaa siinaa hai zaKhm zaKhm magar
sabaa ne gaaye hai.n lorii shafiiq man kii tarah

vo kaun thaa jo barahanaa badan chaTTaano.n se
lipaT gayaa thaa kabhii bahr-e-bekaraa.N kii tarah

sakuut-e-dil to jaziiraa hai barf kaa lekin
teraa Khuluus hai suuraj ke saayebaa.N kii tarah

mai.n ik Khvaab sahii aap kii amaanat huu.N
mujhe sambhaal ke rakhiyegaa jism-o-jaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to soch ke vo shaKhs kis qadar thaa bula.nd
jo bichh gayaa tere qadmo.n me.n aasmaa.N kii tarah

bulaa rahaa hai mujhe phir kisii badan kaa basa.nt
guzar na jaaye ye rut bhii kahii.n Khizaa.N kii tarah

lahuu hai nisf sadii kaa jis ke aabagiine me.n
na dekh "Prem" use chashm-e-arGavaa.N kii tarah


me ko ye ghazal bana ke do plz... :cc:

:na::na::na::na:

[.]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

:na::na::na::na:

mujhay kuch alfaaz ki samajh nahi ai hai is main .....main nay inpage pay likh to li hai ab ghalitan deekhoo tum ...pher main is ki designing karoun gee :)

[.]

Aania's demand

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to khul ke baras abr-e-meharabaa.N kii tarah
meraa vajuud hai jalate hue makaa.N kii tarah

bharii bahaar kaa siinaa hai zaKhm zaKhm magar
sabaa ne gaaye hai.n lorii shafiiq man kii tarah

vo kaun thaa jo barahanaa badan chaTTaano.n se
lipaT gayaa thaa kabhii bahr-e-bekaraa.N kii tarah

sakuut-e-dil to jaziiraa hai barf kaa lekin
teraa Khuluus hai suuraj ke saayebaa.N kii tarah

mai.n ik Khvaab sahii aap kii amaanat huu.N
mujhe sambhaal ke rakhiyegaa jism-o-jaa.N kii tarah

kabhii to soch ke vo shaKhs kis qadar thaa bula.nd
jo bichh gayaa tere qadmo.n me.n aasmaa.N kii tarah

bulaa rahaa hai mujhe phir kisii badan kaa basa.nt
guzar na jaaye ye rut bhii kahii.n Khizaa.N kii tarah

lahuu hai nisf sadii kaa jis ke aabagiine me.n
na dekh "Prem" use chashm-e-arGavaa.N kii tarah


me ko ye ghazal bana ke do plz... :cc:

[.]

Re: Aania's demand

:rose

[.]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

http://pegham.plushost.dk/showthread...260#post179260

[Masood]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

madam SEENA alif sey nahin HEY sey hota hai :zuban:

[Masood]

Re: Aania's demand

Shabash Aanchal - bohat achhi designing ki hai dear :)

[.]

Re: Aania's demand

:lpop:

[Masood]

Re: Aania's demand

Good ab main ney dekha hai PEGHAM.COM hi likha karo :)

[.]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

madam SEENA alif sey nahin HEY sey hota hai :zuban:

seena hay say kab say ahoo gia :cc:


yeh silai karhai wala seena hai na to alaf say hoo ga ? koi doosra hai kia ?:khi:

[Aania]

Re: Aania's demand

:lpop:

very nice ... n thnx to make it :) :lpop:

[Aania]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

merey daman main bhi bhar de kuch khushyaan maulaa
tera hi aasra hai terey hi dar pe sawali baney bethey hein

[Aania]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

:) :wk