Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

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Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

aanchal gi aap ne eik ghalti ki hai........diya nahin likhna....diyaaan likhna hain

ooooooooooooop :tauba

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Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

every one has done.....beutifull...............and now no place for me, sorry i am late

ab bhi dhair place hai aap try to kejey :lpop:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

aano hume punjabi nahi aati..
plz is shair ka matlab bata do...
image tu sabhi acche hain..:)

is ki simple c meaning ye hai
Dil darya , samundar se bhi gehra hota hai dil k bhed koi nahin jaanta:)

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

Adaab!!!
Aania , Aanchal and saima Ji. Welldone :thmbup: great work ....:)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

aslaam_u_alikam

aap sab ka behad shukriya sabhi bohat nice hain
thanks alotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

[shakeeel]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

Salam friends.............Lo jee mein bhi aa gaya.

[shakeeel]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

......................................And one more.....................................

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Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

buhat acha banaya hai shakeel :rose


or yeh lafz samandroun hai ham logoo nay samanadar likha howa hai isay pher theek karna parey ga :tauba

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

aslaam_u_Alikam

shukriya shakeel saahib

aanchal jaldi sey theek karo na lafz phir mujhye choose kerna hey

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Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

kar lia :)

[sheem]

Re: Fatimah's Demand ....

hmmm bohat ache banaye hain

good work :phool:

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Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

pegham ki Birthday anqareeb hai , agar aap apnay signature key leye koi card banwana chahtay hain to apna quote is link pay post kar dejeye ham inshallha aap ka farmaish ko zaror poora karain gay :thmbup: birthday walye din aap apna vohi card use kar saktay hain

http://www.pegham.net/showthread.php...154#post121154

[jiya ali]

Re: jiya......... demand

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx shakeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell and all nice membersi think main iss ke qabil tu nahin phir bhi shukriya

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: jiya......... demand

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Sab nay bhot hi bahtreen kya hay khas kar Aanchal nay

Shkleel ka bhi jawab nahi

FeaamnAlalh

[Masood]

Re: Designing Poetry "Aap ki farmaish"

Assalamo allaikum


Mujhey is geet per aik composing chahiye :)

Tu jo nahin hai to kuchh bhi nahin hai
yeh mana keh mehfil jawan hai haseen hai

nigahon mein tu hai, yeh dil jhoomta hai
na'janey muhabbat ki rahon mein kya hai
jo tu hamsafar hai to kuchh gham nahin hai

woh aaein na aaein jami hain nigahein
sitaron ney dekhi hain, jhuk jhuk key rahein
yeh dil bad'guman hai nazar ko yaqin hai