On the verge of life

[*Hala*]

Re: On the verge of life

How Deep...How true...How beautiful, Hard to explain it. very inspierble ..I'd say it should be highlighted on your Popular Posts. You have really neat writing, I cant say any thing absolutely wonderful !!!
Cheers to you that you wrote such piece of beauty . :em:
Be happy always

[Soulmate]

Re: On the verge of life

Its Really great Hala

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Speechless....! Not the Vocabulary counts here
but the feelings Behind the words ..


Oh God

Thank you very much dear sis. Your words are life :D:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: On the verge of life

How Deep...How true...How beautiful, Hard to explain it. very inspierble ..I'd say it should be highlighted on your Popular Posts. You have really neat writing, I cant say any thing absolutely wonderful !!!
Cheers to you that you wrote such piece of beauty . :em:
Be happy always

Dear Hala, I appreciate the way you commented :salam:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: On the verge of life

Its Really great Hala

Abay yeh mein ne likha he :kr::kr::kr:

[fari]

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It's a touchy reading, though I m not that much sensitive. Even so, I still felt the combination of two different state depicted in your reading. Sometimes we cannot be able to express some feelings. However, a chawal like u can do anything.You have stated such feelings smoothly and effectively. I personally prefer to read simple writings which are easily understandable. However, in your case I think you can increase our vocabulary if you explain difficult words as well.

[saraah]

Re: On the verge of life

Hi Allah

iska matlab???:embarasse

[fari]

Re: On the verge of life

iska matlab???:embarasse

is ka matlab humari amri baji sharma gai hian mashriqi pan unper galba paa giya ha aur wasay bhi Sharmana tu amri ka ziwar ha372-haha

[MeemSheenAlif]

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My dear Sha'geedar, writing is an art and I am making an effort to learn it. It sounds you read it ardently. Thank you for your words of appreciation and whereas your second point is concerned let me explain you my philosophy behind it :khi:

hmm...waisi this is the same what i ne imagine kia tha :)
it's same like, what happens when u hit tuning fork...:khi:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: On the verge of life

It's a touchy reading, though I m not that much sensitive. Even so, I still felt the combination of two different state depicted in your reading. Sometimes we cannot be able to express some feelings. However, a chawal like u can do anything.You have stated such feelings smoothly and effectively. I personally prefer to read simple writings which are easily understandable. However, in your case I think you can increase our vocabulary if you explain difficult words as well.

If it is touchy, then it should have touched your gray matter in order to make my difficult words understand :khi:Anyways, I really don't find any unusual word, however you deserve the equal right to highlight your supposed difficult words and I will be there to explain along with the logic behind the use :bwink:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: On the verge of life

iska matlab???:embarasse

Fari told u already :embarasse

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: On the verge of life

hmm...waisi this is the same what i ne imagine kia tha :)
it's same like, what happens when u hit tuning fork...:khi:

So you got a brain. Your tunning forks reminds me the frequencies of 256, 512, 1024 MH :D:

[*Duaa*]

Re: On the verge of life

sensitive feeling, beautifully written:thmbup:.i have no words to apreciate.
i felt like i m in the situation.great work

[saraah]

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Fari told u already :embarasse

haaaaaayeeeeeeen....aj sooraj kidhar se nikla......aap fari k taayeeeeed kr rahay han......fari...........ladoo banto byi.....:khi:
wesay......aap fari k saray ilfaz ki tayeed kr rahay na.....372-shock

[aabi2cool]

Re: On the verge of life

اوہ یار لوکو کوئی مجھے بھی اسکا ترجمہ کرکے دو میرا وی شدت سے جی چاہ رہا ہے منڈ ے کی تریف کروں منڈے کی انگریزی بہت ودیا ہے لیکن صرف لکھنے میں بولتے ہوئے میں نے اسے سنا ہے کانوں کو بالکل بھی بھلا نہیں لگتا مگر ماشاءاللہ سے انگریزی اس کی ٹاپ کلاس کی ہے میں اس کی
اسخوبی سے اکثر جیلس ہوتا ہوں کہ کاش مجھے بھی ایسی انگریجی آجاتی ۔ ۔
جب اتنے سارے لوگوں نے تریف کی ہے تو لازما کچھ اچھا ہی ہوگا میں آئندہ چند دنوں میں مختلف ڈکشنریوں سے اس کا ترجمہ کرکے یہاں پیش کرنے کی کوشش کروں گا
:d: